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Published: 2014-01-22 01:51:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 1777; Favourites: 35; Downloads: 12
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BEHOLD! THE BEST THING I HAVE EVER DRAWN!

As you can tell, I spent tons, and tons of time on this art piece. I really wanted to try and do as much detail as i could on Twilight here. The face is by far the best I have made, and her mane, is just the upmost quality I can deliver at the moment. Even the use of her magic is amazing, and the effects took hours to perfect. The shape of the body is spot on, and with my shading, just makes it whole. all in all, I think I have out done myself, and may take some time before I can do so once more.

Tell me what you guys think. I’m sure you can agree on this work, that it is my best thus far. feed back is always welcome c:

~ template93

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CommisarJhon [2014-03-29 19:30:23 +0000 UTC]

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Watch and youll dyign by beatiful picture :3 Perfetct line. Nice Quality and other #### yeah stuff. 10000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000/10 :3 but whatever. just so pefrect that im dyign. call medic.... but also its twilight what is main chaacther :3 and also books. Books spam activated *Books rain* what gotta be next book tornado? I dont care jsut more these please. Im very very very liek it. Just piece of art. Ecxel. lol lol lol lol *CommisarJhon got Inasnity and he spam lol and other stupid stuff. Enjpy your doom >:3* Srry but still lovely. Very lovely picture. I like. Only thing that mark is upside down XD

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Alter292 [2014-01-29 04:12:10 +0000 UTC]

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You know, I haven't watched enough of this show to get a good idea of what everything should look like, as in none at all, but I think you're really only a few steps away from making artwork as good as canon. If I were to critique this fine piece of such nobility would pay top dollar for, it would be that you exploited cell shading when I think a better style had already made itself self-evident. I'm sorry, but that error will cost you half of a point in the Technique rating. It was a hard half point to subtract.

I put 0.5 for impact because I'm still not going to watch mlp >.>

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Template93 In reply to Alter292 [2014-01-29 07:32:08 +0000 UTC]

haha, thanks either way : P

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LordMoonBiscuit [2014-01-25 02:16:53 +0000 UTC]

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Truly the best drawing of your time. It's beautifully done, the picture is the up-most quality; overall it's the absolute best drawing ever.

This drawing really digs deep and make us think; what is Twilight Sparkle? This image reflects off everyone's life and leaves one shivering in their chair just contemplating how complex this picture truly is. Is Twilight supposed to represent us as humans? or is she just a purple horse? No one but God knows.

The detail is astounding; Twilight feels as if she is a real entity that has entered our realm; astonishing. I can feel the individual strands of her mane; her magic looks almost too real. Twilight's cutie mark could never look better

Over all, amazing job. I will contact the Louvre right away.

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FinishLineMLP [2014-01-22 02:20:42 +0000 UTC]

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Now i'm just being picky so bear with me.

Lets look at this in layers. First off the effects essentially used to create the "horn glow" or magic aura could have been scaled down ever do slightly to allow for a more sparkles thus bringing the robustness out in her magic.

Mane and locks are good, i wont touch on those, could have been placed ever so slightly closer to the back of the vector line you used for the neck. (Just basically personal preference at this point. )

One thing that stood out immediately in a negative way for me was the placement of the far side shoulder. the blade seems to protrude and jot out ever so slightly towards the front. this will be an easy fix for future pieces by using a magnet point and aligning up the vectors more squarely.

Torso is fine, no issues there.

moving on down to the flank. you posed this pony in a profile view but used a 3/4 head turn. good choice but the cutie mark is skewed to far upwards as to indicate this symbol was used in a 3/4 view rig. Be careful to avoid these little mistakes as it takes away the consistency of the piece.

Tail looks fine although you could have curved the inside lines a bit more to give her a more luscious looking tail. A pony drawn this beautifully deserves as such.

So other than those few little details, well done on this piece and i look forward to seeing your next one. you did a really good job at Twitlight Sporkle. Id really like to see your view on Raidbone Dersh next

Cheers: Finish Line

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Template93 In reply to FinishLineMLP [2014-01-22 02:24:55 +0000 UTC]

This information will be great to use, for future works. glad you enjoy the image either way ^.^

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StopShot [2014-01-22 02:05:22 +0000 UTC]

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Your lines are too stiff and renders your art lifeless. I personally recommend squiggily for all the lines since it incorporates that feel for all things that live and breath.

Despite this your "backwards knee" technique on this equine appears to the very definition that is horse anatomy and I applaud you for that!

You give just the right feminine touch to her as well. The grace and beauty rivals that to modern day super models. All people who have Twilight as their waifu, please take a bow before this. This is as life-like as one can achieve.

I died a little today, but in its place new life sprung in my heart and in my inspiration. Template has learned from Celestia himself and has been enlightened with a revolutionary way of creating art in its true mastery.

11/10 Would fave again.

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Template93 In reply to StopShot [2014-01-22 02:09:45 +0000 UTC]

Love this critique as much as the last. Hopefully all the Twilight fans will love this till the end of time ^-^

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WickedSilly [2014-01-22 01:56:17 +0000 UTC]

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Beautiful clean lines.
Perfect pose.
Colors are spot on.
Never before have I seen such beauty. I am BLESSED to have this wonderful picture grace my eye.
I am not worthy.

The emotion in the eyes is what made this picture for me. I literally have a tear in my eye right now.
Now for the cutie mark.
More perfect than the show it self. Captures everything that my little pony represents.
Bravo good sir.
Bravo.
now i'm just wasting space because i don't know what else to type and have to teype at least 100 words.
10/10 would bang.

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Template93 In reply to WickedSilly [2014-01-22 01:58:23 +0000 UTC]

I couldn't agree more. And glad you enjoy this image, as much as I did drawing it. Thank you much for the Critique ^.^

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IlluminatiPete [2014-08-04 04:07:19 +0000 UTC]

Can I have something like this? This is really amazing. I offer my soul and my mom.

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Template93 In reply to IlluminatiPete [2014-08-05 15:38:26 +0000 UTC]

Master works like this take days though ;D Such a tall order to fulfill.

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wolfcreA [2014-07-07 06:34:34 +0000 UTC]

"Colors are spot on" -WickedSilly


I must say, that's a wise color selection you have there. More than 0+ colors!
I'm proud of you.

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Template93 In reply to wolfcreA [2014-07-07 16:15:05 +0000 UTC]

>w<

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JaniceTheFurry [2014-07-05 21:39:23 +0000 UTC]

20/10

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Template93 In reply to JaniceTheFurry [2014-07-05 23:10:24 +0000 UTC]

thank you ;-;

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JaniceTheFurry In reply to Template93 [2014-07-05 23:15:34 +0000 UTC]

you sir have inspired me in so many ways with this wonderful work of art
7898765 stars out of apple

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skylandershadic [2014-06-14 20:43:42 +0000 UTC]

For telling the true i dont now i draw more ugly than you but this is how i but ummmm ñeeeee?

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Template93 In reply to skylandershadic [2014-06-15 16:54:46 +0000 UTC]

I have no clue what you were trying to say :U

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FloweryFruitFangs [2014-04-24 18:36:40 +0000 UTC]

sweg 

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Template93 In reply to FloweryFruitFangs [2014-04-24 21:45:03 +0000 UTC]

: P

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BlankedApplebloom [2014-04-24 00:17:00 +0000 UTC]

9001/10
would kill for

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Template93 In reply to BlankedApplebloom [2014-04-24 00:20:19 +0000 UTC]

> : D

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Ratwo619 [2014-04-04 01:35:09 +0000 UTC]

You maybe think that fake arts of stupidity makes you earn friends but for me... I DON'T!!!! Listen Template I don't like people who are proud of stupidity and your proud of that? Well its time to show how TRUE ART IS MADE !!!!! With dance magic I have the power to feel the magic and if you don't know that? Well its time to show how dance art is made!!!!

Click here what dance that Im doing -----> m.youtube.com/watch?v=tJ0n02Ao…

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Template93 In reply to Ratwo619 [2014-04-04 01:54:34 +0000 UTC]

Zee art of zee dance!

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Ratwo619 In reply to Template93 [2014-04-30 02:09:35 +0000 UTC]

Man f*ck you I dont know what Zee but I like your arts that is cute and nsfw but not your f*ckingg attitude nigga

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Template93 In reply to Ratwo619 [2014-04-30 02:45:39 +0000 UTC]

"Zee" is a weird way of saying "The". An I think you should check your attitude before judging mine. I was being silly, and you just jumped the gun, and went straight to the swearing. At any rate, this conversation will be pointless, as you wont listen, and just come back saying "fuck you", "faggot", and whatever else you know. So to end this right off the bat, i'm just going to block you, and not worry about you any more.

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CommisarJhon [2014-03-29 19:24:25 +0000 UTC]

BEST ART EVER. JUST LOOK AND YOU SEE NO NEED TELL: 1000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000/10 :3

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CommisarJhon In reply to CommisarJhon [2014-03-29 19:24:50 +0000 UTC]

lol attemption

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CommisarJhon [2014-03-26 11:54:26 +0000 UTC]

WTF XD

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Template93 In reply to CommisarJhon [2014-03-26 17:51:59 +0000 UTC]

: D

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CommisarJhon In reply to Template93 [2014-03-29 19:23:34 +0000 UTC]

Twilight: Books. Me: Screw gravity. *Flying to space* Twilight: Books. Me: Shut up! Twilight: Books. *Im shot my self whit revolver*

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axelfirekirby [2014-01-29 22:43:53 +0000 UTC]

sTOP THIS JOKE!

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Template93 In reply to axelfirekirby [2014-01-29 23:21:33 +0000 UTC]

What joke : o

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axelfirekirby In reply to Template93 [2014-01-30 00:14:34 +0000 UTC]

the "draw something bad and expect great reviews joke)

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Template93 In reply to axelfirekirby [2014-01-30 03:40:49 +0000 UTC]

This was just me being silly : P


also wanted to see how many people would play along with it.

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axelfirekirby In reply to Template93 [2014-01-30 11:30:01 +0000 UTC]

WELL DONT DO IT AGAIN!

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Template93 In reply to axelfirekirby [2014-01-30 17:24:46 +0000 UTC]

you're no fun

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axelfirekirby In reply to Template93 [2014-01-30 17:31:53 +0000 UTC]

yes I am

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TheLostCinnamonRoll In reply to axelfirekirby [2014-03-31 00:06:29 +0000 UTC]

no, you aren't

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axelfirekirby In reply to TheLostCinnamonRoll [2014-03-31 00:10:08 +0000 UTC]

Yes I am

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KnightSmile In reply to axelfirekirby [2014-01-31 22:08:56 +0000 UTC]

No fun at all

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WittleKitties In reply to KnightSmile [2014-02-03 02:32:41 +0000 UTC]

ooh I wonder what will happen if the replys willl go off the screen .o.

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WittleKitties In reply to WittleKitties [2014-02-03 02:32:55 +0000 UTC]

No fun at alllllll >:I

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KnightSmile In reply to WittleKitties [2014-02-03 05:22:01 +0000 UTC]

not a but XD

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axelfirekirby In reply to KnightSmile [2014-01-31 22:19:44 +0000 UTC]

YES I AM!

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KnightSmile In reply to axelfirekirby [2014-01-31 22:23:48 +0000 UTC]

your a butt. *pats your head*

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axelfirekirby In reply to KnightSmile [2014-01-31 22:24:20 +0000 UTC]

stop saying mean things

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KnightSmile In reply to axelfirekirby [2014-01-31 22:30:17 +0000 UTC]

*knight hugs * Okay.

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axelfirekirby In reply to KnightSmile [2014-02-01 12:41:10 +0000 UTC]

ok

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