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Okay, I need people to take a look at this, tell me what I can severely improve before I color this thing or something. You see, as an experiment, I'm going to make a comic of a very beloved fan fiction by one of my best buds (yes, I got permission), Thunder Croft , called Timelock House (in case you didn't guess XD). It's a very unique story and I'm looking forward to giving it a bit of life and imagery. I know there is many people who don't like to read much so this could be just perfect for them as this story is very amazing. Though, it is a bit old so you might see me change a few of the lines and not follow some of the description. I might skip over some things in the story that I deem insignificant for a comic to keep you all interested and invested. This is one of her older works so please don't judge her writing if you find it outdated. She is a magnificent writer and this story is very well made, I can tell, just with a few problems here and there. Please check her out. ^^ I was going to do a comic on her story, The Children of Lilliwell , which is a lot like this story but executed better. However, it is unfinished and due to her busy schedule she doesn't have much time to finish it at the moment. I wanted to do one on something finished to get the gist of a comic and because I think it would be far more satisfying if something wasn't left on a cliff hanger.

Sidenote: MAN I HATE DRAWING AMY'S QUILLS! AAAAAA!! AND CLOTHES!! UGH! CLOTHES!!

PLEASE OFFER ANY CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM AS THAT WILL SEVERELY HELP ME AS A WRITER AND ARTIST

Description
Okay, I need people to take a look at this, tell me what I can severely improve before I color this thing or something. You see, as an experiment, I'm going to make a comic of a very beloved fan fiction by one of my best buds (yes, I got permission), Thunder Croft , called Timelock House (in case you didn't guess XD). It's a very unique story and I'm looking forward to giving it a bit of life and imagery. I know there is many people who don't like to read much so this could be just perfect for them as this story is very amazing. Though, it is a bit old so you might see me change a few of the lines and not follow some of the description. I might skip over some things in the story that I deem insignificant for a comic to keep you all interested and invested. This is one of her older works so please don't judge her writing if you find it outdated. She is a magnificent writer and this story is very well made, I can tell, just with a few problems here and there. Please check her out. ^^ I was going to do a comic on her story, The Children of Lilliwell , which is a lot like this story but executed better. However, it is unfinished and due to her busy schedule she doesn't have much time to finish it at the moment. I wanted to do one on something finished to get the gist of a comic and because I think it would be far more satisfying if something wasn't left on a cliff hanger.

Sidenote: MAN I HATE DRAWING AMY'S QUILLS! AAAAAA!! AND CLOTHES!! UGH! CLOTHES!!

PLEASE OFFER ANY CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM AS THAT WILL SEVERELY HELP ME AS A WRITER AND ARTIST