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Published: 2010-08-24 17:43:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 1317; Favourites: 81; Downloads: 5
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I started this pic a few months ago >V<I think its my first pic ever without lines
sdhdhhgjjdmgjkjk I think the anatomy may be a bit bad, I had to fix alot of parts
but it`s half old half new.
I actully didnt use the burn and lighting tools for most of it, I just added lighter and darker shades to it, and blured, but then i added stripes... ffff they`re to hard to do that with so i just used the tools on them.
Critic, mabye? :U
Jayfetaher (c) Erin Hunter
Art = mine
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Comments: 52
Wow, my God! Your blue jay's feather is SOO much better than mine!
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can i use this in a vid i makeing its goin to be jayfeathers theme song and i need pics for it
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srry filled up on jayfeather pics :/
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OH MY STARCLAN!!!!!!! IT'S AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Jayfeather is the best char in the series. 8b
Great job
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this picture is amazing! 
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You did the coat gorgeously for a first try.
There's something about his face and muzzle that seems a little off. I think his muzzle/mouth is slightly off of alignment with his chin. It seems to me that it should be slightly more to the left. His eyes are rather large and round for a realism picture, but I'm not sure if that's just your style or a little mistake. Also on the eyes - they are gorgeous and well-done for a normal cat, but seeing Jayfeather is blind, I would imagine his eyes to have more of a misty, clouded look. Take a look at the eyes of a very young kitten, and you will see what I mean.
He also looks a little too happy for Jayfeather, but, who cares, haha. He looks good smiling.
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thanks.
and thank you for the critic
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The tabby markings and soft coloration came out rather wonderfully 
For suggetions on anatomy.. the shoulder's shading seems to imply that the muscle is slapped onto the side. A lot of people make this mistake for kitties.
It's hard to show what I mean but this picture shows what I mean i think: [link] Note how while there's definition from the shoulder to the torso and rest of the body... there's no definition from shoulder to neck; it blends right in. That's because cats don't have this huge breast in between their forelegs, their shoulder/breast muscles meet in the middle. As shown in Akeli's tutorial: [link] (it's tigers, but the most basic anatomy of felines is similar)
I hope that helps a little ono
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Thank you
Thank you for the tips ;D
and as I had said, this is partially old, and back a couple of months my anatomy wasn`t as great as it is now.
but I do have trouble with shoulders so this`ll help.
thanks~
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You're welcome c:
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Wow this is great C: Although he seems a bit too happy
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Thanks
I know D;
but his eyes were just to awsome.
and if he`s EVER had a happy moment in his life, this is the moment ;D
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heh, im obsessive <33333
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im in the "help me become a reg(theme only)" thing board
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asdf
I'm there, too, but you're not replying to mah whispers~
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That cat looks too happy to be Jayfeather! Lol, I think the pic is great!
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