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Texapache β Darkness II Comic Entry... First Scene
Published: 2011-12-22 05:47:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 412; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 6
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Colored version of my black and white. I think it came out awesome. No one writes anything so I guess it sucks. To me it looks 3D. You are almost looking down the barrell of the signature pistols.Related content
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I think its really well drawn and i love the composition, but it would be better if the gun barrels were larger as theyr in the foreground =^__^=
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Thanks for the feed back...I'll play around with the gun barrel and see if I can extend it further into the foreground.
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I donΒ΄t think it sucks! IΒ΄m sure it took time to do it! and it has its value. Your colored version looks better than the other one. The work in a comic story is not easy. The art of drawing by itself is not easy, you can learn something new everyday although you have many time practicing! (I say it based on my own experience, I will be graduating as a graphic designer soon and studied animation long time ago, and I still don't know everything)
However, the more important thing is you continue working till the end. You will be very happy when you can see your work finished!!
I only consider that you have to work more with the proportions but you are in a good way! Good luck!!
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Thanks for not thinking my drawing sucks! lol. I like the colored version better than the b&w too. Congratulation on the graduated and becoming a graphic designer. I have never taken an art class in my life...so maybe that is why my proportions may be off!
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