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Published: 2017-05-05 00:28:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 8277; Favourites: 170; Downloads: 50
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Description UPD: Now in english : " D

My next art answer for russian ask star wars community : 3
The idea of that group is fun and simple. You sign up to respond from the name of one of SW characters and answer to all the questions that watchers of said group adress to the character in your care.
I`m responcible for Darth Maul there, obviously. This fun idea gives me so much inspiration!
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redner [2019-05-22 15:35:41 +0000 UTC]

Fantastic artwork.  Maul is one of my favorite Star Wars characters.
After episode one I drew maul climbing out of the pit and healing himself etc.  Then I realized if he had been cut down than he should've just died and I changed it to him playing a mind trick on obi wan.  The idea was that he   makes it look in obi wan's eyes as though obi cuts him down and then he can flee and sever his ties with studious.  Honestly it makes as much sense as any of the other story ideas hehehe.  It looks as though maul wants obi to jump back up.  He could force push him off the ledge or throw his saber at him but instead he showers him with ash like he wants him to jump back up so he can stand there and take the hit.  It's like there could've been more to it but that's all moot now with the expanded universe stuff.

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EmperorTenebrae [2018-06-06 16:40:02 +0000 UTC]

Maul was not raised by one of the most powerful Sith of his time, he was raised by the most powerful Sith of all time. This is confirmed multiple times.
Anyways, nice work.

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dobergirl102 [2017-12-04 04:19:33 +0000 UTC]

This is amazing!

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DarkSapiens [2017-07-18 00:01:34 +0000 UTC]

Very nicely done!

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smarsupial [2017-05-25 02:57:16 +0000 UTC]

this is terrific! I love that its both of them speaking to a third person but also to each other. And the art is terrific. The middle part is incredible. SO GOOD

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McShmoodle [2017-05-12 04:53:14 +0000 UTC]

Wow, this is really cool! The contrasts between Maul as a young man and old man are really displayed well, visually and textually.

One nitpick though. When old Maul says "The *fail* I had experienced on Naboo..." sounds a little off to a native English speaker. While not wrong, describing a failure (noun) as a "fail" (verb)  is something that is used in old internet memes. It sounds weird coming from Darth Maul, like if he said "YOLO" or "Swag" or something. The sentence would sound more in character if he said "The failure I experienced..." or even "The fall I experienced..." (Since fall can mean to fail or to fall down.)

Also, That's needs the apostrophe, and Jedi and Sith are capitalized   

Other than that, this is fantastic!  

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Templado In reply to McShmoodle [2017-06-18 01:25:48 +0000 UTC]

Once again, thank you for your input. Fixed those moments in text !

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Templado In reply to McShmoodle [2017-05-12 11:24:16 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for your input! Ill really take care of it. Thing is english is by no means my native language. And I reallly struggle with it sometimes!

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ArrogantVengeance [2017-05-05 14:09:08 +0000 UTC]

Wow...imagine that. With age comes wisdom...is that the same for Maul's case too? I have not seen much sign of that, however...it would be a very interesting part of his character development if he ever came out and said (or insinuated) this during his older years.

Revenge of the Fifth, btw

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DarthWill3 [2017-05-05 13:39:24 +0000 UTC]

Experience is a master you should always listen to.

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Fail-Seeker [2017-05-05 13:18:11 +0000 UTC]

The 4th is strong with this one!

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Jian89 [2017-05-05 08:45:42 +0000 UTC]

looks amazing ^^ only to bad I don't understand it XD

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Templado In reply to Jian89 [2017-05-05 13:12:56 +0000 UTC]

Taa-daaa! Now in english : 3

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Jian89 In reply to Templado [2017-05-05 13:20:28 +0000 UTC]

Yeah ^^

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Jieo360 [2017-05-05 00:55:41 +0000 UTC]

yeah will there be a English translation?!?!?

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Templado In reply to Jieo360 [2017-05-05 13:12:59 +0000 UTC]

Taa-daaa! Now in english : 3

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Talia23 [2017-05-05 00:37:14 +0000 UTC]

Will there be an english translation? ;-;

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Templado In reply to Talia23 [2017-05-05 13:13:07 +0000 UTC]

Taa-daaa! Now in english : 3

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