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Darkrai: Perhaps I should start by RIPPING OUT those feathers you are so fond of?! Hmm? or maybe I should chain you up and make you watch as I RIP the insides out of your admirers?...Screw it lets do both!
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Will: I wish that I could role play battle that Darkrai
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Man, didn't think he'd have a good motive....but here I am.
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Darkrai s sudden mouth is scary... Awesome!
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Let's face it darkrai.......humans have a bad habit of (sorry for my language) fucking shit up
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If by "fucking shit up" you mean "nuclear barraging it with all possible kinds of FUCK" then yes, you are correct.
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So his entire schtick here is because Cresselia's kind assisted the humans in forcing the Darkrai to vanish. Darkrai gets upset that the Cresselia species gets a shrine when Darkrai are demonized for their nightmarish abilities.
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I know how they treat darkri exactly.
not all ghost or dark types are evil you know π
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In some respects I do feel sorry for darkri. It not his fault of his own ability. In truth in is the people fault for what darkri turned into. A little kindness can go a long way. Though since humans treated him as they have I can see why darkri turned out like this. I think it brilliant how well you have made him into an evil darkri and given him a good motive why he like as he is.
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Darkrai, Nightmare Forme. A real waking nightmare.
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I don't see Darkrai as a demon! I love Darkrai! It's one of if not my absolute favorite of Legendary PokΓ©mon!
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Yes! Darkrai love!
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Yeah, Darkrai is awesome!!!!!
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Long live Darkrai!
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Well, guess that sometimes monster are made, not born.
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I don't think your a monster Darkrai. ; = ;
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OK... Wow, that Darkrai indeed looks like a threatening villain. It was before but man, those ghost-like faces here really bring that point home.
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Darkrai is beating the living out of that cresselia!
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Me: Ready Darkrai?
Darkrai: Let's put that sorry excuse for my species in his place!
Me: Focus Blast!
Wild Darkrai dodged it!
Me: You started to monologue...
Darkrai: Overconfidence is the downfall of evil...
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Tell me you're going to use the always classic "you monologue too long" trick! I just know Ross is sitting there behind him charging a Thunderbolt!
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Excellent art and a very creepy villain monologue. Great job, Tammy.
However! I believe you should change "Time to fall for eternal sleep" to "Time to fall to eternal sleep" and "You and your sisters went on their side" to "You and your sisters took their side." I'm sure those are the correct ways to say those sentences.
Do you still have a proofreader?
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Hey there, SeriousJupiter ~
I meant to tell Tammy to fix the dialogue for "Time to fall to eternal sleep", but I got all distracted with writing lengthy descriptions.
However! I didn't think of that latter statement, "You and your sisters took their side.".
For now, I believe the dialogue works fine just as it is. I don't want to have Tammy fuss over the dialogue too much, because I know she's busy with Patreon and personally, I feel it's more important she puts priority in completing commissions for her clients and whatnot.Β
Also, I admit, I wasn't in the best mood when I was proofreading this page. But I notice I've been making more mistakes since I would proofread the day before she'd post the page and right when I was about to go to school. However, I've been feeling better after spending time with friends this week, getting some daunting school assignments finally done, and I'm looking forward to spring break next week; I'm not as scatter-brained as I've been feeling weeks prior. So now, I'm going to do what I can to change my routine, so I can give myself a better chance at more effective proofreading.
Anyway, thank you for taking note of those sentences. I'll need to do better in the future. And of course, you're always welcome to note any mistakes, too (you're more than welcome to tell me).Β
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I understand. It would be nice to see this page fixed, but it's not a big deal. Good luck with your future proofreading.
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I don't think he (Darkrai) wants the MLP friendship wins ending...
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Ah, the good old villain monologue time...with that you've sealed your own fate Darkrai...I hadn't thought about if there was more than one legendry though, might have to rethink that.
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