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I can't decide how I feel about this(warning large file size)
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It is truly a beautiful piece of work. However, I have some mistakes/things to work on I would like to point out. Yes, I see you did this in 2013, and I would recommend trying to draw it again if you like it.
1. The balloon is misshapen. Whether this is intentional or unintentional, it catches my eye... but for the wrong reason. I would recommend studying it more to make sure you get it as symmetrical as possible.
2. The clouds lack detail. I don't know what program/software you used, but it may just be that, I don't know. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w… " width="15" height="15" alt="
3. (Another balloon one, I know. I'm sorry.) The balloon kind of just looks copied and pasted into the background. For this one, I am not sure how to fix it, but maybe try to use less white around the edges?
On the BRIGHT side,
I love the stars, they truly add to the look. You have also mastered how a regular sky does darken at the... top, guess. Crosshatching, something I have never mastered, looks excellent to me. (I love your signature, by the way.) The stars really do make the whole piece stand out, and there aren't just tons of them all over the art. This is a very nice piece and I would love to see is redrawn again.
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Thank you for taking so much time to give me such wonderful feedback! (yes this is a terribly old piece) I really appreciate it! I think redrawing it could be a lot of fun, for sure!
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Looks like a lot of fun to redraw lol
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This is absolutely MAGNIFICANT!I love how the cloud almost seem like a mist, and the style of the ballon makes it feel so real! the stars look lke you could just reach up and grab them. the faded colors of blue are beautiful too! bak to the balloo. the i love the awesomeness of the colors and shading you did too! the read and orange go together really well!!! the only thing that needs a slight touch up is the clouds. you might want to make them a bit fluffier to give it more or an impact. nice job though!
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i think this was absolutely beautiful it makes me speechless and funny thing it goes perfectly with the song im listening like the feeling of the painting puts you in an inspring mod like the way the balloon is higher than the clouds it makes you fell you can go higher than the clouds, like you can never stop you can always keep going and makes you smile to believe you can do anything. you know what, i think im going to do something i have been trying to do for a very long time... thank you so much! 
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I'm sorry I never saw this reply sooner, because it was on the critique! I'm so so happy that my picture has inspired you, that means a lot to me! 
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Thanks so much! The critique is much appreciated! Thanks for your time!
And thankyou for the compliments!
Yes I was having some difficulty with the clouds
I just gotta keep practicing them
I love drawing clouds but it can be quite difficul and I envy the people who can draw clouds well!
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yeah XD i cant do clouds either.
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Aww thank you so much!!
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It looks great!!
I be jellin over your backgroud skillz. XD
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