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Okay, I think this is acceptable as a final version. I have learned so much while working on this, I think now I have to go on and apply my newfound knowledge to other images.Thank you very much everyone for your suggestions and hints -- through your help this has become a much better piece than I could have ever managed alone.
While I can still see room for improvement, I have decided to draw the line here, otherwise I'll never start another picture again.
I will also do a desktop wallpaper version soon since a few people mentioned they'd like to have one.
About the picture: I wanted to do a married Sesshou/Kagome in a more courtly setting. This might be set in the far future where they have a large court and a lot of social and political responsibilities. This is them either unwinding from or getting ready for a day full of intrigue and veiled power play -- I wanted to capture an intimate moment on the edge between powerful miko/youkai ruler and their more private persona where they're simply a couple who are comfortable with each other.
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Technoelfie In reply to ??? [2004-07-14 09:49:32 +0000 UTC]
I generally do that towards the end. Thank you!
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Bee-Shi [2004-07-14 02:17:16 +0000 UTC]
ummm, kagomes ear looks a little low, but i've been meaning to ask you, the pink of kagome's face, it's a base color whcih you will build on? i'm asking because i'm extremely new to coloring anything in photoshop, let alone skin.
it really is absolutely beautiful so far...i see nothing i can critisize.
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Technoelfie In reply to Bee-Shi [2004-07-14 09:52:25 +0000 UTC]
Yes, her ear is absolutely too low since I changed the tilt of her face. I will have to fix that in the next sitting.
The pink was a base colour, yes. I think she needs to look darker than Sesshoumaru, but the strong colour will change with the highlights.
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RikuShiroiYoukai [2004-07-14 02:03:33 +0000 UTC]
Hmmm..... Kagome's ear seems a bit less detailed than Sesshoumaru's.... and a bit low, but other than that nothing seems wrong to me. I love Sesshoumaru in your style. He's so beautiful. As well as Kagome, wonderful work! And: Wicked-awesome pairing.
Riku
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Technoelfie In reply to RikuShiroiYoukai [2004-07-14 09:55:47 +0000 UTC]
Kagome's ear is indeed too low -- I'll change it and do the detailing on the ears in a while.
And thanks for not bitching to me about the pairing -- I never knew people even care in fanart but I suppose I'm wrong.
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RikuShiroiYoukai In reply to Technoelfie [2004-07-14 22:52:20 +0000 UTC]
Heh, I love the pairing actually. You won't hear any rants from me. Then again you're talking to someone who finds just about any pairing in InuYasha cute, unless it's with Jaken.
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JezrielXIII In reply to ??? [2004-07-14 01:48:07 +0000 UTC]
This picture is going to be so good. ~,~...well..suggestions if you really want them..Kagomes ear is a little to low for my persoal likeing..and..well...Nothing else I can find wrong. Except Sesshoumarus eyes are a yellow not blue..but I prefer that blue *drool* and hmm....Thas it..other than that. Your art is beyond superb and..well Im so happy I am stalking you. ^_^ Keep up the dazzleing works.
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Technoelfie In reply to JezrielXIII [2004-07-14 09:57:54 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the ear hint -- I noticed that too and it will be corrected.
I know Sesshou's eyes are yellow, but such a transparent colour reacts to baground lighting a lot, which is bluish. So they'll end up a light green with yellow flecks when I'm done with them.
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JezrielXIII In reply to Technoelfie [2004-07-15 07:59:37 +0000 UTC]
I cant wait to see it done. ;_; its going on my desktop like ever single one of your wonderful pictures ~,~ *fawning*
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gyrfalconthegray [2004-07-14 01:20:45 +0000 UTC]
Looking very nice... I love the glow you've imparted to the skin. I agree with the poster who mentioned Kagome's ear is slightly too low. And Sesshy's eyebrow is very sketchy which makes it look oddly pasted over his hair. But that's easy enough to fix. I'm also curious... what program are you using?
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Technoelfie In reply to gyrfalconthegray [2004-07-14 10:02:39 +0000 UTC]
I'll change the ear at the earliest opportunity.
The eyebrow is indeed sketchy -- I'll refine it more soon, and the final version of the hair will be painted on top of that so it won't look pasted anymore. I hope.
I'm using Painter. The version that came with my Intuos tablet, which I'm not using since it's too large to fit on the desk. Righnt now I'm still using my tiny graphire for these quick sittings, but I'll get a new desk soon.
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nillia [2004-07-14 01:13:10 +0000 UTC]
Oh, it's quite beautiful. Your technique and style is great.
It just...makes me...so....sad...to see you continually supporting one of the most absurd "couplings" out there. No respect for the story or characters at all.
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Technoelfie In reply to nillia [2004-07-14 10:12:46 +0000 UTC]
Well. The pairing inspires me, partly because I've read at least one truly excellent story featuring them, partly because in my eyes, there is potential for a matured love that grows out of a certain grudging respect. Also, I don't think that the first love is necessarily the only one, and I also don't think Inuyasha and Kagome would have much to say to each other when it's all over, which I happen to think is an important part of a relationship.
So. This is an adult Kagome, and it is my firm belief that she and Sesshoumaru would challenge each other intellectually if she were to stay in the Sengoku Jidai (and everywhere else too, for that matter). Also, this is fanart -- no details were given. Who is to say that this does take place in the past? Maybe it's the present, or even the far future. A lot of things can change in hundreds of years.
This is not a matter of disrespect just because I like a coupling you dislike. I see the story differently from you, and the characters too. To me they always have more layers and even more of both darkness and compassion than they seem to on the surface.
In addition I'm not a canon slave, I've never been. The story is there for my enjoyment, not the other way around.
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zzoaozz In reply to ??? [2004-07-14 00:36:34 +0000 UTC]
Sess' mouth is great, the teeth and the expression, wow, Kagome's upper lip looks a little swollen though.
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Fish-chan [2004-07-14 00:34:43 +0000 UTC]
I dunno... do anything better...? Is that possible?? @.@ It's so beautiful already, and it's not even finished!! One thing I do have to ask, though... where are Sesshou's stripes and such? I miss them. ^^
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Technoelfie In reply to Fish-chan [2004-07-14 10:14:56 +0000 UTC]
The crescent and stripes are things I do towards the end (or is some cases, forget to do -- as it happened with my previous Sesshoumaru pic). I will add them before I start to work properly on his hair.
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Fish-chan In reply to Technoelfie [2004-07-14 21:47:05 +0000 UTC]
Ohhh... I see Sorry! It's still totally beautiful though!!!
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MunOrchid [2004-07-14 00:28:39 +0000 UTC]
Give a lil' more substance to his hair, and send me it when you're done. I'm addicted. You've got some talent there, honeh. Keep it up.
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sorskc In reply to ??? [2004-07-14 00:20:56 +0000 UTC]
Wow, you are definitely a master at drawing Sesshoumaru @____@ He looks so gorgeous! Both of their lips and eyes are stunning~
As for suggestions.. I think Kagome's ear is a bit low. And Sesshoumaru looks extremely pale, but I'm not sure why. His skin isn't really that pale, and I didn't even notice how ghostly he looked until I saw the thumbnail. Sooo... I'm not sure how you could fix that, assuming you even wanted to. o_O
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Technoelfie In reply to sorskc [2004-07-14 10:18:05 +0000 UTC]
Yep, the ear is low. *nods* I like Sesshou's paleness however... the effect in the full picture is the one I'm concerned with. I know the thumbnail should look good, but I won't out too much effort in that. If this goes my way, the picture should become very detailed and the details will be wasted on the thumb anyway.
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le-coeur-brise In reply to ??? [2004-07-13 22:52:42 +0000 UTC]
FINISH IT FINISH IT FINISH IT!! !!!! Wow I really really like it ^.^ Sesh/Kagome =
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matsunoki [2004-07-13 21:12:32 +0000 UTC]
Yosh!! I am predicting this would be another of teh greato pieces..
Though your rendering of Sesshy-sama can sometimes be creepy...
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killermuffin [2004-07-13 19:45:11 +0000 UTC]
*makes out with him*
hhhhh i love how you draw lips. nice pairing i can't wait to see this finished!
as for critiques, sesshou sort of looks like he's gazing at her forehead, but maybe i'm just tired and can't focus @__@
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Technoelfie In reply to killermuffin [2004-07-14 10:19:06 +0000 UTC]
Yes, he's looking behind her at her hairdo, which he's supposed to be fixing once I get around to drawing his hands
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killermuffin In reply to Technoelfie [2004-07-15 05:14:35 +0000 UTC]
Oh! well then it makes sense. why so flawless agh ;o;
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JENJYart In reply to ??? [2004-07-13 19:04:12 +0000 UTC]
i love your art its so soft. and the hair is so detailed.
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munch110 In reply to ??? [2004-07-13 18:05:16 +0000 UTC]
omg where is this going! ITs gonna be awsome!
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Kayochen [2004-07-13 17:43:22 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful. I love the softness of the image and the shadows.
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DarkFeruil [2004-07-13 16:08:05 +0000 UTC]
Oooohhh....getting interesting there! Wow! O.O I the realistic-ness of this WIP!!! Very good!!!
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Fushi-Chan In reply to ??? [2004-07-13 16:04:08 +0000 UTC]
I am liking the way this is turning out... *licks Sesshomaru* O_o teh mmm...
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GX10 In reply to ??? [2004-07-13 16:03:41 +0000 UTC]
great drawing style, very eye cathy .... i like it !
keep on !
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cl0cl0 In reply to ??? [2004-07-13 16:01:41 +0000 UTC]
its really great up to now, maybe u can make seshou hand on kagome`s cheeks or in her hiar or bla, make them a bit closer, but it looks great i love the sin tones X3
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bloody-widow In reply to ??? [2004-07-13 15:44:02 +0000 UTC]
so this's how you work @@
i don't hink that you need any kind of suggestions cause it looks awesome and it's not even finished yet >.<
* i looove the dark shadings on his lips.. looks o real and yuuumy>.<*
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zzoaozz In reply to ??? [2004-07-13 14:55:12 +0000 UTC]
Lovely, so soft and sweet. I can't wait until you finish it. And I have to agree with the others on Sess' lips, those are simply the most kissable lips I have ever seen.
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leigh-chan [2004-07-13 12:42:46 +0000 UTC]
wow. thats all i can say you are soo good. could you sell me a fraction of your talent?? even just finishing kagome's face, would make it a cool pic.
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Zeephos [2004-07-13 12:40:31 +0000 UTC]
God, I love your stuff. The softness is just incredible.
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bickbong [2004-07-13 12:15:31 +0000 UTC]
wow.... hope u can make this into tutorials.... then i can learn from the master. it's really awesome...^v^
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QBSamurai In reply to ??? [2004-07-13 11:12:37 +0000 UTC]
If you want I would say have his hand on her chin like he is lifting it to kiss her. Thats what I am getting from the pciture because it does look like he is about to reach for her face to get a kiss.
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Lillymon In reply to ??? [2004-07-13 10:33:51 +0000 UTC]
OMG
*________*
this is brilliant even when its unfinished ..
Sesso's eyes and lips .. and his face angle are really well done .. this is going to be a great piece ... *_________*
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longerpigs [2004-07-13 10:31:49 +0000 UTC]
good scott. just as a work in progress this is verry good. I love the lips of the white haired dude. so pretty and soft looking.
erm critque. hm. nothing i can think of really. its all very well done. the eyebrow [on the guy] kind of annoys me but thats probably because it isnt finished yet. or i have a thing about hating all eyebrows.
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LRJProductions [2004-07-13 10:28:46 +0000 UTC]
OMG your at just keeps on improving. we can see here what potential this has of being yet another ground breaking piece of art. And I love the pairing-much more dramatic than with inuyasha! LOVE sesshys' eyes and very nice mouth
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