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Published: 2012-12-27 02:15:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 542; Favourites: 14; Downloads: 0
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=^=// a page of something that's not going to be continued but i thought you'ed get a kick out of it(and i spent today on it sooo)
Raiko and Rin (purple) belong to me, no stealz
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Comments: 38
yip9 In reply to TakkuNoTori [2012-12-29 15:13:18 +0000 UTC]
Please give an example of their daily duty. What do these Kaminari (sp.?) guys do all day?
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TakkuNoTori In reply to yip9 [2012-12-29 17:22:27 +0000 UTC]
the help raiko maintain the portholes In To the Relm, and discard of any unfavorables, also they like to train with one another. They are members of the strongest gang in the Relm and want to keep it that way, they also cause a lot of trouble in the human world...
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TakkuNoTori In reply to Duke-of-the-sea [2012-12-27 16:44:40 +0000 UTC]
nope ended rather abruptably
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TakkuNoTori In reply to Chardove [2012-12-27 03:47:07 +0000 UTC]
thanks >w👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Chardove In reply to TakkuNoTori [2012-12-27 03:54:33 +0000 UTC]
D: How could you say such a thing?
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Aravil1 [2012-12-27 02:22:24 +0000 UTC]
Raiko looks great. Background, although its simpleness looks very good
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TakkuNoTori In reply to thisthatagain [2012-12-27 02:27:33 +0000 UTC]
i know, i left them there
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thisthatagain In reply to TakkuNoTori [2012-12-27 02:31:23 +0000 UTC]
As a friend, Do you mind some constructive criticism?
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TakkuNoTori In reply to thisthatagain [2012-12-27 02:32:51 +0000 UTC]
no cuz its not going anywhere
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thisthatagain In reply to TakkuNoTori [2012-12-27 02:35:12 +0000 UTC]
I do like the manga page but Rin is missing a word bubble.
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TakkuNoTori In reply to thisthatagain [2012-12-27 02:36:26 +0000 UTC]
the speech bubble was ugly so it got trashed
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thisthatagain In reply to TakkuNoTori [2012-12-27 02:44:36 +0000 UTC]
Maybe you could made it transparent with the drawing perhaps. Like add the effect that Raiko is thinking deeply and she hears Rin slightly in the scene and the transparence shows the audience that its her point of view. If that makes since
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TakkuNoTori In reply to thisthatagain [2012-12-27 03:46:03 +0000 UTC]
no not really, this was just a tester for my mom
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thisthatagain In reply to TakkuNoTori [2012-12-27 03:47:30 +0000 UTC]
What do you mean for your mom?
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TakkuNoTori In reply to thisthatagain [2012-12-27 03:48:41 +0000 UTC]
she wants me to enter a comic to a contest but i wasent sure of the story line so i made her this mock up and she turned it down, well better luck tommarrow
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thisthatagain In reply to TakkuNoTori [2012-12-27 03:51:41 +0000 UTC]
Oh yeah, speaking of which. How did that contest entry go a few months ago. The one you had all of us vote for you?
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TakkuNoTori In reply to thisthatagain [2012-12-27 03:56:09 +0000 UTC]
dident even place, but dats ok, the winner had like 500 votes (lots of friends)
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thisthatagain In reply to TakkuNoTori [2012-12-27 04:05:16 +0000 UTC]
Thats a lot of votes O_O Its still good that you did your best though ^^
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TakkuNoTori In reply to thisthatagain [2012-12-27 16:47:53 +0000 UTC]
yup ^^ im happy with my 50 some votes
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