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I WON'T be making a whole comic out of this! Maybe I'll draw more scenes within the same setting/universe that come to my mind, though.
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omg, okay, but how would it continue?? You cannot leave us here wondering endlessly, yaay
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actually the next page of this scene is in work 
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oh anyway it's good news!
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OMGAWD This is perfect~~~
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I really love how you portray them both~~~ <3
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thank you~
oooh rainbow.... :3
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asdghjkl *moment*
So, geht wieder.
Also, ich glaube, ich wiederhole mich hier, aber: WOW. Großartig. Die Gesichtsausdrücke, und die Farben, es passt einfach. *schwärm* Und jotun!Loki rawr. Tolle Arbeit.
Ich würde mich auf jeden Fall freuen, wenn da noch Szenen nachkommen sollte. *hust* oder fic *hust*
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danke
ich geb mir mühe, aber Shir0 lenkt mich immer wieder mit frostiron ab, da fällt es mir schwer den beiden platz einzuäumen...
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danke
ich geb mir mühe, aber Shir0 lenkt mich immer wieder mit frostiron ab, da fällt es mir schwer den beiden platz einzuäumen...
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Das versteh ich, ist ja auch sehr ablenkend
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Wow! Honestly, I think this page is better than the last one you did, simply because of the expressions here (they're both beautiful, of course
The colouring..."hng" is the only way I can think of describing it! Loki's tattoos are gorgeous, and the icy setting of everything is beautiful
The only thing I would have to say against this piece is the 3rd panel; everything else is so close-up, so while switching to a more zoomed-out stance is good to balance it out, the fact that there's red in every panel except for that one (it's too far out to see Loki's eyes, I presume) makes it feel a tad awkward or cold. *shrug* A minor detail really, and I couldn't even put my finger on what was bugging me until the second or third read-through.
So, I ended up tying a lot. xD Bottom line, if you have the time and desire to draw more of this, I WILL EAT IT UP LIKE CANDY.
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Thanks again! I love you for your comments, honestly. 
Yes, Thor has only good intentions as usual, but he's too simple-minded, as usual.
I'm really not putting much effort into these pages, considering that I let them stay in that sketchy style and don't do proper outlines or panel frames, so I'm very astonished about the positive response. Must be the color.
You're probably right, a bit of red in the third panel would even things out, but there just isn't anything besides Loki's eyes that would be red in that environment... I don't think it's too juch of a problem, though. This is all for fun anyway. But thank you very much for letting me know about it, I will consider it in the future when I'm coloring. Constructive criticism, I love it.
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I think the fact that it's sort of sketchy is what appeals to me, though! Normally with comics it's perfectly polished, and almost slightly like's a screencap of an animation. But having the roughness of it there, combined with your wonderful colouring (seriously, it's gorgeous. Umph!) creates a contrast that I just find very enticing
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I'm glad to hear that. I personally very much enjoy the sketchy look, too, and it's great fun to work with.
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The art is these is gorgeous! I especially love the icy background. Please continue if you can.
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thank you, I'll try my best
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Interesting, how differently they see things. And that last panel with Loki is gorgeous!
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thanks
yes, Thor of course doesn't think like that, but Loki always sees only the worst intentions, or at least accuses others of them to make them feel bad. he seriously needs to grow in confidence...
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You're welcome! And poor Loki -- even as a prince, he hasn't had an easy life....
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This is fantastic
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thanks, I'll try my best 
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lol. I'm not a huge fan of FrostIron but you definitely had me at Thorki, and you do it so well
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hehe, of course you did
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I must say the style you've done this in is absolutely amazing; it really shows off how good an artist you are!
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