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Hi dear! It's been a while, thank you for submitting to for feedback!
What a wonderful portrait! I can really tell you have a great eye for this! Since you did submit for feedback, I do however have a suggestion for you:
- I am bit confused by the yellow stripe going straight through the photo. Considering how soft the whole photo feels, the harsh yellow line really feels out of place. In the thumbnail it looked like it was some eye-makeup, but now I see that it's straight through the photo. I am very curious to hear why you put it in, and why this way? Something I would try is to blend in the edges a bit more, this will make it fit better with the rest of the softness of this photograph.
Great portrait, very atmospheric, keep up the good work!
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Thank you for the critique! I chose to include this yellow stripe particularly for that reason- it's supposed to feel somewhat out of place and represent the clash of natural and artificial- the photo was, in my opinion, lacking of that extra something, so I took a risk to change the mood by adding in the yellow
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Anytime dear! Thank you for explaining, I understand it now, and can see it with a different view!
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