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Pardon some occasional consistency errors in the art.
Name: Addae Meaning: The Morning Sun
Breed: Komodo Lion (I feel like I want to change this, but the
name seems to be stuck, and I don't think I have another name to call this
species....Feel free to suggest a species name!
Gender: Female
Status: Refugee/Survivor
Physical Appearance Rundown: Komodo lions' noses are not
reptilian, but have more of the feline, lion structure which are excellent for tracking. They have big canines and sharp molars, indicating that this breed do not swallow their prey whole. The main colours consist of a deep charcoal with an ice-gray speckled across only the dorsal side of the back, the base of the tail, and wings, but can have a bit of variation in the saturation of these colourations. They were bred by genetic engineers to blend into places that barely see the sun and are covered in ash. (Hence the time period this breed is set in, the scenario of the aftermath of a war of mass-destruction) Komodos have four light blue eyes that have superb vision for hunting /searching, and their paws are broad enough to decently dig into the earth. They were built for endurance runs and fairly long lengths of flight time. All five limbs (tail is fifth) are muscle bound but flexible. Their fur is dense to insulate from extreme hot and cold weather.Glows when stressed, bred in to let scientists visibly see when trouble is afoot, but also may help intimidate. Overall a durable, resilient creature in mind and body. Addae specifically has one leg accidentally amputated, with the scars showing across the lower remaining section of that leg.
Addae's Personality and Bio: She reflects the traits that are bred deeply into these types of dragons, which are generally protective, serious, dependable, kind, and thoughtful, but can be easily mislead. She's also a hopeless kleptomaniac. Addae will fight for who she trusts deeply to the death.
She and her two brothers had been living in complete ignorance at what had been happening outside the virtual peaceful forests and rivers that they've been "living" in for their whole lives. While the human governments of the world's bickering had turned to full on raging wars that brought the countries together into two sides, the secret genetic engineers from Russia had been developing supercreatures that would survive close to the source of a nuclear radiation explosion that humans would normally die in. Both sides were taking massive damage and soon the fighting had become so vicious that the civilians and even the governments themselves weren't safe. With everyone who was in charge blown to pieces, the ones left to fight joined hands in exhaustion, and were now fighting for their lives in the scarred cities and lands. The secret genetic facilities did not escape the wrath of this war, and a jet from one of the sides crashed into the building and broken the virtual world. Addae and her brothers woke up. In short, they broke out of the facility, finding themselves in a desolate area that was once a forest, but all the trees were fallen and covered under the still-falling ash.
My next drawings will illustrate what happens next to the sibling trio.
Story may change.
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Comments: 23
Eibashi [2014-07-27 20:07:42 +0000 UTC]
wow..... this is really good, from the drawing all the way to the story truly amazing my friend
keep it up.
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TemporalEchoes In reply to Eibashi [2014-07-27 20:26:08 +0000 UTC]
Thank you ever so much! I will!
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Eibashi In reply to TemporalEchoes [2014-07-27 21:27:11 +0000 UTC]
your very welcome and I will +watch you too
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TemporalEchoes In reply to Eibashi [2014-07-27 21:52:19 +0000 UTC]
Awesome! Thanks once again!
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TemporalEchoes In reply to neontheairdragon [2014-07-10 20:22:42 +0000 UTC]
Addae's a she. It says in the description. And thanks so much!
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neontheairdragon In reply to TemporalEchoes [2014-07-10 20:23:55 +0000 UTC]
yeah I just realized as I sent the comment
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TemporalEchoes In reply to neontheairdragon [2014-07-10 20:29:13 +0000 UTC]
That's alright!
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neontheairdragon In reply to TemporalEchoes [2014-07-10 20:31:06 +0000 UTC]
thanks anyway great job
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Timcreo [2014-07-10 14:39:10 +0000 UTC]
Wow, that sounds like a story worth reading/watching.
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TemporalEchoes In reply to Timcreo [2014-07-10 17:04:16 +0000 UTC]
:> Thanks!
What I'm doing with the story is that with every picture that I draw that is related to the story, I will be writing a bit of the story in the description.
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Mindfreak80 [2014-07-10 06:38:43 +0000 UTC]
Wow, you've put my genetic-engineered creature story into its place, that's for sure xD
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TemporalEchoes In reply to Mindfreak80 [2014-07-10 17:05:17 +0000 UTC]
This only means that you can strive to be better!
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CopperheadYSF23 [2014-07-10 01:07:34 +0000 UTC]
Not to intrude in on this(because I already comment like crazy on your other stuff ), but the post apocalyptic thing caught my interest, and the character herself is really neat too, I especially like the big wings and how they merge with the tail.
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TemporalEchoes In reply to CopperheadYSF23 [2014-07-10 01:11:39 +0000 UTC]
Don't feel like you're barging in on anything! I always look forward to reading your descriptive feedback.
I've always thought that despite using the slightly unoriginal with the whole post-apocalyptic thing, I wanted to have my own version of such a world. And thanks for telling me what you think about Addae! Her wings are now slightly longer than that, I can't believe that this version is already out of date.
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CopperheadYSF23 In reply to TemporalEchoes [2014-07-10 03:15:29 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, that's good to know.
The post-apocalyptic thingy is indeed a facinating concept, and your version is just cool. You'er welcome, and the bigger the wings, the better! Excited to see an update...
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TemporalEchoes In reply to CopperheadYSF23 [2014-07-10 03:17:09 +0000 UTC]
There will certainly be an update sooooon!
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