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taranathicus — who knows
Published: 2005-09-26 03:52:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 137; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 17
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me and my pixie queentouching but not touching
stopped at the fingertips by a wall beyond shattering
i built this wall
out of my doubts and fears
my worries and woes
why dont i tear it down
why cant i tear it down
it is because my doubts and fears mark me all the more as a mortal
not fit for my queen, less than she and the difference marks me
i fear for her, and that fear holds me back stronger than bonds of steel
a dry voice in my head cautions me, always telling me what is good and right
i killed that voice, i dont want whats right, or even what is just
i want just one moment of true bliss with my queen
if her splendor causes my very being to be rent into a thousand pieces
so be it
walls need to come down
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Comments: 3
i love it. i think the open structure of it is perfect for it.
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thank you, yeah it just totally popped into my head and so down it went, ive never really ben able to bring myself to use any sort of structure beyond what comes naturally in my poetry
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