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Published: 2018-12-23 04:36:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 908; Favourites: 90; Downloads: 12
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Can you tell that I sort of gave up on good ideas for the posters?
I just really wanted to draw some art of Yeline, and this idea popped into my mind several weeks back. I had fun! I'm still learning how to do lighting, so the shadows probably look a little odd here. But I still like how it turned out. ^^
Any comments/constructive criticism would be most appreciated!
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Yeline is owned by myself. :3
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the design is cute, but in the part of the hands of the character and proportion there would be more attention to the details.
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Mm, I can understand that. ^^ The next time I try to draw a hand in that position I'll try to make it more detailed.
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You did such an amazing job on this! The amount of detail and texture you put into this, and the shading are all nicely done! You decide on a light source and you stick with it throughout the whole piece! This makes the art look consistent and nice. I also like how the posters in the background are all blurred, so you can't really see them completely, but you can still discern that they are there! I also like the bored, tired yet really into it expression on the figure's face. It's quite obvious that she's playing a game and is really interested in it! In addition, (Going back to the shading and texture) you do a good job getting her clothes shaded and textured. You emphasize on the folds in her socks, skirt, shirt, bed, and pillow very accurately according to the light source.Β
One thing I would work on is the anatomy. The hands look a little small. I'm not sure if you meant for that to be a matter of proportion or perspective, since the hand would further away from her elbow while playing a game, but making the hand a little bigger shouldn't effect that too much. In addition, I think the transition from the base of the neck to the chest could be a little less angled and slopey-looking (I understand the difficulty. Whenever I draw human-like characters, it's the transition from the neck to the chest that gets me the most!) I would recommend maybe just making the collar bone look less angled and sharp and more curved.Β
Other than that, this is a really well-done piece! Awesome job!Β
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Thanks for the comment!
Okay, that's helpful! It was my first time drawing a hand in that position, so any tips I can get for it is helpful. ^^ The collarbone tip is helpful as well! I'll do my best to keep your advice in mind in my next projects. :3
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So nice and simple, but still detailed! Looks like she's enjoying a Christmas gift!
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^^ Thank you!
Yeah, she's really focused, isn't she?
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You're welcome.
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I quite like the idea behind this piece, and the anatomy is quite good, though the position is a little off. That last bit though is mostly down to my main criticism of the piece. She doesn't look like she's actually part of the scene. It looks like you've drawn the bedroom and then drawn the girl on top of it without changing the base drawing.
She would have weight, her elbows would press into the pillow, her knees would dig into the mattress a little. Her body would have a physical impact on the blankets, they would get ruffled a little. The shadows are a good start, but they aren't enough to fully place the girl in the picture. We need to see the effect that she had on the world that she is in. If you can, it would be a good idea to try and get a photo of someone in this pose so you can more clearly see how people impact the surfaces they lay on. The other issue is that her skirt seems to be defying the laws of physics. Unless it's hooped or had really thick underskirts it would be following the shape of her legs rather than sticking up like that.
The light work is good though, I like the colour palette you chose. Keep practising, you have some real potential here.
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Hey, thanks for the comment!
Its funny that she looks like she's been sort of placed there, since was actually the first part of the drawing I did. xD Regardless, I agree with most everything that you said, and I thank you for the tips! I had problems figuring out how to get the bed to look right.
As for the skirt, that was sort of a stylistic choice I decided to go with at the time. ^^
I'll make sure to keep your tips in mind for my next projects! Thanks again! ^^
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She's simply the best!
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Nicely drawn! Although, I do recommend making her arms longer. They look pretty short^^
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Thank you! And I'll keep that in mind!
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You're welcome!
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Nice to see someone play a GBA at this day and age. π
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xD It's actually supposed to look like a Nintendo 3DS.
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Ah, never thought of that! 
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xD Maybe I'll draw her drawing a GBA someday. That might be a fun throwback.
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That would be fun! π
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^^ She was fun to draw a poster for.
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This is absolutely fantastic work! :3 I love how casual and relaxed her pose is!
The only suggestion I can think of is maybe give her a sense of weight on the bed by showing fabric lines on the bed sheet and pillow? I think I see a little bit of it on the pillow, but adding a bit more would enhance the illusion of weight on the bed and bring things together I think!
Awesome job either way! 
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Do you have any tips for how to do that? I was trying to do it originally, but it always looks weird and unnatural, so I sort of gave up a bit.
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No problem!
I tried super hard to find some sort of tutorial or reference material on Google but there doesn't seem to be a direct guide anywhere. D: I understand the frustration, as fabrics can be tricky to portray without looking too over-detailed!
I found some stock images though that may help! I wish I had a more thorough guide for you but hopefully visual reference helps out!
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As you can see, the details of the fabric itself come up a little bit and cover some of the person's body, showing that the body is sinking down a little behind it if that makes sense!
Hope this helps!
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Alright, thank you so much! 
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Cute casual work~ <333
And those posters and Pikachu. xD
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wow it so cool!!>e< goo job I hate doing perfect background they take a lot of time. but it very cool keep up the good work.
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xD Yeah, backgrounds are annoying. I try to force myself to draw them every once in a while though.
Thank you! <3
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lol i love the sneaky KC and LB posters
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xD They were the only good poster ideas I got.
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haha, if it were me, i'd do a poster of like every fandom i'm in.
although then there might be too many posters... hmmm :/
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xD I hear ya. Mostly I just was getting tired of coloring and I didn't have any good ideas come to mind.
BTW, I did find that video.
www.youtube.com/watch?v=a8NPhpβ¦
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cool, ill check it out!
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