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Tattered-Dreams — How Far We've Come

Published: 2012-09-26 14:00:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 2637; Favourites: 48; Downloads: 0
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Stable: Lakewood Farm
Horse Number: 1
Horse Name: Kiwi
Entry: Optional

Storyline:
1. Mandatory: First Meeting
2. Optional: The First Steps
3. Optional: Interlude - Things for the Future
4. Optional: Breakthrough: You are Here
5. Optional: Building Trust
6. Mandatory: Mishap - Halter Training
7. Optional: Progression
8. Optional: Mishap - Early Saddle Sessions
9. Mandatory: Backing
10. Optional: Mounting Up
11. Mandatory: Flat Training
12. Optional: Jump training
13. Optional: Christmas Hack
14. Optional: Kaimanawa Hack
15. Optional: Beach/water riding
16. Optional: The Future



This one was hard to work out. Getting a horse to tolerate your presence is very different to getting one to actively interact with you. But I think I've done it. Or rather, Alec has.

Explanations at the end. Tatty is hugely sorry for the mile long story, but lots had to happen here. Hope you enjoy anyway!



Leaves crunched underfoot as Alec strode out to the Circle. Autumn was sweeping in fast, and though the trees and hedgerows were still thick, the leaves were becoming brittle as they turned to gold, copper and scarlet. It was still fairly early morning with shadows reaching across the grass and a slight bite to the air.

Kiwi was grazing at the back of the round paddock, having tucked herself into the shelter of the hedgerow that curled around one side of the fence-line. It had taken her several days to settle down in the much smaller pasture, once they’d gotten her moved. But it was necessary.

With everyone pitching in – including Peanut with some latent herding skills – Kiwi had been corralled from the Meadow into the Circle in just three hours. She’d been jumpy; taking off in mad circles whenever the barn door slammed, or one of the chickens let out a stream of angry chatter. The Circle was too small for her and this fence had been tested more than the meadow’s for almost two solid days before she gave it up as a lost cause and hid in the hedgerow.

But the plan Alec had set in motion started to show signs of working.

It had been a week and two days since she’d been moved, and the flighty races around the fence had stopped altogether, though she still spooked on occasion. But that wasn’t all. The Circle ensured that Kiwi had a front row seat every time one of the other horses was led to a field, or to the Temple. And her inquisitive nature had begun to take over, until she’d been venturing closer to the open fence line, quite calmly, to watch the peculiar goings on.

With her curiosity taking the place of her fear once more, Alec resumed his old timetable. He’d sit in the field, or on the fence and do various chores while she grazed in the corner, or eyed him warily from a carefully measured distance. She would watch him brush dirt from rugs, make phone calls to the farrier, clean various pieces of tack and once play quietly on a harmonica.

Chess found that one hilarious. Alec had been forced to explain his mother had wanted the flute, and he’d tried to get a set of bagpipes, just to tick her off, but when he figured that might annoy him, too, he settled for an instrument his mum didn’t consider ‘proper’. That only made Chess laugh harder.

“Morning, Kiwi,” Alec called out to her as he hopped over the fence and went to settle under the tree. Today was the start of a new game; he just had to see which way she’d take it.

She looked up at him, waiting until he was sitting before snorting and lowering her head back to the grass. There was a new burr in her mane, and Alec figured she’d stuck her head into the hedge and gotten it tangled, but getting it out would have to wait. Other than that, and thanks to the continued sprinkler system and hosepipe, she was relatively clean – only that would have to stop soon, too, before it became too cold.

Before she’d been moved from Long Meadow, she’d called out to him, as though questioning why he chose to leave her, and since then, she seemed to make a habit of it, though she never appeared to care when he turned up. Just three days ago, after settling into the Circle, she’d begun calling again when he stood to leave, but he’d never pressed for more.

Now that she was unafraid, it was time to work with her curiosity.

Alec sat with her for an hour before standing slowly. Kiwi stopped eating and looked up, the predictable faint whicker only just discernible over the crunching of leaves he’d disturbed again.

He turned to her. When she continued to look at him with soft eyes, her back and neck relaxed, he took a step in her direction.

Her head lifted, and her ears pricked forwards, nostrils flaring with interest, although her weight rocked back instinctually. He took a deep breath – he was really winging it here. Step forward again and risk a freak out? Or step away and risk moving too slow?

It didn’t take much. He liked to press his luck, but Kiwi was in a class of her own and the fallout at this stage just wasn’t worth it.

Letting out his breath in a rush, he stepped back again, preparing to turn for the gate. The noise she made this time was a snort that almost sounded indignant. Alec glanced back, freezing on the spot.

He wished he could remember what Chess had been saying the other day about reading personalities in faces – bits of it flashed through his mind, but he couldn’t form anything solid to work with. All he had to go on was what he already knew – she was smart and quick, if a little prone to initial panics but for all that – once she’d settled, she was a pleasant mix of bold and tentative.

While he kept an eye on her, uncertain which way to move, she tossed her head once, and took a tiny step towards him. He waited, but she didn’t step again. Biting his tongue and deciding to stuff it, he turned back for her and stepped once again in her direction.

Her ears swivelled, head lifting and she rocked. Alec took another step, so small he practically shuffled. She took off, but the reaction was delayed, as though for a second, she’d considered just staying.

Alec realised he was holding his breath, and while getting his lungs to cooperate again, realised something.

She was trotting away, her stride loose and free with an ear still tuned in on him. She wasn’t panicked or scared and he’d seen Matches and Toeki do exactly the same thing when Becca and Austin went to fetch them in.

Alec laughed. It wasn’t exactly what he’d intended, but as long as she was viewing it as a game, that worked for him. Keeping his body language as passive as possible, he began walking behind her. He kept slow and quiet, his head down and shoulders curved inward, and she remained elusive, pacing against the rail several yards ahead, ears tuned in.

He looked up a few times to watch her, and when her ears began to wander, he knew she was growing bored. Quickly, he did an about turn and walked off in the opposite direction.

A hesitant whinny broke through the air and Alec glanced back to see she’d stopped when he’d left her and was again facing him in puzzlement. Steeling himself, he resumed his walk.

Hoofbeats followed, and another snort sounded. She’d given up some ground, but refused to come any closer, a foreleg pawing at the grass.

But she’d come after him, so he acquiesced. He turned back to her and stepped forwards, slowly until – this time after three steps – she turned and trotted away. Smiling brilliantly at the same time the sun was high enough to finally break over the dense woodland behind the Farm and bathe the fields, Alec followed on.



Three days later, he trundled one of the old wheelbarrows down to the gate.

Kiwi, stood the other side waiting for him snorted and trotted away when he let himself in. The wheelbarrow was packed with an assortment of yard oddities – an orange traffic cone, a flower pot, an empty bag of hi-fi, a tangled hay net and one of the flexible rubber dishes that everyone had their morning feeds in. Under that was a folded blanket, Kiwi’s rope halter and a severed piece of old hosepipe.

Methodically, Alec began to lay the items out around the paddock, being sure to leave one end free, so Kiwi felt she had somewhere safe to retreat to.

But it proved unnecessary.

Though she observed him littering her field, she walked around the fence line, her ears flicking towards him and her expression puzzled, but not wary. And when he sat back under the tree on the blanket and pulled out the harmonica from his hoodie pocket, she hesitated only a moment before venturing tentatively towards the traffic cone.

Alec watched her pick her way through the obstacles, occasionally starting and jerking her head up, but eventually butting her head at several things comfortably. This was the second day with the assortment of things, and she'd quickly gathered that the strange textures and bright colours posed no threat. So he stood and they began their new game, something else she was gathering quickly.

He followed her around, no longer waiting for her attention to wander before waltzing off on his own. She was now content to follow him for short periods, but would stop when he did. The carefully measured distances she kept between them grew smaller, though, and Alec had the feeling she was coming to accept him as her new herd.

They played cat and mouse leisurely around the paddock, watching the others get on with turning out, catching the goats and excercising the horses. It was nearing lunch time and Alec had put all the items back in the wheelbarrow when Chess approached the gate.

"Hey," she called out. Kiwi looked up, but she had become used to people yelling now. "How's it going?"

Alec ambled over to her, Kiwi pacing behind him but stopping before she neared the gate.

"Good," He said. "I just want her to make the first move, so I know she's ready, then we can move on. She's come a long way."

Chess smiled. "She has. You, too. You're getting better at reading her - I remember you sitting out in the field when she first arrived, bored out of your mind."

Alec smirked. "Figured I had to catch a clue at some point. Hey, I have a question. You were talking about reading faces a few days ago."

Chess smiled, "I remember. I learned about it when I was trying to understand Aphie. I'll tell you about her some time, but for now..." She leant forward on the fence, green eyes beginning to study the Kaimanawa with new intent.

"Okay...see her ears? They're curved into points, which suggests intelligence, but they're set quite close - so she could be a little unpredictable. Her eyes are quite round and big which implies she's thoughtful and affectionate - but they're set low, too, so she's potentially a little timid."

Alec stared at Kiwi, and she gazed back, unaware she was being profiled. He could see it - her intelligence was clear in her eyes, but it was something else to hear it was written into her face.

Chess continued, "She's got a bit of a dished head, and a fairly broad space between her eyes. The dished profile is another indicator of intelligence, but the space between her eyes suggests she's loyal, too. She's got a groove under her chin - like Tessa, Matches and Karma all do."

"Stubborn?" Alec guessed, smirking.

"Potentially, yes," Chess agreed, amused at the expression Alec made when he realised he was right. "Then there's her nostrils - Quite open, suggesting she can be quite bold."

Alec watched as the mare seemed to grow bored of watching them and turned to graze.

"How'd I do?" Chess asked.

Alec shrugged. "Sounds about right, though some of its new. You have to teach me this."

"I've got a book," the blonde girl replied, taking her weight off the gate. "Come up to the house for lunch and I'll show you. We'll get you to profile the other horses for practice."

Alec gathered the wheelbarrow up and said his goodbyed before following Chess back to the yard. Knowing some more about Kiwi would definitely help when it came time to really begin working with her.

...

And the time to really begin arrived just four days later, early on a Sunday evening. Just like a week ago, the shadows were stretched across the ground and leaves caught in the blades of grass, but it was warmer, the sun already up at the later hour.

Kiwi was waiting at the gate and tossed her head when he walked towards her. They played their game, Kiwi now trotting after him as he jogged away, until Alec retreated to the fence.

He'd found an old saddle in the tack room and it looked like it might fit Kiwi, so he was cleaning it up in preparation. So intent was he in scrubbing at the mildew on the worn leather that he almost yelled out in surprise when something pushed into his side, just below his ribs and almost shoved him clean off the fence.

He looked up, startled, to see Kiwi, standing as close as she ever had, her muzzle pushed out to him. He half turned to her and she trotted playfully out of reach to stand at the gate barely a metre away with an expectant look in her eyes.

But that was what he'd been waiting for.

She'd reached out first, and now the games could really start.



Its still obvious I've never gentled a wild horse before, isn't it? XD

Anyway...I think most of that is self explanatory.

Alec plays a harmonica; Kiwi was moved to the Circle - you can see it on Lakewood's Map - so she got some interaction with everyone else; Maybe they're moving too slow/not doing it right, but I think a lot of this is guesswork anyway, and there's never just one way to do something.

As for the profiling - I didn't make it up. I've been a fan of Lauren Brooke's Heartland book series for years and that was when I was first introduced to the concept. Various things about a horse's face indicate the personality they may express. All the things Chess said about Kiwi are features taken from a Heartland special edition called 'Amy's Journal'. The whole topic of profiling horses in this way I've always found fascinating, so I had to throw it in.

The boring bit is almost over, people! The fun starts here!

All done on Photoshop and it took around a day and a half to complete.
No references other than my own Farm map for the background.
Art and characters copyright to *Tattered-Dreams
Kiwi's design copyright to *LeavingNeverland
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Comments: 30

bella12861 [2013-07-14 20:01:58 +0000 UTC]

aww love it

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Tattered-Dreams In reply to bella12861 [2013-07-14 21:08:21 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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bella12861 In reply to Tattered-Dreams [2013-07-16 03:00:30 +0000 UTC]

welcome

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bella12861 In reply to Tattered-Dreams [2013-07-16 02:52:44 +0000 UTC]

welcome

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SwiftFlight1 [2013-06-25 13:24:58 +0000 UTC]

NICE!

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Tattered-Dreams In reply to SwiftFlight1 [2013-06-25 15:45:27 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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SwiftFlight1 In reply to Tattered-Dreams [2013-06-25 15:59:34 +0000 UTC]

It great! I still LOVE IT! AND your welcome!

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Tattered-Dreams In reply to SwiftFlight1 [2013-06-25 16:04:38 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you like it so much ^^

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Zephyrra [2012-09-26 19:50:04 +0000 UTC]

This is SO adorable! I'm kinda falling in love with this little mare...

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Tattered-Dreams In reply to Zephyrra [2012-09-26 20:03:22 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

And I'm actually honoured that I can make you so invested in her just through a few pictures and short stories ^^

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Zephyrra In reply to Tattered-Dreams [2012-09-26 20:04:08 +0000 UTC]

Hahaa, you should be!

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Tattered-Dreams In reply to Zephyrra [2012-09-26 20:14:39 +0000 UTC]

Thanks ^^

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shannor [2012-09-26 15:43:58 +0000 UTC]

You described a pretty good pasture join up - Alec's doing great whispering her. I love how her personality is really starting to shine

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Tattered-Dreams In reply to shannor [2012-09-26 15:54:51 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I'm really thrilled with how many people seem to be following these two ^^

We're not quite at join up yet - that works on the basis of using agressive body language to establish heirarchy, and Alec couldn't do that until Kiwi was truly unafraid and viewed him as part of her herd. But a join up of sorts is coming next

And the more she interacts and settles into her new life, the more we'll see of her personality, so I'm glad you like how that's coming out now

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shannor In reply to Tattered-Dreams [2012-09-26 23:33:55 +0000 UTC]

I can't wait!

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Tattered-Dreams In reply to shannor [2012-09-26 23:44:37 +0000 UTC]

Me either XD

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BournetwynKennels [2012-09-26 14:29:01 +0000 UTC]

Love the story!! Your stories are so good!

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Tattered-Dreams In reply to BournetwynKennels [2012-09-26 14:34:31 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

Considering I want to publish fiction one day, that really means a lot ^^

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GiocosoRhythm [2012-09-26 14:20:50 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry I keep commenting on this, but I love heartland too. It got me into all the natural remedies and profiling. I love this story, people usually only have stories about horses jumping 2 meters and stuff, never taming a horse! This is fantastic

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Tattered-Dreams In reply to GiocosoRhythm [2012-09-26 14:27:01 +0000 UTC]

Yikes - don't be sorry! Honestly, its amazing to get people favouriting my stuff, but comments like this really mean the world. Thank you so much ^^

Heartland did all that for me too - I loved going through the books, reading about the different horses, and all the different ways they worked with them, because it was never the same thing twice. I have a book on Bach flower remedies and horses that I love beyond words, and the journal is wonderful for extra 'behind the scenes' bits of the Heartland series, too. They're definitely wonderful books

That said, I'm really glad that my Kiwi stories are going down well. You really don't see a lot of taming in HARPG - or even published fiction, you're right - so I have very little to go on. Most of it I'm winging, so its great to know you're enjoying it and it doesn't seem ridiculous

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GiocosoRhythm In reply to Tattered-Dreams [2012-09-26 14:43:52 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha you never know xD

Heartland helped me understand horses and look at them as more than just things you ride. The batch flour remedies work well, I've actually tried lavender oil before and t touch (I think thats what they call it in the books? I can't remember!) I really want to draw a picture feating a join up, you should have Alec join up with Kiwi!

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Tattered-Dreams In reply to GiocosoRhythm [2012-09-26 15:02:09 +0000 UTC]

I was into horses long before my parents let me start riding, so Heartland didn't do much in that respect. I always saw them as pets first and it was like a delayed realisation "Hey, I can ride, too!" In my defence, I was pretty young XD.

Bach flower remedies definitely work. My friend's foal had rescue remedy in his water for a while after he was moved and weaned, and you can use it yourself to relax in stressful situations - like class presentations in college I'd love to properly learn t-touch (circle massage - yep, thats what they call it in the books), but I have experimented with it on a little Welshie who everyone said was evil and we got along fine.

As for join up...I have mixed opinions on it, but its funny you should mention, because a form of it is planned as my next stage for Alec and Kiwi. But there's elements of Parelli's teaching in what Alec's got planned, as well as Monty Roberts and some other trainers, so we'll have to see how that works out

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GiocosoRhythm In reply to Tattered-Dreams [2012-09-26 16:04:02 +0000 UTC]

I never had thought of horses as anything other than animals until I went to a riding camp and fell in LOVE with them. I started reading all the books and learning about horses (I can't tell you how many horse books & magazines I own!) I'm actually really psyched because I'm finally (after probably around 10-14 years of obsessing over horses)getting my own, so yeah, thats pretty cool.

I tried T-Touch a few times, but I'm not sure how effective it was and I felt a bit silly massaging a horse, I have seen someone do it though and calm the horse quite a bit. What I have found has definitely worked is the blowing into the horses muzzle as a greeting. I always do that to the horses and they always say hey back

I really want to invest in some liberty books and stuff because it genuinely interests me so much and it would probably inspire me to do stuff with my own horse (when I get it xD)

I reall

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Tattered-Dreams In reply to GiocosoRhythm [2012-09-26 16:18:45 +0000 UTC]

I used to get subscriptions to a lot of horse mags, but I gave them up and lost interest. I do own a lot of horse related novels (being a huge bookworm). You may find you like Sundancer by Shelley Peterson, if you haven't read it already. That's got a wonderful story about a misunderstood horse and a troubled girl. But its definitely cool to be getting your own horse after so long.

I nearly did - I fell in love with a horse but couldn't get him. Now I'm in no hurry to find another one. If I stumble across one one day who I love just as much, I'll consider myself lucky.

T-touch can be awkward. Sometimes it works for me, other times it just doesn't. Hence why I'd love to learn it properly, at least so I know I'm doing it right And I do that, too - the college horses really liked that, probably because so many of the newbies just hauled them about all the time

I've got a fantastic book called 101 Horsemanship Exercises by Rio Barrett, which is great for starting out as it goes through all the basics, step by step and up to the more complicated games, both on the ground and from the saddle. I got it on the internet, so you shouldn't have any problems. Heartland has about three new horses every book, so sometimes you can find parallels between the characters, and a horse you're actually working with and be able to pick Amy's mind. Then there's a book from Kelly Marks called 'Perfect Manners' which has a different natural approach (more Monty Roberts vein, than anything) but there's some great exercises in there, too. As I said, I'm in no hurry to get my own horse, being that I still miss the one I never got, but reading through them does make you keen to experiment

(also, did your message get cut off at the end, there?)

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GiocosoRhythm In reply to Tattered-Dreams [2012-09-26 17:10:31 +0000 UTC]

Oh dear, yes i think it did hahah! Oh well

I find horse mags quite good (I old have access to them once in a blue moon when I go to England and pick a bunch up) I like reading through some riding techniques, like when they are describing proper flying changes and dog leg jumps. I am a total book worm too, I love reading all sorts of books (I actually really enjoyed Warrior Cats, not sure weather you've heard of it, its made for younger readers but I love animals so I enjoy them!) I love Flicka, the Black Stallion, Moonlight Ranch Series, Pegasus and the Flame (Horses mixed with greek mythology, always good) and of course Hartland. I picked up a book called The One Dollar Horse, which is an amazing book about a almost-dead horse being rescused by an a poor girl who later on competes in Badmiton Horse Trials.

Shame about your horse! I once had a horse like that, but she was bought by someone else and I was super upset. I haven't seen it since but I can't dwell on her seeming that I am in great need of a jumper for upcoming events and stuff. I live in Turkey (Expat family, I know xD) and everybody here is all posh with their horses, having people tack them up for you and stuff, which I hate. So I'm determined to do everything for my horse and not let other people mess with it.

Will definatley order those books, it will probably take a few weeks to arrive but oh well!)

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Tattered-Dreams In reply to GiocosoRhythm [2012-09-26 17:28:15 +0000 UTC]

I have heard of Warrior Cats, and the other horse books you mentioned are all ones I've looked through as a kid - except Flicka. I never read that, and I don't like the movie. I also read a huge book of pony club stories, which was fun for all the little misadventures, as well as the progress in the horses. I was a fan of the series 'Horses of Half Moon Ranch' which had a different book about a different horse, with all the same characters and of course Black Beauty is a classic read, if sad. Lauren Brooke also wrote Chestnut Hill, which doesn't impact you much, but is well written with good characters.

But I haven't read most of them in years. Only a few horse stories have really stayed with me. Heartland has, so has Sundancer. 'High Hurdle' by Ginny Elliot I love - which is odd, since I don't like racing - but the story is wonderfully intricate. And 'Ticket to Ride' by Caroline Akrill is part of a series, but complete in its own right, and that was a great read. Another one about a girl with a lowly pony who goes to a competition school and starts to compete. But there are three ancient books I dug up in my school library that I fell in love with. San Domingo, Misty of Chincoteague and Sea Star, all by Marguerite Henry will stay with me for a long time (the last two really got me started on my fondness for the wild ponies of Chincoteague). You don't get horse books like them anymore. My teacher let me keep them, because I was the only one at school who read them.

Anyway- I'm talking too much about books

Its good that you want to take care of your horse yourself - I'm not fond of people who fob off the caring to someone else. But for that matter, its just as good for the horse to be handled by more than one person. I hope you really enjoy having a horse and get a lot out of it The books I mentioned may take a while to arrive, but they're definitely good reads, if you decide you do want to get them

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GiocosoRhythm In reply to Tattered-Dreams [2012-09-26 18:18:18 +0000 UTC]

I can talk about books all day! I have read The Horses of Half Moon Ranch, t'was good too! Ok am going to the library tomorrow and looking all those up. Flicka is a good book, the movies are completely different, for one, the main character in the story is a boy, not a girl.

Tonight I'm going back to my heartland, gonna re read a few and enjoy them Oooh another book; the Scorpio Races, i recommend it!

It bothers me when people only use horses like cars, drives them around then ditches them to go home. Its good to have your horse exposed to many people but ya know, i dont want random turkish guys touching my horsey

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Tattered-Dreams In reply to GiocosoRhythm [2012-09-26 18:29:56 +0000 UTC]

I know that feeling XD. Definitely go look up some of them And I know about Flicka - me and ~NightingaleStables got talking about the differences. I'm just not a fan of stories where someone keeps a wild horse captive to tame without a higher reasoning than wanting to be able to say they had. That's what the movie was, for me, and at times I got really ticked off. The book I'll check into, though .

And I've already read the Scorpio Races. I'm a fan of Maggie's writing anyway, and I've read quite a bit of her stuff (I love Wolves of Mercy Falls because its not just her lyrical writing, but she really puts souls into her characters and I got really invested in Sam and Grace). I was gobsmacked by Scorpio, when I finished; I loved her version of the Uisce myths (I haven't read about Kelpie like that for a long time) and the undertone of horror throughout was fantastic. Sean and Kate were both decent characters, too. The only thing is, when I read it again, I started to analyse - which I always do - and there are a few holes here and there. Still, I do adore it for what it is

Same here! Horses can't be switched off when you've finished riding - they need around the clock care. And I get that - let your friends and family interact with him, but strangers can keep their mitts off XD

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GiocosoRhythm In reply to Tattered-Dreams [2012-09-26 18:44:22 +0000 UTC]

The book is good, I don't remember everything though because i read it quite a while a go. I hate when they change the movie so much from the book and it pisses me off. xD Ok I don't want to sound fangirlish but I REALLY enjoyed the Hunger Games... The movie wasn't so good though. THe whole concept about the Capitol and stuff really facinated me! Of course, Harry Potter is my all time favourite series though, JK Rowling I love you

I love Scorpio races, they were really cool. Kinda predictable though that Kate would win the races though? I didn't Sean's horse would break his leg though. I like it better when authors don't make the charecters perfect and make the story end happily ever after because its just too unrealistic to enjoy.

I don't like the thought of people feeding and handling my horse when I'm not around, god knows what can happen!

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Tattered-Dreams In reply to GiocosoRhythm [2012-09-26 20:13:59 +0000 UTC]

I have that issue. I love books so much that its rare a film will stand up to it. The first Potter Movies were good - great, even - but from about 4 they were dropping noticeable parts, and by 6 I just think they were missing too much. I loved Harry and Ginny's relationship in the books, but the movies wrecked them for me.

I've read the Hunger Games books once each. They're heartbreaking and very well written. The characters are believeable and I was really impacted by the utter redundancy of the entire series. Its like the biggest ironic kick to get to the end and realise Katniss only went into the games to save Prim - only to have her die in the war that errupted from her actions. They're not my utter favourite books, but they are high on my list. But I don't like the movie much at all. The casting was all good, and bits were good to see, but the cinematography really let it down. I just got annoyed halfway through with the camera leaping all over the place. A friend of mine was really looking forward to it but came out of the cinema saying she could have done better in her garden with a hand held camera.

As for Scorpio races - I didn't see Corr's injury coming, but I'm glad it did (in a morbid way). It got him his freedom - not the sea, but the chance to choose it. And it was a very poignant, open ending that he chose Sean instead which would have appealed to the horse lovers more than any other reader, I think. What I meant when I said there were loopholes, though, wasn't about character flaws. The characters are flawed - and that's good. The holes I found were more about how Sean and Kate shared enough to even embark on a relationship. They spent a lot of time in silence and seemed very disconnected at times, without much development between them, even if they developed within themselves. I like them together, I just thought there was a bit of vagueness about them in the writing. I don't even know if that makes sense outside of my head XD

I know that feeling, definitely! But when you're around to monitor him, other interaction is good

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