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As much of a surprise runaway hit the story has become, I'll eventually be loading On a Cross and Arrow onto DA. It's just going to TAKE FOREVER. Maybe I'll just do it day-by-day, one chapter at a time.And while we're on DA, credit where it's due! Genderswapped Pony names originator is to !
In the meantime, have some scenes as they appeared in my head while I was writing.
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-The yellow one turned to look at them. Though the eyes were orange and the mane was crimson, there was no sign of eyelashes or a bow-adorned ponytail. Instead, a faded-red, backwards-pointed baseball cap adorned the young colt's head. He looked the group over, eyes full of worry. "GOLLY." he spoke, voice not that much lower than his original. "Y’all alright? Looks like y’all took a real tumble!"
-The orange mare leaned down in front of him. "Y'know... ah think ah kin' send a message... if y’all would like..."
Applebuck made a face at the sappy turn of events things were taking, but he was ignored as the pegasus looked back up at the farmer.
-The two white ponies collided together there in the middle of the boutique floor, hooves wrapped tightly around each other, as they hugged and nuzzled each other passionately, tears of joy flowing from their eyes.
"My DEAREST!!"
"My LOVE!!"
"OH How I've LONGED for this MOMENT!!"
"ME TOO! FINALLY, my LIFE feels COMPLETE!!"
-"Yipe!"
The three watching mares heard the shriek behind them, and turned their heads just in time to see Pinkie Pie jolted awake, her body shooting itself to her feet. Her bright blue eyes widened in surprise as her hindlegs kicked themselves out, before performing windmills at record speed.
"No... No! Nononononono!" Twilight panicked, her eyes as big as dinner plates. "There CAN'T be! Sweet Celestia there CAN’T be a Pinkie Sense for that!!"
-"Hi Pony-who-looks-just-like-my-best-friend-Rarity! Bye Pony-who-looks-just-like-my-best-friend-Rarity!"
His heart DID stop this time, as a filly-flavored afterimage of his friend landed right in front of him, before continuing on, following close behind the original. The two of them were bouncing towards Sugarcube Corner.
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Comments: 14
jebens1 [2017-03-20 14:50:00 +0000 UTC]
I've drawn scenes from On a Cross and Arrow too. Even scenes from On a Whisper of Wind. You should check it out.
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Rememberstar In reply to jebens1 [2017-07-19 22:18:12 +0000 UTC]
Can you remake that? It doesn't look like the same as animation style.
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NolyCS [2012-11-30 02:55:31 +0000 UTC]
oh god!!
This makes me wanna draw those scenes by myself!!!
those drawings are very inspiring, seriously!!!
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Choco-Clouds [2012-04-30 12:34:36 +0000 UTC]
ITS THE WHOPPER!
STAND BACK!!!
I love that story! I wouldn't let mom use the computer for this!!!!!
So eeeeevvviiilll!!!
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Chaos comes with chocolate rain guys.
CHOCOLATE RAIN!
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PrismaticAngel [2012-01-27 16:15:59 +0000 UTC]
Seeing this pic of just a few of the scenes from the fic, it just makes it all the better! I simply adore it!
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SuperZalex [2012-01-05 02:40:02 +0000 UTC]
Oh my god, i would do anything for this to be a sort of special episode or something like that.
I would be really happy if it were in season 3 as the first episodes!
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spikeisawesome11 [2011-12-25 05:39:13 +0000 UTC]
lol the one with pinkies hind legs spinning around was funny
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Rackenhammer [2011-09-18 00:00:53 +0000 UTC]
Ha! I love these; I just got finished reading the fic last night.
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