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Published: 2013-04-21 15:44:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 2831; Favourites: 55; Downloads: 16
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THE OBLIVIONThe story of a young red whelp, Targon Ghanzir, who risks his life searching for his missing brother, Iraskor Razor, in the mysterious island.
Story
Targon does not want to stop until he has to find his brother Iraskor. As the apparition is gone again quickly, he proceeds into the deeper chambers. He remembers the scorpion that almost killed him. When he crawls into the next cavern, he finds many caves, making him confused to find another right path, while that "helper" is not shown up. However, as he searches around the area, he notices a cave with a slightly bright glow from it. He knows that the glowing cave means the daylight from outside.
He quickly gallops to it. The more he goes, the brighter the light approaches. He stops by the wall to find an exit on the higher steep. He climbs the steep until he reaches the final underground journey: the surface.
Amazed from his eyes, he can see the wind rustling over his face, the beauty of forest areas and the grasses that enshroud the ground. The afternoon sun glitters from streams he saw from the landscape, and the thick clouds slowly drift through clearer skies. He escapes the hole to continue his journey...
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Comments: 7
Rebeccannoying [2013-04-22 19:53:32 +0000 UTC]
I love the atmosphere presented in this comic
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TargonRedDragon In reply to Rebeccannoying [2013-05-04 04:02:42 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, ^^
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TargonRedDragon In reply to TheImaginautDragon [2013-04-22 05:09:08 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, it's a dragon version of Limbo where the young boy plays the protagonistic role ^^
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TheImaginautDragon In reply to TargonRedDragon [2013-04-22 18:45:47 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I hit it on the dot! ...this would make a good parallel game to limbo.
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SymbolHero [2013-04-21 22:06:54 +0000 UTC]
This comic looks really nice man, itΒ΄s almost like a perfect story board ;D
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TargonRedDragon In reply to SymbolHero [2013-04-22 05:08:44 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much
Ah, okay. Kinda a storyboard looking in the animation studios ^^"
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