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Next: to come!So this is the collab June task between me and BlaktheSableye
Enjoy!~
Part 1
The poor Tirtouga had only just managed to escape the crowd. She was utterly miserable, staying in that horrible place... And she'd only managed because she had learned how to run faster, by two feet, not four. Although it wasn't the easiest thing to do, even now, it was worth it. But what would they all say when they found out? She didn't really have anywhere to go, and she would probably just die out here. Anything could happen right now, right here. It wasn't before then she felt this eerie feeling that something was coming. Something....huge... She began to slightly jog before coming to a full stop, looking upwards, between the trees' leaves. It was hard trying to put her tongue on what it was, but looking forward, she saw that...well, it was that she couldn't see the end, it was all white and foggy. Ahh, that was what it was. Could it be this large though?
The Tirtouga looked back to where she had come from, in confusion. What could she do now? It was not like she'd go back again after this successful....or somewhat successful escape. She just didn't know what to do, the frustration building up inside her, making her start to cry. She turned and turned. What was there for her at the camp? More people just staring her down? What would she find in the fog? Her mom had warned her sternly not to even touch it. But.... She looked to the part of the forest where there was seemingly no end. What was there for her there? A mixed feeling of anxiety and adventure lust filled her, but as soon as it came, as soon had it left, stress taking over, entirely. She had come to the level where it just was too much, and the choice was too big for her. The art of the chart went downwards and she felt like there was no point. Her legs became weak, making her fall to the ground, and she began crying, like, for real. Tears ran sideways as like a small river, and her sobs became ugly, and long. She just curled up like she would do in her bed if something had gone terribly wrong.
In her despair she barely managed to say some words between the small sobs. "Please..... help......me....." Her religion being her hope.
The saddened Tirtouga left crying in the fog, but little did she know she was not alone in the fog. A faint voice could be heard from somewhere close by, it wasn't anywhere on the ground but perhaps...the sky?
"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!" The voice grew louder and louder in volume.
It was a bright colored Heliolisk! Crashing in from the sky! The 'mon crashed into the tree top, hitting every branch as he came tumbling to the ground. Groans and cries of pain coming from the Heliolisk as he made his descent. Upon hitting the ground he was covered in leaves and holding two branches, he might have been mistaken for a Trevenant. Now stumbling towards the Tirtouga in his delusional state.
"Mommy? What day is it?" The Heliolisk asked.
The Tirtouga that had been lost in her head just some seconds ago was now looking shockingly at the Pokemon that had fell from the sky. Her vision was blurry so she couldn't identify what it was. But it could speak. SPEAK. The Tirtouga looked at the Heliolisk with a sparkle in her eyes. Then, still on her knees, she whispered "Have you come from the sky to save me?"
Shaking his head to dispel his delirious state. Looking over to the 'mon.
"Wut?" Confused out of his gourd.
The Heliolisk approached her, giving an odd confused look, still covered in the vegetation from head to toe.
The Tirtouga looked weirdly at the blurred thing coming against her. She blinked to maybe get a glimpse at something, until she gasped and rapidly got up. That thing wasn't a sky Pokemon, nor something nice. It must be a Trevenant! She began walking backwards, eyes on the bushy-ghost-monster and was ready to defend herself.
As she walked backwards, she stumbled over a branch and hit a tree with the back of her shell when she fell. Her body began shivering and she put her fins in front of her, prepared to die.
"Hey! Ya got any food?" The Heliolisk asked, gently poking her with the branch. Hoping to get some food out of the poor girl. A real idiot, unknown that he was scaring her. Oblivious really. Noticing her trembling as he tilted his head. "Yo, ya alright yo?"
At first, she was just continuing her actions, but then, hearing the question and the "innocence" of the voice, she managed to take a peek from out of her "cloak". She rubbed her eyes and looked up. Wow. That was one ugly Trevenant. Look at those skinny arms and those big, burly eyes, who looks like that? The Tirtouga was able to push forth "You-you're not going to eat me?"
Cocking his back as he shook his head violently. His once bushy head now revealed. Poking her with the branch once more. "Nah. But ya got food?" He asked, continuing his poking. "Besides I dun eat people. Wait...do ya taste good or somethin'?" His mouth began to water, staring intently at the 'mon.
She got a terrified face and quickly replied "NO! *cough* No I don't taste good, not at all!! All stoney... and... and watery... IN A BAD WAY." She panicked and got up, holding up one of her fins for shielding. "And... and where did you come from?" she asked to change the topic.
"Eh? I ain't gonna eat ya." Kneeling down to see the Tirtouga. Tilting his head every which way, now dropping the branch. "AND, I, milady have dropped in from the heavens above! I AM god after all." He shouted with a puff of his chest and a claw settled on it.
Relieved by the answer, she let her guard down a tiny bit. Unfortunately, she didn't really manage to believe his last reply.
"...Ok..." she just answered in a calm tone.
She didn't want to give him a bad first impression...wait...she might have already done that... Bah, oh well. So, the Tirtouga would at least try to figure out what kind of person he was, or anything about him at all.
"...So... Where are you heading to?" She asked.
Shaking his head after hearing her question. Trying to regain his composure to form an answer of some kind.
"Headed? I AM HEADED...to a place with some food. I'm really hungry yo."
His mouth began to water as he held his stomach, it grumbled showing it's hunger. He must have not eaten for a while to make his stomach grumble so loudly,and his body shake slightly.
"Please...food...now." He grumbled, hitting the floor with stomach pains.
"…Oh… Of course." The Tirtouga accepted the answer.
But, she didn't really know what to do about it. She would not lead him to the place she just left. Never. She would never ever return to that place, that was for sure. Thinking about a place to eat actually made her a bit hungry, and her stomach growled slightly.
Having heard her growls as well, he looked to the place he assumed her stomach was, then back to her.
"You're hungry too!"
Scared look in his eye as he cowered in fear, balling up and covering his head, thinking that SHE might devour him.
"...Yes...I am..." She replied, looked over confusedly at the Heliolisk.
"Don't eat me, kind sir. Please take my money and go." He whimpered, slowly crawling away from the girl out of fear.
"...What.. are.. you.. do..ing?" She asked out of awkwardness.
She didn't think at all that she might be the one he was afraid of, so she slowly walked against the Heliolisk.
"Here take my money, just don't eat me!"
He began throwing the leaves from his body in her direction, even a twig or two until he had been picked clean of vegetation.
She stopped.
"What? Me eat someone else?! Are you mad, Thunderbolt?! Well... um... it... happens... And we... um... like the... taste... *COUGH*"
She figured it would be best to just change the topic, and pulled forth her fin, slowly, trying not to scare him.
"...You shake it..." she said in an innocent tone.
Clearing his throat as he stood before her.
"So....you're the new kid in town, eh?" Appearing rather intimidating as he loomed over her.
"Ya don't look too tough. So what do ya say, tough guy?" Chuckling as he skipped from side to side, jabbing lightly in the air. Showing his power, not very fearsome, but intimidating nonetheless.
This action made her take back her fin, and backed away.
"What? New kid? Tough guy? You live here?" The Tirtouga asked confused.
She had never been spoken to like this...ever. The only logical thought that came to her mind was that he lived here, even if he came from the sky...he was electric type after all, judging from his color... but could he be flying?
"Yeah! I run these halls! And right now I-!" Abruptly being interrupted by a rumbling in his stomach. Now clutching his small gut, he grumbled.
"I'm hungry..." Whining as he began to take a knee to the ground.
Obviously, he was quite starved and in need food.
"...Whoa!! You ok?!" She didn't really know what to do, thinking that she didn't even know where she was, but if they were lucky... "Hey, let's get through this fog, you're obviously in need of something to fill your stomach!" She closed in on the Heliolisk and tried to help him up.
"Uh...thanks..yo." Accepting her help, seeming to be a tad normal.
His unusual, sporadic behavior was quickly interrupted as he now had a goal in mind and that goal was to eat.
"So...uh...who are ya? How'd ya get here, yo?"
The Tirtouga listened to him speak oddly...thoughtful until she realized that he just asked her a question.
"Huh? OH um, me? I am..." She managed to think clear for a bit, then continued speaking, stumbling in her thoughts, "VAAU, Vaau, yeah, my name is Vaau and... I come from..." She had to stop and think again because she didn't want to give the Heliolisk any ideas. "..Far away. Somewhere far away, yeah!" She said proudly after her success in saying something else than her home place.
She then went right on case. "I came from this direction," She said and pointed where she came from, "and I have walked FAR, so we do not need to go back. So we should go in this direction," pointing in the opposite direction. "You got that?" the Tirtouga asked, hoping the Heliolisk actually was listening.
"Uh...okay. Name's Leroy...sorry If I get uh.....crazy. Just the way I am." Chuckling nervously, leaning on Vaau for support. Looking onward to their determined direction of travel.
"Oh...we're headed home." Suddenly realizing his way back.
"We got a while to go and I think I may have enough strength for a plan, but...if I get exhausted, I'll need your help to walk." Chuckling once more.
"Home? Oh, you live there?" The Tirtouga thought she had hit a lucky coin. "Um, ok, strength enough for your plan... and yeah I could help you walk! We're getting there together now, ok? So no turning back to the other. You get me?" she asked with a stern look in her face.
Nodding with a slight grin. Suddenly standing tall and scooping up the Tirtouga. He began to crouch as he cradled her in his arms.
"Are you ready?" Asking her as he looked straight to her face, determined.
"Whoa-" she let out a stifled sound when she was lift up. "Yes!" she exclaimed bluntly, not exactly aware of what was going on.
As heavy as she was he had mustered enough strength in his legs to hold up her heavy shell. His legs began to jitter, vibrate even. Small jolts escaped him.
" You might wanna hold on...I mean yeah." Offering a shy grin.
"Oh snap-" she managed to get out before she clung on to him almost as an Arbok. She just recalled that this guy was electric type, and had come from the sky...which meant, how would he get up there without help, NOT being a flying type? She closed her eyes and prepared for whatever was to come.
Suddenly the lizard darted forward, past the trees and onward to town.
Running at blinding speeds and trying his best to avoid any and all obstacles in his way.
"Told you it'd be crazy!" Shouting over the fast current of air.
Vaau held as hard as she could to Leroy, not fearing one bit about how survive this, but just to not die. "Ye-ye-ye-yeah!" She managed to plump out as they ran over some humps on the ground.
After some seconds she wondered how it would be if she opened her eyes, thus she did, watching as hundreds of trees flew past them, not a single one hitting them. This was truly amazing! "THIS IS AWESOOOOOOOOOOOME!!" she screamed when they went downhill.
Dashing left and right, hopping over logs and finally leaping off the downside of the hill and escaping the blanket of fog. Now in the air now with the town of Andalusst in sight. Looking over the town and then to her, smiling. Coming to an abrupt halt, standing on a hill with the perfect view of the town before them
"Had fun I guess?" Laughing as he squeezed her a bit tighter and continued to look onward.
Vaau held still a tad longer before she realized they had stopped. She laughed to his comment, "Yeah!" She jumped down from Leroy's hands and turned to look at the most beautiful thing she'd ever seen!
In a huge gap in the fog laid a big city with amazing houses... and the color of this place! She had never seen anything like it!! She finally forgot about her horrible nightmare. "So... we've finally arrived..." she said in awe.
Next: to come!
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Comments: 19
Durkasao [2014-07-26 00:33:55 +0000 UTC]
Hey, sorry this took forever to get to. Are you guys planning on finishing this? As it stands now you don't really qualify for any rewards, since there's no actual agent-catching being done. As for the written component, length isn't a problem, but completion needs to be in the same medium as your app. So here you'd have to draw something of these guys tracking/fighting/catching/turning in a ninja. Or do a written app and write it out.
If you still want rewards from this, you've got a week from now to make an addition and resubmit it to the Atlas (Don't remove this from the group, though!). Sorry again for the inconvenience, and hope to see more from you two!
(p.s. It looks like you need to fix one thing on your app, too.)
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Tecsinom In reply to Durkasao [2014-07-26 14:20:57 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, we've had some problems doing it since I went on vacation so that's why. I also know that there is something wrong with the app oh gosh, sorry for bothering you erhem!
Thank you for the one week extra, I'll do something about it as I come home today!
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Durkasao In reply to Tecsinom [2014-07-26 17:00:38 +0000 UTC]
No problem, I saw that you were away so I held off on yours for a few days. Good luck with it!
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Tecsinom In reply to Durkasao [2014-07-26 22:37:36 +0000 UTC]
Oh gosh, thanks for the understanding! ;v;
Thank you!!
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FlyingSky01 [2014-06-25 17:58:12 +0000 UTC]
Why is there soo much writing! When it was a drawn app and not a written app O...O!
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Tecsinom In reply to FlyingSky01 [2014-06-26 15:53:21 +0000 UTC]
Because the writing is the story! :> And obviously we won't make it if we had done it a comic, so yeah.
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FlyingSky01 In reply to Tecsinom [2014-06-26 16:37:15 +0000 UTC]
what? I just ment that there shouldn't be much writing in description due to that team being a drawn app not a writtin or hybrid app ...
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Tecsinom In reply to FlyingSky01 [2014-06-26 19:35:00 +0000 UTC]
Nah I don't think it says anything actually. :> And if it does... well, pft I don't really care too much because I need to get it done. XD
But yeah, thanks for the heads-up!
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FlyingSky01 In reply to Tecsinom [2014-06-26 20:30:31 +0000 UTC]
Part 1
The poor Tirtouga had only just managed to escape the crowd. She was utterly miserable, staying in that horrible place... And she'd only managed because she had learned how to run faster, by two feet, not four. Although it wasn't the easiest thing to do, even now, it was worth it. But what would they all say when they found out? She didn't really have anywhere to go, and she would probably just die out here. Anything could happen right now, right here. It wasn't before then she felt this eerie feeling that something was coming. Something....huge... She began to slightly jog before coming to a full stop, looking upwards, between the trees' leaves. It was hard trying to put her tongue on what it was, but looking forward, she saw that...well, it was that she couldn't see the end, it was all white and foggy. Ahh, that was what it was. Could it be this large though?
The Tirtouga looked back to where she had come from, in confusion. What could she do now? It was not like she'd go back again after this successful....or somewhat successful escape. She just didn't know what to do, the frustration building up inside her, making her start to cry. She turned and turned. What was there for her at the camp? More people just staring her down? What would she find in the fog? Her mom had warned her sternly not to even touch it. But.... She looked to the part of the forest where there was seemingly no end. What was there for her there? A mixed feeling of anxiety and adventure lust filled her, but as soon as it came, as soon had it left, stress taking over, entirely. She had come to the level where it just was too much, and the choice was too big for her. The art of the chart went downwards and she felt like there was no point. Her legs became weak, making her fall to the ground, and she began crying, like, for real. Tears ran sideways as like a small river, and her sobs became ugly, and long. She just curled up like she would do in her bed if something had gone terribly wrong.
In her despair she barely managed to say some words between the small sobs. "Please..... help......me....." Her religion being her hope.
The saddened Tirtouga left crying in the fog, but little did she know she was not alone in the fog. A faint voice could be heard from somewhere close by, it wasn't anywhere on the ground but perhaps...the sky?
"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!" The voice grew louder and louder in volume.
It was a bright colored Heliolisk! Crashing in from the sky! The 'mon crashed into the tree top, hitting every branch as he came tumbling to the ground. Groans and cries of pain coming from the Heliolisk as he made his descent. Upon hitting the ground he was covered in leaves and holding two branches, he might have been mistaken for a Trevenant. Now stumbling towards the Tirtouga in his delusional state.
"Mommy? What day is it?" The Heliolisk asked.
The Tirtouga that had been lost in her head just some seconds ago was now looking shockingly at the Pokemon that had fell from the sky. Her vision was blurry so she couldn't identify what it was. But it could speak. SPEAK. The Tirtouga looked at the Heliolisk with a sparkle in her eyes. Then, still on her knees, she whispered "Have you come from the sky to save me?"
Shaking his head to dispel his delirious state. Looking over to the 'mon.
"Wut?" Confused out of his gourd.
The Heliolisk approached her, giving an odd confused look, still covered in the vegetation from head to toe.
The Tirtouga looked weirdly at the blurred thing coming against her. She blinked to maybe get a glimpse at something, until she gasped and rapidly got up. That thing wasn't a sky Pokemon, nor something nice. It must be a Trevenant! She began walking backwards, eyes on the bushy-ghost-monster and was ready to defend herself.
As she walked backwards, she stumbled over a branch and hit a tree with the back of her shell when she fell. Her body began shivering and she put her fins in front of her, prepared to die.
"Hey! Ya got any food?" The Heliolisk asked, gently poking her with the branch. Hoping to get some food out of the poor girl. A real idiot, unknown that he was scaring her. Oblivious really. Noticing her trembling as he tilted his head. "Yo, ya alright yo?"
At first, she was just continuing her actions, but then, hearing the question and the "innocence" of the voice, she managed to take a peek from out of her "cloak". She rubbed her eyes and looked up. Wow. That was one ugly Trevenant. Look at those skinny arms and those big, burly eyes, who looks like that? The Tirtouga was able to push forth "You-you're not going to eat me?"
Cocking his back as he shook his head violently. His once bushy head now revealed. Poking her with the branch once more. "Nah. But ya got food?" He asked, continuing his poking. "Besides I dun eat people. Wait...do ya taste good or somethin'?" His mouth began to water, staring intently at the 'mon.
She got a terrified face and quickly replied "NO! *cough* No I don't taste good, not at all!! All stoney... and... and watery... IN A BAD WAY." She panicked and got up, holding up one of her fins for shielding. "And... and where did you come from?" she asked to change the topic.
"Eh? I ain't gonna eat ya." Kneeling down to see the Tirtouga. Tilting his head every which way, now dropping the branch. "AND, I, milady have dropped in from the heavens above! I AM god after all." He shouted with a puff of his chest and a claw settled on it.
Relieved by the answer, she let her guard down a tiny bit. Unfortunately, she didn't really manage to believe his last reply.
"...Ok..." she just answered in a calm tone.
She didn't want to give him a bad first impression...wait...she might have already done that... Bah, oh well. So, the Tirtouga would at least try to figure out what kind of person he was, or anything about him at all.
"...So... Where are you heading to?" She asked.
Shaking his head after hearing her question. Trying to regain his composure to form an answer of some kind.
"Headed? I AM HEADED...to a place with some food. I'm really hungry yo."
His mouth began to water as he held his stomach, it grumbled showing it's hunger. He must have not eaten for a while to make his stomach grumble so loudly,and his body shake slightly.
"Please...food...now." He grumbled, hitting the floor with stomach pains.
"…Oh… Of course." The Tirtouga accepted the answer.
But, she didn't really know what to do about it. She would not lead him to the place she just left. Never. She would never ever return to that place, that was for sure. Thinking about a place to eat actually made her a bit hungry, and her stomach growled slightly.
Having heard her growls as well, he looked to the place he assumed her stomach was, then back to her.
"You're hungry too!"
Scared look in his eye as he cowered in fear, balling up and covering his head, thinking that SHE might devour him.
"...Yes...I am..." She replied, looked over confusedly at the Heliolisk.
"Don't eat me, kind sir. Please take my money and go." He whimpered, slowly crawling away from the girl out of fear.
"...What.. are.. you.. do..ing?" She asked out of awkwardness.
She didn't think at all that she might be the one he was afraid of, so she slowly walked against the Heliolisk.
"Here take my money, just don't eat me!"
He began throwing the leaves from his body in her direction, even a twig or two until he had been picked clean of vegetation.
She stopped.
"What? Me eat someone else?! Are you mad, Thunderbolt?! Well... um... it... happens... And we... um... like the... taste... *COUGH*"
She figured it would be best to just change the topic, and pulled forth her fin, slowly, trying not to scare him.
"...You shake it..." she said in an innocent tone.
Clearing his throat as he stood before her.
"So....you're the new kid in town, eh?" Appearing rather intimidating as he loomed over her.
"Ya don't look too tough. So what do ya say, tough guy?" Chuckling as he skipped from side to side, jabbing lightly in the air. Showing his power, not very fearsome, but intimidating nonetheless.
This action made her take back her fin, and backed away.
"What? New kid? Tough guy? You live here?" The Tirtouga asked confused.
She had never been spoken to like this...ever. The only logical thought that came to her mind was that he lived here, even if he came from the sky...he was electric type after all, judging from his color... but could he be flying?
"Yeah! I run these halls! And right now I-!" Abruptly being interrupted by a rumbling in his stomach. Now clutching his small gut, he grumbled.
"I'm hungry..." Whining as he began to take a knee to the ground.
Obviously, he was quite starved and in need food.
"...Whoa!! You ok?!" She didn't really know what to do, thinking that she didn't even know where she was, but if they were lucky... "Hey, let's get through this fog, you're obviously in need of something to fill your stomach!" She closed in on the Heliolisk and tried to help him up.
"Uh...thanks..yo." Accepting her help, seeming to be a tad normal.
His unusual, sporadic behavior was quickly interrupted as he now had a goal in mind and that goal was to eat.
"So...uh...who are ya? How'd ya get here, yo?"
The Tirtouga listened to him speak oddly...thoughtful until she realized that he just asked her a question.
"Huh? OH um, me? I am..." She managed to think clear for a bit, then continued speaking, stumbling in her thoughts, "VAAU, Vaau, yeah, my name is Vaau and... I come from..." She had to stop and think again because she didn't want to give the Heliolisk any ideas. "..Far away. Somewhere far away, yeah!" She said proudly after her success in saying something else than her home place.
She then went right on case. "I came from this direction," She said and pointed where she came from, "and I have walked FAR, so we do not need to go back. So we should go in this direction," pointing in the opposite direction. "You got that?" the Tirtouga asked, hoping the Heliolisk actually was listening.
"Uh...okay. Name's Leroy...sorry If I get uh.....crazy. Just the way I am." Chuckling nervously, leaning on Vaau for support. Looking onward to their determined direction of travel.
"Oh...we're headed home." Suddenly realizing his way back.
"We got a while to go and I think I may have enough strength for a plan, but...if I get exhausted, I'll need your help to walk." Chuckling once more.
"Home? Oh, you live there?" The Tirtouga thought she had hit a lucky coin. "Um, ok, strength enough for your plan... and yeah I could help you walk! We're getting there together now, ok? So no turning back to the other. You get me?" she asked with a stern look in her face.
Nodding with a slight grin. Suddenly standing tall and scooping up the Tirtouga. He began to crouch as he cradled her in his arms.
"Are you ready?" Asking her as he looked straight to her face, determined.
"Whoa-" she let out a stifled sound when she was lift up. "Yes!" she exclaimed bluntly, not exactly aware of what was going on.
As heavy as she was he had mustered enough strength in his legs to hold up her heavy shell. His legs began to jitter, vibrate even. Small jolts escaped him.
" You might wanna hold on...I mean yeah." Offering a shy grin.
"Oh snap-" she managed to get out before she clung on to him almost as an Arbok. She just recalled that this guy was electric type, and had come from the sky...which meant, how would he get up there without help, NOT being a flying type? She closed her eyes and prepared for whatever was to come.
Suddenly the lizard darted forward, past the trees and onward to town.
Running at blinding speeds and trying his best to avoid any and all obstacles in his way.
"Told you it'd be crazy!" Shouting over the fast current of air.
Vaau held as hard as she could to Leroy, not fearing one bit about how survive this, but just to not die. "Ye-ye-ye-yeah!" She managed to plump out as they ran over some humps on the ground.
After some seconds she wondered how it would be if she opened her eyes, thus she did, watching as hundreds of trees flew past them, not a single one hitting them. This was truly amazing! "THIS IS AWESOOOOOOOOOOOME!!" she screamed when they went downhill.
Dashing left and right, hopping over logs and finally leaping off the downside of the hill and escaping the blanket of fog. Now in the air now with the town of Andalusst in sight. Looking over the town and then to her, smiling. Coming to an abrupt halt, standing on a hill with the perfect view of the town before them
"Had fun I guess?" Laughing as he squeezed her a bit tighter and continued to look onward.
Vaau held still a tad longer before she realized they had stopped. She laughed to his comment, "Yeah!" She jumped down from Leroy's hands and turned to look at the most beautiful thing she'd ever seen!
In a huge gap in the fog laid a big city with amazing houses... and the color of this place! She had never seen anything like it!! She finally forgot about her horrible nightmare. "So... we've finally arrived..." she said in awe.
This much text! IS FOR WRITTEN APPS ONLY O...O!
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Tecsinom In reply to FlyingSky01 [2014-06-26 21:05:32 +0000 UTC]
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1. It's not an app if that's anything
2. I don't think it's that strict. It is a drawing along with text, it's not that a biggie. Unless you have something that the admins stated AND where I can find it, your argument is pretty invalid.
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FlyingSky01 In reply to Tecsinom [2014-06-26 21:20:56 +0000 UTC]
.. im just say that only people that did a hyrid or written app should have that much text in description but still good anyways ..
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cailas-moon In reply to FlyingSky01 [2014-08-13 01:36:33 +0000 UTC]
I know this is an older comment, but please refrain from posting mini-modding comments on member submissions in the future, as we have rules against doing so to prevent the spread of misinformation. If there is something you feel a member needs to change or add, please either note the group or a moderator with the link(s) to the corresponding submission(s) so they can take care of it properly. Thank you.
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Tecsinom In reply to FlyingSky01 [2014-06-26 22:02:02 +0000 UTC]
Hmm, well, I guess I just have to check it then. :>
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FlyingSky01 In reply to Tecsinom [2014-06-26 22:32:28 +0000 UTC]
XD dude that usually in comics all text is in there not a huge wall of text in the description the size of a written app o...O
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Tecsinom In reply to FlyingSky01 [2014-06-27 09:29:43 +0000 UTC]
Pffft XD I get your point, I know that, but I just don't think I'm going against the rules for doing a drawing along with text beneath. It isn't the size of the things that matters, but what you include/put in it. Her: Drawning + Text
So that's that, I'm not going to change anything unless the admins say otherwise.
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