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Published: 2013-04-11 13:20:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 1561; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 0
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Well guys here it is the first page to the cutie mark crusaders!!I know its not really detailed but for me this is a milestone for me. Even though it takes me so long to get the outlines right and all of that. There are 2 characters in this that you will see a lot during the are Appleseed and Green Thumb ^^
Appleseed is blind in both her eyes thus the reason she didnt see the hoof in front of her.
So.... I guess that is mainly it for the describtion
Just really happy that I got this up today before I go to bed. PLEASE leave comments about this. I really want to know how you guys think of this. and also()()()() COMMENT WITH YOUR PONY/FILLY OC IF YOU WANT HE OR SHE TO BE IN THE COMIC. Still looking for characters for certain parts in the stories.
Still questioning on doing only 1 chapter or doing multiple...... More than likely 1 but I may do multiples
Also wanna give a big thanks to For letting me get 3 fillies/OCs for 5 points. ^^ Thanks a lot!!!
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Art done by me
Appleseed and Green Thumb are mine
Ponies and other things copyrighted to Hasbro and the maker whose name escapes me right now
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you have them named so it wont be hard. Just finding a spot for them all
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Thanks.
Also, Snow Belle has a beautiful singing voice, but she sings when she's alone or with somepony she's friends or more with.
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So just like Sweetie Belle XD
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She has a personality similar to Fluttershy and Sweetie Belle. Kind, brave, and a bit shy.
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Cinderheart: That wasn't very nice! -Trots over to Appleseed- Are you okay? [link] (He's the red colt. The light-blue dragon is his BFF, Sapphire.
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Appleseed: *just looks down questioning what happened* What did I hit?
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Cinderheart: -Hugs her- You tripped, but at least you're okay!
Sapphire: -Holds her staff out, casting out a warm light on Appleseed's forehead, healing the bump- Are you alright?
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Appleseed: Uhm.... I dont recognize niether ofyou? Who are you?
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Cinderheart: My name is Cinderheart, and the dragon who healed you through magic is Sapphire.
Sapphire: Pleasure to meet your acquaintance.
Cinderheart: What's your name?
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Appleseed: *jumps back a little* A-a-a dragon? Like Twilight's?
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Sapphire: You know Twilight Sparkle?
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Appleseed: I've heard her around before... but thats all I know
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Sapphire: I see.
Cinder: So, what is your name?
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Appleseed: My name is.... Appleseed >.>
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Cinder: Appleseed...are you related to Applebloom?
???: You mean that blank flank? Bwahahaha!
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Appleseed: Yeah.. *hears Diamond Tiara and starts to tear up a little* ;_;
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Sapphire: Grr...I really hate that laugh!
Cinder: What do you want, you witch?
Tiara: Not much...maybe just a kiss from you.
Cinder: You pig! I'd rather die than kiss somepony with a spoiled soul! I made a promise to somepony else, and for her sake, I intend to keep it!
Tiara: And who is the new Blank Flank?
Cinder: Her name is Appleseed, and you have no reason to ruin her life!
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Appleseed: *about to cry just kinda huddles in place looking down*
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Cinder: You'll pay for that!
Tiara: Oh, so I will? You just remind me of a certain somepony...that damn traitor! (Referring to Babs Seed)
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Appleseed: D-dont fight over me please.... *she says quietly*
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Tiara: Hmph...so my brother was right about you! Then grab a sword! -Takes out a fencing foil-
Cinder: -Draws out his wooden 2-handed longsword-
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Appleseed: Guys.... *says a little louder*
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Cinder: Appleseed?
Tiara: So, will you fight or flee? Your choice, Blank Flank!
Cinder: ...No. Not here, at least.
???: I shall do so in his stead.
Sapphire: Sweetie Belle?
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Appleseed: *a little frightened she runs for the door and goes outside crying a little*
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Tiara: Hahahahaha! Such a coward!
Cinder: You witch! -Goes at Tiara, but Sweetie Belle stops him-
Sweetie Belle: Leave her be, friend. You must find Appleseed. I shall take care of Diamond Tiara! -Draws out a wooden 1-handed broadsword-
Cinder: Thanks! C'mon, Sapphire! -Lowers himself down for Sapphire to jump on him-
Sapphire: Alright! -Hops on-
Cinder: Hold on tight! -He goes outside, looking for Appleseed to try and comfort her- I hope Sweetie Belle knows what she's doing!
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Appleseed: *back behind the school crying* Why cant I just get through one day.... ;-;
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Cinder: Appleseed? Appleseed! Are you alright?
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Appleseed: *hears him, then gets up and walks out from behind the school* Y-yes?...
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Cinder: -Lets Sapphire off his back before he goes over to Appleseed- Are you alright? I am sorry if you had to go through all that!
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Appleseed: Yeah.... I guess I am fine.... >.>
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Cinder: So, you were being bullied for not having a Cutie Mark? I don't have one either. Sapphire and I had no family until the Cutie Mark Crusaders came along. The white unicorn that's fighting Tiara, Sweetie Belle, she is one of the Crusaders.
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Appleseed: There is also another reason I get teased.... If you havent realized yet. *looks away*
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Cinder: Why? Are you...blind?
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Appleseed: So I guess you didnt....
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Cinder: What do you mean?
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Appleseed: *looks at where she thinks he is and her eyes are milky looking* Thats what I mean
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Sapphire: Maybe we can find you some glasses, or some eyedrops.
Cinder: -Tenderly pats Appleseed on her shoulder- Don't worry. We will help you in any way we can. We shall be your eyes for a while.
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Appleseed: No use with the glasses.... I am completely blind. Ive gotten used to it.. but I wish I could see
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Sapphire: Oh...
Cinder: Anyway, is it alright if I take you somewhere?
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Appleseed: Like where?....
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Cinder: Follow us! -Lets Sapphire on his back-
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Appleseed: Uhm ok... *tries to listen for his steps*
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-Some time later, the trio arrived at a peaceful-looking treehouse-
Cinder: I give you...the Cutie Mark Crusaders' clubhouse!
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Appleseed: Uhmm..... Where?
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Cinder: -Turns her to the direction of the Clubhouse and points at it- There! Home, sweet home!
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Appleseed: *kinda stares* You forget.... Im blind
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Cinder: Follow the sound of my hoofsteps!
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Appleseed: Alright. *follows his hoofsteps*
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Cinder: -Knocks on the door- Hello?
Applebloom: -Answers the door- Cinderheart! Sapphire! What's up? -Hugs them both-
Cinder: Nothing much. Trouble at school, but we helped our newest candidate out of it. Sweetie Belle's stayed behind to take care of it.
Scootaloo: Let me guess...Diamond Tiara, is it?
Cinder: Eeyup!
Scootaloo: And who might this new candidate be?
Cinder: Her name is Appleseed. Just to let you know, she's blind. Please take good care of her.
Scootaloo: Why not give her glasses?
Sapphire: I suggested that earlier, but she said they wouldn't work. Also, please be nice to her.
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