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Tattered-Dreams — Cloak of Stars

Published: 2012-11-16 22:59:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 1728; Favourites: 76; Downloads: 0
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So...this horse doesn't exactly exist. Yet. It's Poe all over again XD, but with a few key differences.

Namely: I haven't confirmed this horse's parents, I know only a bit of the personality and so far haven't decided on a name. Or gender - but I'm leaning towards Stallion. Vote in the poll on my profile if you have strong opinions either way .

So I'm sorting out the breeding at the minute. The stud is a pretty sure bet now, providing his owner approves of the chosen mare, but I still have to confirm the Dam. That aside, help with this one would be great! Personalities usually come to me as I write and draw my horses, so I'm not too worried about that, but I'm really, really having an issue with names.

For me, a Friesian has to have a unique, almost fantasy-esque name, usually spelled strangely, and In the back of my mind I can see the perfect name in a sort of thick mist, but don't know what it is. Any suggestions are greatly appreciated

Names along the lines I've been thinking are: Avalon, Adalynne, Bagheera, Valkyrie, Alkhana, Alerio/Alario...

I'm trying to steer away from recogniseable Greek/Roman/Latin names (ie, Gods) and for some reason I've been going for names starting with A - but if you have any unique suggestions - I'd love to hear them!

EDIT: I just found this, which works nicely as the real-life counterpart -> [link]



That said - this painting itself was just some fun. At least that's how it started. It was going to be a speed paint with a fairly basic/cartoon style - the lines were actually more gesture sketch than lines - and then my perfectionism kicked in and this happened.

The girl is in her late teens, and other than that she likes dressing in vagely 'gypsy' style clothing, I don't know much about her. I figure she's not an actual gypsy because her tack is pretty fancy XD.

Material info: The shirt is a light cotton and synthetic blend, so its got a smoother/shinier texture while still being durable. The neckline is elasticated, the shirt generally form-fitting with loose pirate 3/4 sleeves; the remainer of them are fitted to strap beneath the gloves. The gloves are brushed leather, archers guards - they cover the middle and fourth fingers for drawing a bow but also work for riding. The corset is steel boned with silk covering and laces up in the back. The skirt is two layers with a cotton petticoat beneath. The darker top layer is made from pure cotton (keeping it heavy for riding purposes) while the lower layer is a cotton-poly blend, to make it a bit lighter.

Overall - considering I can't even remember the last time I drew a Friesian, and definitely the first time I've attempted one digitally - I really like this. The background was speedy, but I did have fun with the stars, and I had a lot of fun drawing the feathers. That mane and tail just about killed me! I had no idea how to do it, so much of it was a guessing game, but I'm happy now its done ^^. I really like the girl's hair, too... The bits that I'm a little annoyed with are the front legs - something just looks off, somehow - and the shading on the lower half of the skirt. It looks stiff, I think.

Stopping now

Taken several hours over the last few days, working here and there.
As usual, no refs at all - hence some of the issues with pose and shading
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Comments: 59

Tattered-Dreams In reply to ??? [2013-03-25 22:13:46 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much Even now I still have a fondness for it ^^

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sprite-light [2013-01-28 08:11:26 +0000 UTC]

This is so amazing you did a fantastic job on the horse it's like perfect and the human is perfect and I love her dress so much you are an amazing artist and I'm so happy to be one of your watchers

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Tattered-Dreams In reply to sprite-light [2013-01-28 08:38:01 +0000 UTC]

Yikes; thank you so much for the kind words

But I have to say, the horse isn't perfect, even if I do like the finished piece (and I love Laila's dress, too). There are artists far more amazing than me, and I still have a ways to go, but I'm glad you like watching my stuff

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sprite-light In reply to Tattered-Dreams [2013-01-28 08:43:03 +0000 UTC]

No worries

To me it is haha I really want you to design a dress for my main character but I don't know if you will or not. I will always support your art during your journey

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Tattered-Dreams In reply to sprite-light [2013-01-28 09:28:21 +0000 UTC]

Hmmm, I don't really design dresses for other people, and if I did, it would be on commission and would cost a fair bit. I'll have to get back to you on that one.

But there's nothing to stop you designing your own costumes

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sprite-light In reply to Tattered-Dreams [2013-01-29 00:08:01 +0000 UTC]

Ah okay well I will keep my eyes open

I have designs in my head I just can't put them down in paper

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Tattered-Dreams In reply to sprite-light [2013-01-29 00:09:01 +0000 UTC]

Practice helps there

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sprite-light In reply to Tattered-Dreams [2013-01-29 01:39:44 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I just don't know where to start

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Tattered-Dreams In reply to sprite-light [2013-01-29 10:26:17 +0000 UTC]

I rarely do, either; I make it up as I go along, mostly

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sprite-light In reply to Tattered-Dreams [2013-01-29 10:58:51 +0000 UTC]

Ah okay

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DovieCaba [2013-01-21 12:46:23 +0000 UTC]

This is so pretty!
I love how you do wavy hair! And the horse's feathering is amazing as well!!
Not to mention how you draw people and horses...Yay for finding new artists to follow!

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Tattered-Dreams In reply to DovieCaba [2013-01-21 13:02:14 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

I kind of tried something new for the hair in this, since I had no idea how I'd manage it, but I do like how it came out ^^ Feathering like this is always fun

Thanks again; I really appreciate your comments and following

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DovieCaba In reply to Tattered-Dreams [2013-01-21 13:09:53 +0000 UTC]

She reminds me of Belle off of Beauty and the Beast

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Tattered-Dreams In reply to DovieCaba [2013-01-21 13:18:56 +0000 UTC]

I didn't think of that - but she kinda does XD

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MissDudette [2013-01-09 21:08:23 +0000 UTC]

Wow, love these possible new characters. Friesians are gorgous devils, and meknows you've captured that gorgeousness. SO AWESOME.

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Tattered-Dreams In reply to MissDudette [2013-01-09 21:17:09 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

Laila and Alerio became characters in a short story, and I held off getting a Friesian at Lakewood, but one day, hopefully! I do love them, and I'm really glad you think I captured them okay ^^

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MissDudette In reply to Tattered-Dreams [2013-01-09 21:41:56 +0000 UTC]

Great names for the two.

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Tattered-Dreams In reply to MissDudette [2013-01-09 21:50:31 +0000 UTC]

It took a while, but they fitted

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LeavingNeverland [2012-12-23 12:00:39 +0000 UTC]

JUST realised that's not Becca xD WOOPS! (thank you 'paying attention to detail and reading artist comments') Welp, whoever she is, she has beautiful hair! haha

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Tattered-Dreams In reply to LeavingNeverland [2012-12-23 12:02:19 +0000 UTC]

Haha, no problem (my comments do run on a bit XD)

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LeavingNeverland [2012-12-23 11:58:36 +0000 UTC]

There's too much about this picture that I love, so I'm only gonna point out one thing: the hair is brilliant! On Becca and the androgynous mystery horse! lol

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Tattered-Dreams In reply to LeavingNeverland [2012-12-23 12:01:46 +0000 UTC]

Thank you ^^ The androgynous (so true!) mystery horse remains a mystery, since I decided to hold off on breeding him/her/it. And the girl is actually a strange character not in my HARPG called Laila (just to confuse people ) I've drawn her in another picture since, actually - but I do really love how her hair came out! So much fun had there

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LeavingNeverland In reply to Tattered-Dreams [2012-12-23 13:10:27 +0000 UTC]

Lol! So, in fact, since both are non-existant in your harpg universe, it's a picture of two ghosts ._. GASP! Well, they look great, regardless of being not real-ish and not born-ish!

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Tattered-Dreams In reply to LeavingNeverland [2012-12-23 13:20:43 +0000 UTC]

Yes! Two ghosties is them. They are. Whatever (though surprisingly solid looking...)

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LeavingNeverland In reply to Tattered-Dreams [2012-12-25 10:35:46 +0000 UTC]

Lol! Who needs to English good when doodle of lovely? xDD

... Maybe they're really zombies ._. But that's not possible since they were never born... unborn undead zombies? Would that be unzombies then? Good lord knows.

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Tattered-Dreams In reply to LeavingNeverland [2012-12-25 11:00:58 +0000 UTC]

Bahahaha!

"Unzombies" H3ck knows what they are! We'll go with Unzombies, just coz that's awesome, and no one will have a clue what we're talking about

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LeavingNeverland In reply to Tattered-Dreams [2012-12-25 11:11:44 +0000 UTC]

lol! Unzombies it is then! A very merry unzombies TOOOOOOO A-YOOOOOOOU

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Tattered-Dreams In reply to LeavingNeverland [2012-12-25 11:31:34 +0000 UTC]

hehe; and to you, too ^^

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sobreiros [2012-11-21 18:03:39 +0000 UTC]

I really love those archer's gloves! And that sky is gorgeous. This all in general is so pretty. Lovely horse, I can't wait to see it competing! c:

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Tattered-Dreams In reply to sobreiros [2012-11-21 18:18:18 +0000 UTC]

Me too! XD I wish I owned a pair...

And thank you ^^ Literally scrible with a scattered dot brush As for the horse, he/she is still a bit of a dilemma, and still doesn't have a confirmed gender, but when it does, it'll be predominantly a costume horse - everything from faeries to knight's colours

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TavieTastic [2012-11-17 20:38:36 +0000 UTC]

Love this
the hair is amazing!
I think maybe the front legs look slightly off because they get a tad too thin around the knee?
But I just love this! I think it should be a mare... I don't know why

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Tattered-Dreams In reply to TavieTastic [2012-11-17 20:43:43 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! (I love the hair, too )

And you could be right there, about the knees. Mainly I just think the forelegs as a whole look too 'fixed' or stiff somehow, but I didn't notice the knees til you mentioned it. Thanks ^^

Lol, you're in the minority if you want a mare - stallion is really winning the votes so far, but I'm still undecided (some of my more favoured names work better for a mare...)

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TavieTastic In reply to Tattered-Dreams [2012-11-17 20:59:00 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome.

No I think the whole image looks quite fluid really. I only looked at the front legs because you felt something was off, and that was all that struck me

hehe well I'd go for mare I think... there aren't enough mares around in HAPRG. for some reason I feel there are generally more stallions? or that people compete their stallions more and the mares are just baby machines

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Tattered-Dreams In reply to TavieTastic [2012-11-17 22:06:58 +0000 UTC]

Well, as long as its just me who thinks its off, that's fine XD.

I don't even know how I'd begin to work out if there's more mares than stallions! I just know that Lakewood has more mares (if you include fillies). And ironically, my mares compete far more than my stallions; Mossy's been doing the outlaw trail whilst carrying Poe, even. In some ways, the personality that's slowly shaping works more with a stallion, but I may just have to see how it goes :\

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ElreniaGreenleaf [2012-11-17 16:09:37 +0000 UTC]

Oh she's gorgeous! ^^ I've got a Friesian stallion I have yet to introduce to the world of HARPG...

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Tattered-Dreams In reply to ElreniaGreenleaf [2012-11-17 16:30:08 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! And lol - you're with the minority if you're wanting him/her to be a mare Its looking like it'll be a stallion at this rate

But what? You have a Friesian waiting in the wings?? You gotta draw him

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ElreniaGreenleaf In reply to Tattered-Dreams [2012-11-17 17:40:38 +0000 UTC]

But, but, mares are awesome! ;D

Indeed! I have LOADS to introduce - I just need to get my arse in gear and start drawing again, lol

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Tattered-Dreams In reply to ElreniaGreenleaf [2012-11-17 17:44:39 +0000 UTC]

They are - and I prefer mares. (In fact, some of my names I think would work better for a mare) but I already have more females than males and something about the personality that's slowly forming might work better as a male...

But I'm undecided, hence why I asked in a poll - and so far Stallion is winning

YUS - more art! Straight to fifth gear!

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ElreniaGreenleaf In reply to Tattered-Dreams [2012-11-17 17:57:03 +0000 UTC]

Heh, ignore both and make it a gelding.

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Tattered-Dreams In reply to ElreniaGreenleaf [2012-11-17 18:35:55 +0000 UTC]

Lol!

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Madalyion [2012-11-17 09:13:00 +0000 UTC]

That's amazing! Love that dress and pose and hair

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Tattered-Dreams In reply to Madalyion [2012-11-17 10:31:16 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I do like the hair, too ^^

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EquineLover12 [2012-11-17 00:49:17 +0000 UTC]

Betelgeuse! You should name him Betelgeuse! It's perfect, with the starry sky and all!

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Tattered-Dreams In reply to EquineLover12 [2012-11-17 08:29:18 +0000 UTC]

I'll add it to the list, but I'm not sold - he's being so difficult XD

Thanks for suggesting!!

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EquineLover12 In reply to Tattered-Dreams [2012-11-21 01:24:14 +0000 UTC]

No prob!

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Zephyrra [2012-11-17 00:46:06 +0000 UTC]

JEE. This is a freaking beautiful animal. I WANT. *grabby hands*

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Tattered-Dreams In reply to Zephyrra [2012-11-17 08:28:45 +0000 UTC]

THANKS! and lol - can't have. Mine

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Zephyrra In reply to Tattered-Dreams [2012-11-17 14:17:18 +0000 UTC]

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Tattered-Dreams In reply to Zephyrra [2012-11-17 14:19:05 +0000 UTC]

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Secret-Assasin-Emery [2012-11-16 23:53:58 +0000 UTC]

their hair!!!

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