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Published: 2011-02-09 16:07:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 496; Favourites: 10; Downloads: 4
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Description Another one down, and only 3 more to go before I'm completely caught up and can focus fully on new stuff

This one's of my very first and oldest RP character, Rain Raikaishi. She's been through many changes through her many incarnations, but still holds a very dear place in my heart

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KitsuneShinra [2011-03-04 22:56:29 +0000 UTC]

You have quite a bit of talent, Keep up the awesome work. You have some very good potential

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technacabbit In reply to KitsuneShinra [2011-03-06 07:23:51 +0000 UTC]

Aw, thank you

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shhhhh-art [2011-03-04 00:21:05 +0000 UTC]

Great colours and shading. I like it

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technacabbit In reply to shhhhh-art [2011-03-04 14:14:53 +0000 UTC]

Thanks ;3

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mikhi [2011-03-03 19:47:34 +0000 UTC]

It looks pretty good It looks nice with a background. Your character seems to fit in nicely and blends pretty well. I have a couple tips if you want: since it is night time, you may want to make the river darker because even if there was moonlight/starlight it still would'nt be that bright. The grass looks nice because of that brush but it would have a lot more character if all the blades did not go in the same direction, especially since there is no wind by looking at your character's hair. A bit harsher shadows on her face and pretty much the rest of it will also convey a sense of night time. I really like the tree :3 It's nicely drawn. I wish i could draw trees like that haha Overall well done but there are a few things to look out for like ~masterlink2002 pointed out, perspective. Looks cute though

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technacabbit In reply to mikhi [2011-03-03 21:28:58 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for all the advice, I really appreciate it and will definitely keep it all to heart. If I get a chance I'll try and edit this picture to try some of the changes, but I make no promises. I'll definitely keep it in mind for future art, though

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OryxPixie [2011-03-02 20:45:18 +0000 UTC]

o.0 and wow, the colors now just complete the picture

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OryxPixie [2011-03-01 08:07:48 +0000 UTC]

proportions are good nice texture. and background, I can see the time put into it. The one thing I would say to make the picture instantly better would be to tone down the colors, make them more natural, and honestly, it would change the whole thing. Great work though otherwise keep up the good art

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technacabbit In reply to OryxPixie [2011-03-02 18:15:53 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the tip. I'll definitely keep it in mind. If I get a chance I'll try and play around with this a bit, but if nothing else, I'll keep it in mind for any future pieces involving scenery such as this one

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OryxPixie In reply to technacabbit [2011-03-02 20:41:34 +0000 UTC]

np :} great job anyway

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YourRain [2011-02-12 21:02:17 +0000 UTC]

She is so pretty~! And your coloring skills are awesome~!

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technacabbit In reply to YourRain [2011-02-12 22:10:58 +0000 UTC]

aw, thanks <3

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masterlink2002 [2011-02-09 17:44:48 +0000 UTC]

Tip of da day and one that will help you out in future use perspective when you set up the layout for a drawing. It will give more depth and draw you into the image more.

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technacabbit In reply to masterlink2002 [2011-02-09 18:42:19 +0000 UTC]

yeah yeah, I know. That's totally not something every person I know has not already said to me a million times before. It's something I'm trying to get a grasp of and have obviously failed so far. Who knows, I'll get it someday.

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