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Technoelfie β€” The Face Of Spring - Reloaded

Published: 2005-10-23 16:48:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 72155; Favourites: 4150; Downloads: 7908
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Description *Edited: Thanks for the feedback, everyone! I changed a few things, from the butterfly to the eyes that were too dark for a personification of spring. I also went back to the original coloring I had, which was frendlier and a little rose-tinted. This is the image I finally submitted.
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I've redone this ([link] ) completely because I want to submit it to a contest and it wasn't nearly large enough, so I repainted it from scratch.

I'm much happier with this than with the original version, but I'd like to make it the best piece it can be, and for that I need feedback on what I can improve. So please, go ahead and tear it apart!
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Comments: 505

root-chan [2006-09-29 03:21:22 +0000 UTC]

oohhhh *stares
lovely!

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lostprophecy [2006-09-24 05:05:04 +0000 UTC]

This is incredible. I like the colours and the dreaminess. Her hair is particularly beautiful; I adore the flowers, they're so delicate. Her eyes and mouth are gorgeous, too.

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J-Rozek [2006-09-23 13:51:40 +0000 UTC]

Very nice!

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chibipunk7231 [2006-09-13 13:21:20 +0000 UTC]

i love this piece, she is so goregous!~ i love all the little flowers in her hair!~ awesome work!~ <3

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kellyy [2006-09-01 12:45:31 +0000 UTC]

excellent

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Anima-Mea [2006-08-27 22:20:28 +0000 UTC]

This portrait is the epitome of Beauty itself. I know that Beauty is known to be indescribable but, to my eyes, the feeling it produces is definitely there. Congratulations

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joseph1105 [2006-08-25 05:21:31 +0000 UTC]

u have beautiful work.....

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assyrian-american83 [2006-08-24 04:35:56 +0000 UTC]

perhaps a little more definition in the shoulder/chest area, but still ABSOLUTELY GORGEOUS!!!

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Blue-Vylette [2006-08-21 18:48:07 +0000 UTC]

Shes so pretty, how did you make it? I just have to add this to my favorites list.

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bellapersona [2006-08-14 01:05:32 +0000 UTC]

the color in this is wonderful....great work

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alienwings [2006-08-13 19:49:01 +0000 UTC]

I love this picture. How you did the background, the girl, everything around her is so pretty. And then also the butterfly on it. Amazing!

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le-dix-octobre [2006-08-13 17:51:01 +0000 UTC]

It's so FRESH and just beautiful to look at. It reminds me of Elisabeth Vigee Le Brun's self-portrait.

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crysisrules [2006-08-10 03:19:39 +0000 UTC]

She so pretty. U the master

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Tacti [2006-08-05 06:59:41 +0000 UTC]

Oh, she's so pretty! She looks youthful as spring should, and is accompanied by flowers and butterflies, which is also good. Her simpleness makes her pretty, I think.

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mist-and-stone [2006-08-04 09:04:23 +0000 UTC]

^_^ ooh wow how pretty :fav:

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damdakisuvari [2006-08-02 21:15:31 +0000 UTC]

she is so fresh and beautiful, which makes the composition meaningful. i can sense the spring and the flowers and especially butterfly made the composition so complete. very very nice work

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SamSeddon [2006-08-01 05:30:42 +0000 UTC]

you darling, are extrodinarly talented and pacient! especially to add in those darling little wisps of hair in every direction, and without over doing it or making it look fakish. the colors are fantastic and i agree this one shows so much groth compared to the other!

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Pea-Atalante [2006-07-24 23:21:57 +0000 UTC]

She looks fresh, beautiful and really spring-like. Perfect *o*

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Luna666 [2006-07-11 09:15:49 +0000 UTC]

In the name of fucking God O____O"... This is so fucking good X____X... I feel like I can tuch it... aaaa...

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n0-heaven [2006-07-09 16:38:00 +0000 UTC]

b e a u t i f u l l ! :'D

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Mwiza [2006-07-08 11:21:50 +0000 UTC]

wow

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coordinated-paranoia [2006-07-03 17:45:41 +0000 UTC]

jesus christ on stilts with a handbag!

this is just..
well, it just IS.
i love it.

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haillz [2006-06-23 23:36:10 +0000 UTC]

completely breathtaking

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lovehatecantdecide [2006-06-21 06:01:36 +0000 UTC]

Oh so pretty, I love the soft composure.

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aseariel [2006-06-21 05:19:05 +0000 UTC]

beautiful. absolutely beautiful...

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atrocitybegun [2006-06-21 05:18:06 +0000 UTC]

its absolute beautiful....exuding an aura of peace and beauty......fascinating <3

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hogansrun [2006-06-21 04:54:53 +0000 UTC]

I know i'm just repeating what has been said athousand times but indeed this is worth the repetition. Well done! The one thing i enjoyed about the original version was a few ultra thin strands of hair that seemed to pop out against the rest of the hair that gave it nice depth. I might would try getting those to pop out in the new one and maybe even some of the grass. But truly you could leave this one alone and it stands as incredible!

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PatGoltz [2006-06-21 04:21:44 +0000 UTC]

I won't touch that one! This is phenomenal. I love the large, sensuous lips and the large limpid eyes in particular.

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JessaMar [2006-06-21 03:58:20 +0000 UTC]

Exquisite!

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MelissaGriffin [2006-06-21 03:33:03 +0000 UTC]

Wow,This is so beautiful.Congratz on your DD.It's well deserved!

Missy

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Thechristian [2006-06-21 03:11:40 +0000 UTC]

how F*****G beautiful..... had to favorite it ^ - ^

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Xentalion [2006-06-21 03:10:56 +0000 UTC]


I love it! She looks like a fairy, or some sort of magical girl....

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Mydian [2006-06-21 03:08:26 +0000 UTC]

Amazing piece of work. I thought this was a photo when I first saw the thumbnail. Wonderful color and shading and the detail is just stunning. She's beautiful and the very personification of spring.

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Quinchilla [2006-06-21 02:48:21 +0000 UTC]

stunning piece

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Splinter-Cell37 [2006-06-21 02:36:30 +0000 UTC]

I'm lost for words. This piece is fantastic. "The Face of Spring" is a perfect title, as her face is as fresh and lovely as a spring morning. This painting has that same vibrant, invigorating feeling as the very dew on the roses. As someone said before, her face even manages to maintain that fresh innocence and 'naΓ―vety'.

The beauty of this surpasses explanation.

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kennedy1026 [2006-06-21 02:34:38 +0000 UTC]

this version seems a lot earthier. i like it.

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daisyql [2006-06-21 02:12:06 +0000 UTC]

its just beautiful

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coyote-laughing [2006-06-21 02:07:19 +0000 UTC]

She is so beautiful.

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zingamaroo [2006-06-21 02:04:44 +0000 UTC]

her face is so pretty!

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Mew-Sumomo [2006-06-21 02:00:52 +0000 UTC]

wow, I just adore this work so much, words can't explain it. AWESOME JOB THERE! (faves)

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purplerebecca [2006-06-21 01:14:11 +0000 UTC]

About time you got a DD! Many deserved congrats.

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eliriel [2006-06-21 01:12:48 +0000 UTC]

Um... amazing!

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Zizo [2006-06-21 01:08:42 +0000 UTC]

omg i literally jawdropped and went "wauuuuu"


+fav.

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rainbowme321 [2006-06-21 01:06:25 +0000 UTC]

omg that is sooo pretty! Must...fave...*faves* Wow!

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DarkestElemental616 [2006-06-21 00:16:15 +0000 UTC]

Ooh, pretty! I love it! Her eyes are wonderful, and you have paid great attention to detail. A fine piece of work!

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ReItHeGeCkO [2006-06-20 23:59:32 +0000 UTC]

beautiful! how can i give critique? perfect

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NebetSeta [2006-06-20 23:41:50 +0000 UTC]

That's absolutely beautiful! I saw the original, and if you do not mind me saying, perhaps you could keep it as a model for "Face of Winter"? To me the original cried "winter."

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ElectricHarmony [2006-06-20 23:40:43 +0000 UTC]

stunning brilliant amazing!

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sanasuru [2006-06-20 23:24:44 +0000 UTC]

wow.... she's lovely. ^^

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XyzaDT [2006-06-20 23:24:33 +0000 UTC]

It's about time you got a DD! Congrats!

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