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Rosie-BRS [2014-04-13 16:10:32 +0000 UTC]

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I haven't written a critique on this site before, but here it goes:

The overall body form is lovely. Its proportionate, shows the weight of the character, represents the struggle of being bound in this way, and demonstrates a fair reaction considering the character we're looking at (I haven't seen a great amount of Space Dandy, but I imagine any Boobies girl could be tied up for promotional purposes at some point <3. Her face shows a general acceptance of the situation coupled with a confusion as to what she should be doing, which I feel fits her character well).

The main improvement I might make is adding hair volume, shortening the length of her face, and lightening the shading around her eyes and nose. It looks as though the lighting is coming from above her and slightly in front of her, though if that were true, I don't feel her hair would be enough of a shield to create that much shadowing (I feel noses tend to be more of a highlight area, and Honey has a very pale, rosy complexion~). Her face and hair also gives me more of an impression of Daphne from Scooby Doo, and I think it may be the maturity of her face (being long, the straight eyes [I think Honey's eyes curve down inwards a little, like an Asian eye line]). All very subtle things that didn't effect the overall impression I had of this piece. ^^

I was drawn to the realistic proportions and the depth of her body. You've created something I feel like I could reach out and touch, and I looove that for bondage art.~ The duct tape also has a realistic shine to it, and I feel that adds a great deal to the feeling one gets when looking at this. I loved this piece without even knowing it was Honey, which says something about your capture of the kink (I think it's wonderful to not even have to have a popular model to have someone love your work)~ Hope that all helps. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a… " width="19" height="19" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="417" title="Sweating a little..."/>

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DiDark666 [2015-12-29 07:24:50 +0000 UTC]

SO PRETTY ♥

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RaeKage [2014-04-14 03:03:12 +0000 UTC]

*sniff* This is one of the first Dandy bondage pics I've seen since the show came out. I prolly wasn't looking too hard tho...

Either way thank you for doing us a service mate.

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SecretSketchbook [2014-04-13 15:45:54 +0000 UTC]

hum so asking Critique, well I will be glade offer some

I like what your doing here, your attempting painterly style and I think it complements your line work very well and you seem to have a good sense of light direction, the only issue I can see that would need improvement is the shadows on her face, they seem to be too dark for the lighting and the rest of the shading and as such stand out in an off putting way, tone it down some and I think it would be a great start

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ErgoFractale [2014-04-13 09:15:33 +0000 UTC]

I like this new coloring style.  The colors look like they blend in better and are "smoother" or something.  I can't really explain it.  It's like there are a lot more colors to each part, like with her hair, her clothes, and the tape.  You can see the different colors, but they blend together in a way that looks natural.  Even the white colors look like areas where light is reflecting off of her. 

It's nice to see some Honey bondage though.  I love her expression.  She looks a bit more serious than she does in the show, and it makes her look even more sexy.  She looks like more of an adult compared to her childish behavior in the show.  Nicely done!  

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nin09 [2014-04-13 01:18:15 +0000 UTC]

Glade to finally see a D.I.D pick of Honey.

Hope to see more.

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Thearchaon [2014-04-13 00:40:32 +0000 UTC]

Really loving the colouring style, it works very well and gives a lot of depth to your drawing.

Still haven't had the time to watch this anime, but have been hearing very good this about it.

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Damselbinder [2014-04-12 20:29:34 +0000 UTC]

I think you're right about the colouring style: this is very vibrant, and adds a sense of palpability to the picture. Honey's facial expression is excellent as well, sort of hovering between defiant and bewildered, like she's not sure what her captor is going to do to her next.

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feuerdood [2014-04-12 19:48:44 +0000 UTC]

thankyouboobiesplz

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DiscordPianist [2014-04-12 19:42:33 +0000 UTC]

That's really awesome! Space Dandy is the best! ^_^  

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hacker90 [2014-04-12 19:38:45 +0000 UTC]

I just finished watching that anime. Loving their reference nods to Cowboy Bebop

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SecretSketchbook [2014-04-12 19:38:30 +0000 UTC]

cool your doing painterly, that's what I been trying.

very awesome man very awesome, good to see you drawing again

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