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As Amanda storms off, Damien turns to Toni, his expression, stern.Toni: What? She started it.
Damien: You didn't have to end it.
Toni: I didn't. She had the last word.
Damien: And, for your information, Toni, We did not have sex last night, either.
Damien rushes out of the kitchen.
Toni: Excuse me...
Amanda grabs her jacket and then the door knob. She pauses for a moment waiting for a reason not to leave. After a breath, she turns the knob.
Damien: Amanda...
Amanda doesn't turn around. She closes her eyes.
Amanda: Don't touch me, Damien.
Damien lowers his hands from her shoulders.
Damien: I... Look, I'm...
Amanda: I'm Sorry.
Damien: Well, yeah.
Amanda: No. I'm sorry, Damien. I'm sorry I ruined your morning. I'm sorry I came here last night. I'm sorry I said anything about her.
Damien: Who, Toni? I told you...
Amanda: Yeah, I know. You're just friends, right?
Damien: You're taking things way out of proportion. I wanted you to get to know her.
Amanda: I really messed things up, huh?
Damien: No, I did. At least, I should have prepared you, knowing how you felt. I imagine, you probably hate me right now.
Amanda: I wanna punch you in the mouth.
Damien: ...Yeah, you hate me.
Amanda: I wanna hit her more.
Damien: Sssss. I wouldn't recommend it. I've been giving Toni self defense lessons for months now. She's a natural fighter too and, if the dented pads and gear are any evidence, there' a lot of repressed rage in that woman she won't admit to.
Amanda turns around.
Amanda: The more I learn about you, Damien, the more I realize I don't know.
Damien: Look, I invited you over last night to spend time with you. I don't regret it, nor do I regret knowing you. I simply wanted someone else to know you too.
Amanda: Unfortunately, it didn't work out the way you planned. (Shakes head) I'm sorry. Really. You meant well, it's just... Good men are rare territory and all women, even married ones, come to know that sooner or later.
Damien is silent. Amanda places her hands on the sides of his head and kisses his cheek.
Amanda: Thanks for having me. See you Monday... Damien.
Amanda opens the door and leaves. Damien watches her go.
Damien: See you Monday... Dr. Bryce.
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Comments: 9
tavaresg In reply to roknese [2011-04-28 21:08:16 +0000 UTC]
Actually, if you like Irish characters you might wanna check out the redhead Jasmine "dimples" O'Brien. You'll love where her character eventually goes...
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roknese In reply to tavaresg [2011-04-29 04:04:34 +0000 UTC]
alright, thats in your deviation? ill find it
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tavaresg In reply to Benin6man [2011-02-10 18:02:12 +0000 UTC]
I was wondering, is it difficult to see her freckles? I may have made them a bit too light. She's peppered all about the cheeks and arms.
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Benin6man In reply to tavaresg [2011-02-10 22:28:30 +0000 UTC]
Kinda, yeah.
If I were to color it. They would most likely dissapear. The program I use Paint.net program. And the way it works is when I use paint bucket tool, anything NOT solid black would get wiped out. So the outline would still be there but the freckles would be gone for sure.
That's why I had a little trouble coloring Queen Nikashi. Gray spots translate to blank space in Paint.net So yeah there a bit on the light side I think.
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tavaresg In reply to Benin6man [2011-02-11 01:15:59 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, but, I'm keepin' them that way. Otherwise, they'd be overpowering. Not everyone likes freckles.
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