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TE-Lightning — CMC Chapter 1 Page 1
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Published: 2013-04-11 13:20:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 1561; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 0
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Well guys here it is the first page to the cutie mark crusaders!!I know its not really detailed but for me this is a milestone for me. Even though it takes me so long to get the outlines right and all of that. There are 2 characters in this that you will see a lot during the are Appleseed and Green Thumb ^^
Appleseed is blind in both her eyes thus the reason she didnt see the hoof in front of her.
So.... I guess that is mainly it for the describtion
Just really happy that I got this up today before I go to bed. PLEASE leave comments about this. I really want to know how you guys think of this. and also()()()() COMMENT WITH YOUR PONY/FILLY OC IF YOU WANT HE OR SHE TO BE IN THE COMIC. Still looking for characters for certain parts in the stories.
Still questioning on doing only 1 chapter or doing multiple...... More than likely 1 but I may do multiples
Also wanna give a big thanks to For letting me get 3 fillies/OCs for 5 points. ^^ Thanks a lot!!!
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Art done by me
Appleseed and Green Thumb are mine
Ponies and other things copyrighted to Hasbro and the maker whose name escapes me right now
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Cheerilee said something about them.
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Hmm...when is the next page going to be uploaded?
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im gonna get working on it tonight... I needed some time off from work to get to it
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Okay, great! Anyway...what is the story?
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you'll learn about the story.
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When? Can you explain in a nutshell? I mean what will it contain? Will there be some action?
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If I were to tell you then what would be the purpose of making it?
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Scootaloo: So...what will we do now?
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Sweetie Belle: Dance? [link]
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dance? with a filly?
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Since there's nothing else to do...
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That would seem awkward
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A grown pony dancing with a filly
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Applebloom: I mean dance for fun!
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Well I dont know how to dance
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Sweetie Belle: So bored...-Scoots across the floor-
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Applebloom: At least the dead are resting in peace. That was a lot of hard work!
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Scootaloo: So, Applebloom...you're now a Paladin?
Applebloom: I shouldn't think so. Just survival instinct.
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Applebloom: A warhorse that fights in the name of Celestia. They can use holy magic regardless if they're unicorns or not. Me, I can't use holy magic.
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Oh... Didnt know that
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Applebloom: And maybe one of those Blanks may become one of the villains of CMC, maybe like a yandere.
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Hopefully not but there is that possibility
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Applebloom: -Takes out her warhammer- I will be ready for him, even if he makes this face: [link]
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Gray Hoof: Applebloom!
Applebloom: Oh, Celestia. Not again!!!
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Appleseed: Huh? Whats wrong?
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Applebloom: I'll explain later...
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Well we have time now
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Grey Hoof: -Takes out his knife and attacks Applebloom-
Applebloom: -Dodge-rolls the attack- Geez! Why don't y'all ever call it a day?!
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Woah... hold on man.... just put the knife down
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Grey: ...You have a mark! You're cursed!
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Now im not cursed.. i just know what my talent is
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Grey: Lies!!! You..are...-Zombie form- DEAD!!! -Attacks you-
Applebloom: -Stops Grey's attack by blocking his knife with her hammer-
Grey: Applebloom, why?
Applebloom: You're seriously yandere.
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Grey: D...don't get the wrong idea, Applebloom. It's not like I'm killing anypony because I want you to stay with us as Sunny Town...Baka.
Applebloom: Now you're Tsundere? Not working on me!
Grey: Damn it!
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How gullable did you think she was?
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Grey: I didn't! I just want her back...so we can live happily...ever...after...(Makes an ecstatic yandere face similar to this: [link] )
Applebloom: Look, I don't know ya that well! Can I ever just catch a break!
Grey: I promise you you will catch a break...after I kill your friends.
Applebloom: NEVER!!! -Pushes the zombie-like yandere away from her-
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Hey Why cant you just take a hint. She doesnt want to be near you or around you! And she is too young to start thinking of a happily ever after
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Grey: Shut up, you cursed scum! As if you knew anything about pain!
Applebloom: They do, in fact! Stop killing other ponies to get to me, you psychopath!
Grey: How dare you reject me? I only wanted you to be safe...
Applebloom: Can I at least be safe from you, undead scum?
Grey: Then enough talk...let us end this! -Brandishes his butcher's knife-
Applebloom: -Readies her warhammer-
BGM: [link]
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Wait a minute guys... Cant we deal with this another way? *stands between them*
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Applebloom: ...
Grey: -Thrusts his knife at you-
Applebloom: Look out! -Saves your life by pushing you out of the way before she stops the knife with both her hooves- Are you okay?
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