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Published: 2009-02-01 20:05:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 778; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 15
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I know this picture has a lot of flaws but I dun mind most of them except for the head-neck-attachment. If anybody knows how to improve it, please let me know.

Alrucaan belongs to me.
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Comments: 16

Yiro-Xyrali [2009-02-12 00:21:06 +0000 UTC]

Geez, better than I can do any day, your dragon/beastie skills always amaze me.


I guess there are some issues with the stance a bit, is he resting on a flat plane? Or a slanted surface?

I'm anatomically illiterate, so I can't really give advice on his physiology (I assume it's male, but forgive me if you intended otherwise. XD)

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Tearup In reply to Yiro-Xyrali [2009-04-04 17:10:33 +0000 UTC]

Yes I wanted to give it a bit of depth by the angle...prolly failed. Thanks so much for the nice comment.

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Yiro-Xyrali In reply to Tearup [2009-04-12 19:24:59 +0000 UTC]

Again, I'm no expert so my advice is probably BS.

LOVE those wings.

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zypherax [2009-02-07 16:55:10 +0000 UTC]

oh, and as with the head to neck attacthment, just show abit of curvature of the neck on the left side of his head, behind the crest/horns...

if you know what I mean...

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zypherax [2009-02-07 16:53:41 +0000 UTC]

I like the pose on this, very cool!

you are very good with dragon anatomy.

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Tearup In reply to zypherax [2009-09-30 20:35:35 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much! Sorry ur comment got lost somewhere.

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zypherax In reply to Tearup [2009-10-01 11:00:55 +0000 UTC]

oh, yo are quite welcome!

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Mosleyshores [2009-02-03 21:55:49 +0000 UTC]

This really is amazing. You shouldn't put yourself down so much! Your art is wonderful!

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Glowcrow [2009-02-02 09:20:44 +0000 UTC]

I love how rough the sketch looks o__o It's alive and breathing, I bet you can work something even more gorgeus out of it. Great sense of anatomy and I just adore the wings... Muscles muscles, oh them muscles, looks so goood @.@
Faved o/

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dschunai [2009-02-01 22:46:39 +0000 UTC]

oooh <3 das ist wirklich toll * - *
ich mag das voll wenns so "krikkelig" aussieht :D
und die anatomie is wirklich traumhaft * v * hach

ich versuch ma bei dem nackenproblem zu helfen ^ _ ^

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Tearup In reply to dschunai [2009-02-02 22:46:37 +0000 UTC]

Ist ja lustig, ich habe immer deine sauber art zu skizzieren bewundert. Bei mir sieht das eigentlich immer so aus.
Aber lerne langsam meine Vorteile daraus zu ziehen. Danke fΓΌr den netten Kommentar, made my day.
Zum Nacken habe ich eigentlich noch gar kein feedback bekommen...wahrscheinlich lasse ich ihn dann einfach wie er ist, scheint ja niemanden außer mich zu stâren.

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Schatten-Drache [2009-02-01 20:51:49 +0000 UTC]

....oh... also das was ich da hinter den linien sehe... sieht gut aus, sehr gut!
Dein neuer Ava?

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Skaarer [2009-02-01 20:20:18 +0000 UTC]

I think the anatomy is pretty impressive, the details we can see sketched out are wonderful.
The foot bothers me, being higher than the other. If a horizon was placed tilted, then we would know its at an angle.
Then again, you could of been meaning to have it looked raised.
The head and wings are just wonderful. I love them <3

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ichbinKari [2009-02-01 20:08:45 +0000 UTC]

oO soooooo....Γ€hhhm.....i dont have any words...

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Tearup In reply to ichbinKari [2009-02-01 20:21:55 +0000 UTC]

...rough, unfinished, crappy? Vielen Dank fΓΌr den fav, hatte gar nicht damit gerechnet dafΓΌr favs zu bekommen, da es ja noch nicht fertig ist und der Scan mehr als schlecht ist, aber danke.

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ichbinKari In reply to Tearup [2009-02-02 16:50:11 +0000 UTC]

bidde bidde

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