HOME | DD
TempestPyre — Temp again
#dhampir #originalcharacter
Published: 2019-06-08 15:43:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 161; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 0
Redirect to original
Description
Had a go at trying to draw my girl again!Though I seem to be struggling on this picture in particular, as she always looks "manly" and I'm not sure how to fix it? I've tried:
- Narrowing the neck as much as I can, but it's hidden by her how her hair falls.
- Making her body narrower so she didn't look super wide, as her shoulders looks very broad beforehand
- Trying to emphasise her breasts, though her current shirt makes that tricky as it's a loose blouse style and I no can draw boobs apparently!
She looks somewhat better than the original but I'm not sure. I'm not sure where I can ask for advice though XD
Reference used: www.deviantart.com/kibbitzer/a…
Related content
Comments: 2
This is nice.
maybe it's the left shoulder and arm making it look like that. you could try moving them behind the torso a little.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Thanks! Yeah, something is definitely off on it IMO. I'll have a go at moving that arm!
👍: 0 ⏩: 0