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The Face Of Spring - Reloaded
Published: 2005-10-23 16:48:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 72155; Favourites: 4150; Downloads: 7908
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*Edited: Thanks for the feedback, everyone! I changed a few things, from the butterfly to the eyes that were too dark for a personification of spring. I also went back to the original coloring I had, which was frendlier and a little rose-tinted. This is the image I finally submitted._____________________
I've redone this ([link] ) completely because I want to submit it to a contest and it wasn't nearly large enough, so I repainted it from scratch.
I'm much happier with this than with the original version, but I'd like to make it the best piece it can be, and for that I need feedback on what I can improve. So please, go ahead and tear it apart!
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This is beautiful! Fav for sure. I'm not sure how many changes this image went through, but I certainly can't find anything wrong with this piece now.
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She looks delicate and sweet...which spring really *ought* to look, imo.
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This is beautiful........great job. I love the cleaness of it.
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Now..this is great..wonderfully done, the colours are amazing...BUT.
If your naming this picture to a season, I personally think it works better with Fall (or late summer) than Spring. The eyes are brown, so they lean towards a 'everything is dying and settling down for a nice sleep' sort of look. Her darker hair (as opposed to the first 'Face of Spring' says the same. The other picture, I think, was the perfect representation of Spring. Her whitish hair said something along the lines of, 'The snow is slowly melting..' , and her eyes seemed so new...like they're being reborn along with spring. However, the element of this picture I liked more than the previous, was how much younger her face looked.
I guess spring should be young!
(Wow...sorry about that! Lots of cc!!)
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Woah! I love iiiitt!!!!!! I love the bright colours that represent spring, and the expression!!!!!
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So similar to the other, yet different in a special way. Inexplicably beautiful
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Total transormation! 
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it's beautiful! her hair is my favorite part.
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She has changed.. as if she has grown up. It's in her eyes. To me it feels as if she has lost a piece of her naturalness and freedom.
I mean, the picture is wonderfully done as all of your work, but I liked the other one more.. Can't explain it any better.
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This is beautiful and very inspirational to me. Might try something like this myself.
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oh 
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wonderful!!! I <3 it!
Can I use this img 4 a work?
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This is such a beautiful picture, I have fallen in love with the subject's charming eyes ^^* I think it is an excellent picture of spring, and I adore the details. I do. I do.
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This is absolutely beautiful, and stunning! There's endless details that I keep poring over...simply amazing. Her expression is so bright, so clean, it reminds me of a fresh new season. Though the bottom of the picture is a little dark, it kind of seems as a transfer from winter to spring. Great Job!
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I really like this one, as well as your previous ones. The previous one had a cooler softer tone which I liked. And this one has really nice detail. It's really hard to choose between them. xD
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this pic is sooooo amazing!!! i love her expression, the colours and the background... EVERYTHING!!! i wish i can paint like that... wahhh!!! fav!
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so lovely face and background
great picture ^)
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I really don't have anything more to say. All expressions of admiration are already said
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little different than the last version but still awesome and beautiful
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Stunningly beautiful . . . 
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