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Published: 2006-12-29 15:00:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 1151; Favourites: 14; Downloads: 11
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Ok I planned to spend alot of time on this and add details and all, but now that I have the initial sketch drawn I'm discouraged, there's alot of weirdness with proportions and his head doesn't look like its resting naturally on the arm, etc.a little help?
This was going to be called, "The Mighty have fallen" or something better sounding.
Mighty Max and Norman copyright er.. whoever created Mighty Max..
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Sorry,I like detals...
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Yeah it's a very old sketch- I didn't think up a story for this one though. And I never finished it
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Wow, this is really good 
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Yay! Mighty Max! 8D
That was one of the coolest shows ever!
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Really? 
It's a really good sketch!
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I like this because it shows a softer, even nurturing side to Norman which I think exists in the show but is not usually at the forefront of their adventures - it's hard to be totally gentle when you're battling giant eyeballs and all manner of demons, after all!
That said, if you are looking for honest criticism, I think Norman is portrayed as a little beefier in the show - squarer jaw, less gangly arms - also, he has a ponytail down the middle of his back. I think someone else mentioned it, too, but Max's legs are kind of gummy looking. Other than that, I think you're off to a great start - I was really happy to find this sketch.
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Yeah there's alot of proportion problems going on in this one.
Thanks alot!
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Thanks alot, I still didn't finish it!
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Cool!
I've only seen two or three epsiodes of Mighty Max. My cousin, Terry was a big fan of him.
P.S I have a cute picture of Gusto Gummi (from the Gummi Bears) as a cub in my gallery! Come and see it!
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It sure was!
P.S Did you see my picture of Gusto (from The Gummi Bears) as a cub in my gallery yet?
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to help with Max's head, I think Norman's arm curve should be, like...higher up to Max's back-of-head, mabbie? I guess, right now, it looks like Max is kinda supporting his own head a little. Either change Norm's arm thing, or Make Max's head/neck bend slighty more inside to his collarbone...? ^_^; so it'd be more on Norm's biceps...?
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Yeah I see that too, but I was trying to figure out a way to do that w/o messing up Norman's arm.. hmm
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hmm... dunno...
I think his arm length is fine tho (in Norm's left arm) so you probably don't need to change that anyways~
But, Norm's right arm is kind of long in comparison; it should stop more to the middle of his abs, kinda...
and I doubt you'd wanna change/move Max's face (so it would rest more naturally on his arm) since it looks so good but...
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The sketch is pretty good and a good challenging pose! You need a more formed knee on the boy.
Can't wait to see the outcome.
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Thanks, I hope I can make it look a bit better
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I think Norman's arms are a bit too long, Max's elbow should be a little lower, and you should draw his legs either a little higher or in a slightly different pose, like, make a leg in a different perspective than the other or something... Waaah I can't explain myself well!!!!!!
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well that's helpful, but now I have to execute it which I suck at XD
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Don't know the show, but that sure is a good sketch!!! ^^
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Thanks! You can watch it on youtube if u want
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Oh man, I havn't seen those guys in ages!
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Yes yes he does. A spider killed him too.
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XD OMG IT'S MIGHTY MAX... The Polly Pocket For Boys!!!
Mighty Max... Mighty Max... MIGHTY MAAAAAX!!!
I'm not a chicken... I'm a fowel...
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ahaha! every time there are mistakes! 
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can you help? I know I need to fix the man's elbo on the left, and the boy's legs
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of course i want to help but i just suggest somethings! first of all you try to draw with an example. i mean you can try to draw what you like! maybe an apple maybe a model maybe a drawing you decide that. and draw a lot! that's all...
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lol yes but I mean help with this drawing. XD
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Is there any problem with this drawing that you can tell me how to fix?
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the first and the most problem is the big guy's arms looks so long! for now just i said that.
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erm maybe you could move the t-shirt up slightly or move the head using computer software. I dont want you to have to redraw the whole head!
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Um The Sketch looks good but i see Essence of yakko behind the big guy^^
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