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TehArtMonkey — Break the Angels Wings sketch
Published: 2008-01-06 05:50:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 1201; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 10
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Mmmmkay... I want come crits on this one D;I like it so far and all, but I wanna know if there's anything that really stands out as being wrong or off in any way.
Unless it has to do with the wings. I'm quite happy with those.
Or Saber's Scythe. Because holycrapittookmealongtimeandIhateitnow. Unless there's anything I could do to fix it that wouldn't take too long D;
Oh, or the hair. I like that too. ;x;
Wish's head seems a bit small... And I tried to make his feet bigger since they used to be TINY. And I think his legs might be too short or something... Damnit drawing people from behind is hard! Dx
OH! If I did this right, if you hit download you should be able to download the event file. So if you have open canvas you can watch me draw it 8D I just thought it was pretty cool x'D 'Course, knowing me, I did it all wrong anyway XD
...I blame Tales of Symphonia for this. The soundtrack is very inspiring ;D So was the anime, but we'll not get into that xD
Wish, Saber and the art is all (c) Moi. =TehArtMonkey
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neither do i......HI!!!!
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HI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IM sitting right beside you in the place you know, right yes you do remember that day that we were in that place with all the books and we did those exams on the computer, see i knew you would remember! hehehe! im rambling YEA!!!! well anyway HI!!! i really like this picture!!! weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i'm a little hyper! if you havent noticed! BYE BYE!!!!
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XDDD
Yes, of course I remeber. That was only like... 3 hours ago? xD
Uhm, thanks x'D
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YOUR WELCOME!!!!!!!! YEA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! w00t!!!!! muhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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WHY YOU STRETCH MAH PAGE?! D8
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I really like this one! And thanks for the faves!
Plus, I don't really know what to critique. O_O I mean, it's your style and its good! The anatomy looks awesome and there's lots of movement. You can tell what they're doing and its your own! The angel looks a bit stiff, though, not much movement there, but the demon looks like he/she (srry, gender-confused atm) has a lot of movement, which is good. <3 Great job! I'm watching you!
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Thanks! Oh, no problem :3
Thanks very much! ^_^
I'll see if I can fix that :3 Ees a boy x'D but that's okay.
Thanks again!
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lol...no offense, right? It's just that a lot of anime boys and girls...you can't really tell anymore! XD
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oh, no, I completely understand x'3 Ees all good ^^
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this picture is really good! i really dont see anything wrong with it 0.o
the scythe kinda looks loose though... other than that it seems really nice!
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Thanks! ^_^
Loose? Hmm. Well, I'm gonna work on it more on the weekend, so I'll see if I can fix that :3
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ok so frist off:THIS IS FREAKIN' AWESOME! <3<3<3
good job, ur definatly getting better ^_^
now cc:
Wish: his hands need to look more lke they're coming form behind and wrapping around the shaft of the sythe, so youwouldnt see so much of the top/back of the lower hand, but more of the tos of the fingers. and the thumb on his other hand either needs to curve behind the shaft or come up higher since its too short. on the sythe, i know you said you hate it, but it looks waaaay to straight forward, whilest you did a good job on the persepctive of everything else, so try making the long part thinner at the end, with less of the bottom of it showng towards the end, so it looks like its going back in space also. otherwise wish looks really good, i like the hair, and geuss what? the feet look perfect!
Saber: looks good for the most part, cept his butt seems a bit off, and his feet look like your seeing them form theside, which isnt too bad on the upper one, but the other one should be seen more form the back. and the collar hes wearing looks straight on instead of in perspective like it should be too, mehbe tr drawing so you can see the top and the curve going around the neck a bit more...
hope i havent bored you with this critique, and keep up the good work, can't wait to see more!!!
oh and color this! it'll look so waaaayyyy kewl im sure of it ^_^
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Hahaha, thanks!
lol, you got them mixed up... XD Saber's the one with the scythe, Wish is the one in front x'D But that's okay :3
Hmm... Okay, I'll try that. I tried that... But I'll try again 
Yeah, I need to work on butts XD;; Okay. There's a lot of fixing I have to do to the legs and feet, anyway
I will. Might take me a while, but I will
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sorry for getting them mixed up, its also hard to write when you have to keep scrolling down cuz you can't write about the piccie and look at it at the same itme ^_^;;
and Yay !
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That's okay ^_^ I know what you mean, I had to keep doing that when I was replying to people xD;;
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it looks really good so far, what I suggest is that the guy in front with his back to use have his left leg more to the left and his knee more bent. It will be a more convincing battle scene even if they are flying
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Okay, thanks for the tip! ^^
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totally awesome XD and Tales of Symphonia is inspiring
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wish's left leg is a bit too thin, but other then that, just cleaning up all the smudgyness on sabers scythe would make it great.
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alrighty, thanks ^^ It's still a sketch, so everything'll be cleaned up later P;
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Wow!! This drawing is AMAZING!!! Umm a crit...if I had to say one I'd say the guy at the front: the angle of his foot makes his left leg look a bit twisted to me, but I wouldn't worry about it if I were you...it's still brilliant!
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The guy with the scythe... his arms are too short, I think. =3
And the other one's butt is a little square.
There could be more, but I don't see it yet. Good job thus far!
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Mean? Um... Sorry?
Thanks ^^
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SDATGFGHFGHDF omg i like Really REALLY looked over it and there isnt anything i can poijnt out O.o your so good with diffrent posing and making it look right ^-^ You better end up colouring this one ;B
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XD Thanks!
Oh, I hope so too >_o I've been leaving a lot of stuff unfinished lately... v_v
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D;......well at least you put your pictures up ^-^
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Yeah, I suppose that's something
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