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Published: 2020-01-05 19:49:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 503; Favourites: 53; Downloads: 2
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Am I getting better or worse at backgrounding?
Drawing of Blueberry in a blueberry bush. 'Cause I wanted to try it, and I thought it'd be cute. :3
Any comments/constructive criticism would be most appreciated!
Blueberry original design by .
Blueberry is owned by myself. :3
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The artwork, however, IS mine, and you are not allowed to do anything with it, or post it on another website, without my permission.
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Comments: 10
apexofreality [2020-01-05 22:04:29 +0000 UTC]
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I'd like to start this off saying that it's a very cute and original piece, and I love the idea and subject matter. The anatomy is good, though I may suggest focusing and practicing anatomy on the legs of the figures, reference images can come in handy and are usually very helpful!
The background is nice! I don't do backdrops much in my own art, but the blueberries look really good, although some slight differences between the leaves may give it a bit of an extra pop.
Lastly, something about the wings just seems a bit...off. I'm not sure what it is, but the back one doesn't look like it's sitting quite naturally.
Otherwise, it's an excellent drawing, and I hope you have a nice day!
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Tears-of-Xion In reply to apexofreality [2020-01-06 20:29:58 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the critique! I can totally see everything that you pointed out, and it is very helpful! ^^
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Tears-of-Xion In reply to annonmyous [2020-01-06 20:30:52 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! I'm happy that you think so.
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