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Description page 7 of the final issue of my dragonball bleach one-piece naruto crossover manga.
(reads right to left)

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issue 2 [link]
issue 3[link]
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Comments: 23

omnimon11 [2013-04-07 23:57:42 +0000 UTC]

"Juken!"? That's it from Hinata? No "Juho: Soshiken!"?

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TomNamikaze In reply to omnimon11 [2013-10-12 15:23:16 +0000 UTC]

This manga was doneaccording to the anime. The author didn't want to spoil anime-only watchers. By the time this manga was made, Juho: Soshiken (Along with pretty much the whole Pain arc) hadn't aired yet.

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omnimon11 In reply to TomNamikaze [2013-10-17 12:38:00 +0000 UTC]

Ah.

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joeynyeh [2012-08-26 22:47:53 +0000 UTC]

yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah yamcha's doing something awesome
he is by far my favorite human

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kiber66 [2012-08-15 22:04:30 +0000 UTC]

I was like Getsuga? no its gatsuga OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOooooooooooooooohhhhhhh

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yoshter135 [2011-09-29 00:54:45 +0000 UTC]

btw u forgot that at this time, usopp used kabuto not his first slingshot

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thomas106 [2011-04-01 01:51:45 +0000 UTC]

is there a translation of this? cause i cant understand anything here

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T-R-L [2010-01-21 00:58:01 +0000 UTC]

Nice panel design. Good job on the action too.

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TemBrook [2010-01-20 22:29:14 +0000 UTC]

There better not be like five pages of this.
>_>

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taresh In reply to TemBrook [2010-01-20 23:32:58 +0000 UTC]

and if there is?

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TemBrook In reply to taresh [2010-01-20 23:47:39 +0000 UTC]

...There is, isn't there?
Dammet.

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taresh In reply to TemBrook [2010-01-21 00:04:56 +0000 UTC]

theres another 3, but not consecutivly. would u rather more spread out pages? that would mean less of other stuff going on coz there's only 20s pages total to this issue

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TemBrook In reply to taresh [2010-01-21 00:09:49 +0000 UTC]

Pages like this are really just filler. :/ But I guess it comes with so many characters. Mebe you should have cut it down to three our four per series.

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taresh In reply to TemBrook [2010-01-21 00:17:32 +0000 UTC]

how is it filler when all these chars are making a contribution to the fight? Just fitting it all onto a few pages instead of loads.

it's essentially no different from having,say a shot of goku firing a spirit bomb or naruto rasenganing someone, but this way 8 ppl might see there fav char doing something

the whole doujinshi was orginally going to just be ichigo goku naruto and luffy but i figured id cater to more ppl's fav chars and make the series longer. which in turn upped it from the 4 issues i originally intended to 8.

Cant plz everyone i suppose oh well

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TemBrook In reply to taresh [2010-01-21 00:58:57 +0000 UTC]

I'm just saying universally that too many characters begins to ruin a series. For example there are many fighters in Dragonball Z but all of their fights are shown 1-2 at a time. And don't go saying "Well it was all those Earthlings vs Nappa and Vegeta" I mean that it wasn't "everybody attack at once" it was "Krillin does this. He manages to kill... Oh but this once survived and attacked this... etc." It was linear. And it worked better.
I'm not saying your series is terrible. I'm trying to say that having to many characters doing so many things at once is terrible.
Sorry for the rant. :/
I hope you take this as constructive criticism. :3

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Lynx1712 [2010-01-20 21:05:23 +0000 UTC]

el directo? xD

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taresh In reply to Lynx1712 [2010-01-20 21:35:03 +0000 UTC]

yup one of chad's few named moves hehe

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Lynx1712 In reply to taresh [2010-01-21 17:01:28 +0000 UTC]

xD

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OmegaMorph [2010-01-20 20:53:24 +0000 UTC]

Gah! I've been used to the dubs so long that I don't got the japanese names down in my head. Shane on me..

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moviegadget [2010-01-20 18:51:52 +0000 UTC]

Usopp isn't using Kabuto

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SchattenLotus [2010-01-20 18:32:33 +0000 UTC]

El directo!

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Lecktmich [2010-01-20 17:51:25 +0000 UTC]

Ishidas Bow has a name...

O_0"

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SuperSaiyanCrash [2010-01-20 17:24:00 +0000 UTC]

Cooooolllll!!!!

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