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"Master? Master Yoketron? Bang, where is that guy?"
"Master! Master are you...aw, no..."
Jazz slowly gathered the grey form into his arms. Warpath stood behind him in stunned silence for a moment, his servos shaking.
"KAPOW, who DID this?!" Warpath exploded, his servos clenching into fists. "When I find that little scrap of useless slagmetal I'll...!"
Jazz ignored him, still staring into the grey and beaten face of his master, coolant gathering on his dried optics. "What am I gonna do? Slaggit, Yoketron, you said you would help me...what am I gonna do now?" He looked up as Warpath's fist collided with a broken wall, shattering it. His spark clenched as the usually hearty mech's voice unwound in a keen of grief and fury.
"W-warpath..." He whispered. "Walk with me."
Warpath glanced up briefly, then he slowly nodded and helped pick up the second body next to the first, a mystery Jazz intended to solve.
Jazz carried the original, walking slowly through the building that had long been his home. Echoes of sage advice mixed in the empty air with the curses of the mech stumbling behind him. Jazz bowed his head and whispered to the grey shell in his arms.
"I'll find him, Master. I'll find out who destroyed ya...and whoever tried ta save ya."
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Yay for crappy writing!
Anyways, I was looking at some old ideas I had buried and I realized that no one ever drew what happened after Prowl left, or how the other students reacted, so I thought I'd whip something up and this is what happened.
Hope you all like my vent-fic. I think it turned out pretty good for two hours work, even if I still fail at backgrounds.
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I'd like to write/draw more, but I don't have a lot of time. :C If someone wants to adopt this plot bunny for now, please let me know. I'd love to read/see it!
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Comments: 42

Achjira [2013-10-30 01:07:23 +0000 UTC]

So sad :'-(

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tera633 In reply to Achjira [2013-12-09 00:51:48 +0000 UTC]

Yeah.....Jazz will move on eventually, though. He's good that way.

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BlackSkeletonGirl [2013-10-27 01:47:43 +0000 UTC]

Wow!

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tera633 In reply to BlackSkeletonGirl [2013-12-09 00:51:55 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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BlackSkeletonGirl In reply to tera633 [2013-12-09 00:55:43 +0000 UTC]

Np!

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klevry1 [2011-08-26 03:59:29 +0000 UTC]

...i think i just MIGHT write a little short tory on this...interesting...how prowl and jazz were both of yoketrons students at the same time...and never met until later...hmmmmm

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tera633 In reply to klevry1 [2011-08-29 07:00:14 +0000 UTC]

LOL. I've been meaning to but never finished. Feel free to use the idea though! Just drop me a link when you're finished, plz? I'd love to read it!

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klevry1 In reply to tera633 [2011-08-29 07:01:20 +0000 UTC]

okay, but it will take a while, ive got a list of things i want to do but ill be sure to send a link when i do

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tera633 In reply to klevry1 [2011-08-29 20:26:10 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a bunch! I look forward to it!

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Sounddrive [2011-05-16 23:40:40 +0000 UTC]

The emotion displayed in this one pic is astounding!

Poor Jazz . . . I bet this was what it was like for him. And I wonder, where WAS Jazz when Prowl was training? Was he visiting, since I remember seeing a hologram of Jazz in the Dojo . . . so many questions and so many theories!

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tera633 In reply to Sounddrive [2011-05-17 15:53:52 +0000 UTC]

I tried.

Well, Jazz did indicate that he'd finished his training so maybe he was already out by the time Prowl was "recruited" into the dojo. Unless he finished the training on his own...or under another master... *coughs* But that's a plotbunny for another time I suppose.

In any case, glad you enjoyed the picture. :3

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Sounddrive In reply to tera633 [2011-05-17 22:18:59 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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glacierSCIENCE [2010-09-26 03:58:33 +0000 UTC]

I really feel the emotion in this. Nicely done

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tera633 In reply to glacierSCIENCE [2010-09-27 23:56:03 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. I worked hard on it.

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DragonAnimeParty [2010-07-01 13:56:03 +0000 UTC]

AW -hugs Jazz- Me am sad

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tera633 In reply to DragonAnimeParty [2010-08-25 15:52:04 +0000 UTC]


I iz sorry, but that WAS the point...

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DragonAnimeParty In reply to tera633 [2010-08-25 20:36:32 +0000 UTC]

Yeah ;_;

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Fourth-Goddess [2010-06-03 11:20:21 +0000 UTC]

AWWWW! Poor Jazzy! *huggles him*

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tera633 In reply to Fourth-Goddess [2010-06-05 18:15:41 +0000 UTC]

He definitely needs one...and Warpath kinda sucks at the "hug" thing. XD

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Fourth-Goddess In reply to tera633 [2010-06-05 18:16:27 +0000 UTC]

yeah...that chest cannon would stab your eye out

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tera633 In reply to Fourth-Goddess [2010-06-08 07:52:20 +0000 UTC]

EXACTLY what I was thinking.

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Fourth-Goddess In reply to tera633 [2010-06-08 11:04:17 +0000 UTC]

not much of a hugger...which sucks

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tera633 In reply to Fourth-Goddess [2010-06-08 17:25:23 +0000 UTC]

I guess one could always hug him from behind...XD

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Fourth-Goddess In reply to tera633 [2010-06-08 17:32:00 +0000 UTC]

yes ^w^ that would work XD

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C-y-n-d-i [2010-06-02 01:01:14 +0000 UTC]

That's so sad

I have a fic detailing Prowl's time with Yoketron, though I have a different take on Prowl than most. In the end Prowl does handle Yoketron's remains and it's kind of left in the air about how the others find out. I just can't see Prowl leaving him laying there...but anyhow: Faith in the Horizon [link]

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tera633 In reply to C-y-n-d-i [2010-06-02 21:28:21 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, but I had to do it. :C

I just started reading your story! It's fascinating!

I'll comment when I'm further into it!

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C-y-n-d-i In reply to tera633 [2010-06-02 21:50:00 +0000 UTC]

Cool, thanks!

And I totally understand. Poor Yoketron.

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tera633 In reply to C-y-n-d-i [2010-06-02 22:45:42 +0000 UTC]

Finished! Primus, I think I'm in love with this story! XD

So many comments, where to start? I love the bonds you made between spirituality and strength, the fact that Warpath is not an unfeeling bruiser, the tender reationships and surprise moments of humor and life lessons...it's so gorgeous.

Don't suppose...just wondering of course...are you going to write a story where Jazz finds out about Prowl's optics? OvO

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C-y-n-d-i In reply to tera633 [2010-06-02 22:56:06 +0000 UTC]

I have a whoooooooooole series called the Light series. If you look on my profile there is a panel pointing to my fanfiction offsite, since they have content DA would otherwise frown on -_-;

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tera633 In reply to C-y-n-d-i [2010-06-05 18:26:49 +0000 UTC]

*runs off and reads ALL OF IT*

*gapes* Omg...gorgeous...

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C-y-n-d-i In reply to tera633 [2010-06-05 22:05:06 +0000 UTC]

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tera633 In reply to C-y-n-d-i [2010-06-07 19:13:45 +0000 UTC]

*obsessed* I'm just gonna add you to my watch. This stuff is brilliant!

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C-y-n-d-i In reply to tera633 [2010-06-07 19:45:57 +0000 UTC]

Aww, thanks!

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Mellow-Striker911 [2010-04-16 03:42:03 +0000 UTC]

I promised myself that I'm... not..*sniff*...gonna... *teary eyes* cryyy~

scamper: *hands me tissue with his tail*

*uses his tail instead* cool picture tera and the story really fits with it ^_^

scamper: e_e yeah *wipes away the mucous* fits...

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tera633 In reply to Mellow-Striker911 [2010-04-16 03:59:33 +0000 UTC]

MG: *hugs* Aw...don't cry!

Thanks a bunch. I think this is one of my better pictures. And it's actually part of a storyline! Oh, wait...I wasn't going to tell anyone yet. Anyhows...thanks for nice review!

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Mellow-Striker911 In reply to tera633 [2010-04-16 04:11:51 +0000 UTC]

*hugs MG back* thank you

yer welcome ^_^ lol

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Zarak342 [2010-04-15 20:51:53 +0000 UTC]

D'aw this is so sad. *sniffles*
Poor Jazz and Warpath! The idea is really good, again one of those small situations that remained unseen in the cartoon. Opening up for these kind of pieces :3

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tera633 In reply to Zarak342 [2010-04-15 22:22:14 +0000 UTC]

Aw, thank you!
I think there should be more of these moments out there. And If I get a few days off, there will be!

...Someday...

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Zarak342 In reply to tera633 [2010-04-17 19:41:40 +0000 UTC]

Boy, do I know the feeling XD
It's really frustrating when you wanna do something and don't have the time.
But don't worry, eventually you'll get some time XD
... Eventually!...

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tera633 In reply to Zarak342 [2010-04-17 22:05:35 +0000 UTC]

NK. XC
Sigh...wish I didn't have so MUCH to DO...I'm even missing my birthay because of finals. :c Oh well...time rushes everyone.

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Zarak342 In reply to tera633 [2010-04-19 13:05:51 +0000 UTC]

Oh, it's finals? Ouch.
But fight and think positive! When it's done, you have time to do what you want! (I'm guessing)

You can do it!

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tera633 In reply to Zarak342 [2010-04-20 04:53:08 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the encouragement! I'll do my best!

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