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ufff!!finally i made the concept of my OC =.=
inspiration music of "evanescence: fallen, the open door, and in the shadows albums"
within tempation: "shot in the dark" www.youtube.com/watch?v=mLz61g… and "memories" www.youtube.com/watch?v=gsQIOg…
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Wolfs will fight for vengance if a brother or sister falls in battle, and they'll respect them with their lives", this is my saying...and reason for fight-Tex in the "wolf pack"
don't try to save me, because I'm already dead inside -adult D41
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about this adult Tex:
Unlike her past form, this D41 seems to be more sure of herself and with a serious look, this was a fact that i wanted to changue of the "original" look, that was more "inocent" and in my own opinion, a "damsel in distress" look for others.
this is the alternative look/story when she never was captured by ONI and spent all thes years alone for avoid that ONI follows her and kill or capture her beloved ones, Tex's personality may look cold, but is a Spartan faithful to the end, not to mention more bloody and her character is stronger. at same time, she hides her pain, and at first she can be cold heartless with people that she doesn't know.her confidence in people decreases considerably after those years alone, even she has doubt that if Derrick is her son.
otherwise the Asylum Tex (more :thumb266897430
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real name: Mary
Name (private): Derwolfsmeer
Born: New Harmony
hair color before the experiment: black blue
eye color before the experiment: Hazel
Service Name: Tex-D41
alias: Lady falcon
Rank: Lieutenant (first season)
specialty: close combat, using weapons of medium and short range.
specialist kill large and strong enemies. (like hunters or brutes)
Affiliate: UNSC
Raitings ONI:
Strength: 5/5 + plus
Resistance: 4/5
Speed: 3-5
perception 2/5
Derwolfsmer Mary, also known as spartan Tex-D41 or D41 only , is the main protagonist from the first line, plus several alternative stories. Mary will do anything in order to survive in the mysterious world full of dangers and challenges that will test their strength steel will....
background:
Born in the vicinity of New Harmony, mary was only child of both parents working on military projects, her mother Melenie was serving in the UNSC as a personal project manager while his father Maxwell (who had recently divorced his wife ) supposedly working on a separate project to help sick people in the colony.
Mary was a shy and unsociable girl at first, but despite the problems, Mary demonstrated skill and ability in their primary eduacion installation.
time later she formed friendships with a foreign girl, who had come from a humble village, both established a strong bond, in which she was given a personal item (a stuffed cat handmade ) as a symbol of brotherhood and promising to be friends to the end.
prism spartan project:
Mary was abducted and used as a volunteer of the "prism", a variant of spartan II project along with other candidates.
she was the last recruit out of cryogenic sleep and eventually it seemed to have less potential, even though her body had responded well to the changes that she had.
she later was assigned to the D team, led by the spartan Ivette-D47.Mary, without presenting the strength and initiative of a spartan, in addition to her poor performance, she was treated like scum even from her own teammates, exept for the spartan Neves-D43, both made it during several and (sometimes...hard) missions that tested them.
after a long time, In one of those naptime after the mission, she began to remember about her past, recognizing Neves as her childhood friend, granting her the stuffed cat with which she had made a promise long ago, but the recruits D43 insisted that she stayed with her, promising her that no matter what happened, if for some reason was not there, mary would play with it in the most difficult times, like her (because for Neves, it was a gift from her deceased mother) who was reminder she would have to be stronger and never give up
Mary began to try to improve on her skills to earn the respect of their peers and as she had promised, be stronger, which in a short time had begun to show off, despite the problems and even the demands from their superiors.
Later she Opted to escape along with several recruits to their home next to her mate.but without success because they were recaptured by ONI personnel.
After this, Mary and her team was assigned to a mission of classification S, where they were ambushed. resulting his dead team and she being the last alive, trying to escape her attackers, mary was badly wounded and fell off a cliff. being left for dead by her abusers.
Return to action:
She was found by the UNSC, then at the time of her recovery she later was classified as a more spartan in the fight of covenant. but her its origin was unknown. mary was enlisted to active duty shortly after. slowly remembering what had happened. but without understand how she ended there.
Mary tried to find out about Prism corporation, creating several controversies since it was believed she had lost his memory...and according to the archives of the UNSC and ONI,the prism corporation or project that "didn't exist in the database"
D41 was assigned to assault team called "spear", where among them she met the sniper spartan rox-Dk19 and 3 Very Special marines for her: called sheperd, dante and mark .
during her journey.... Mary must find about of the corporation and the reasons behind it, finding many allies and enemies in a peculiar corporation known as ISIS, including who would be her rival and deadly enemy to death (Runa).all this unraveling the mysterious and dangerous secrets behind the galaxy.
personalities and traits:
-Tex as her old teammates from "prism CORP"was modified due to experimentation, however unlike the other recruits, her eyes and hair changues were slow because of side effects, leading to the conclusion that his body had little prism but strangely there was no serious consequence in her body.
- her left arm was severed by her eternal rival Rosewald Runa, an oversight in the episiode of "sword dance". then it was replaced with a robotic prosthesis, which is concealed with a glove and long sleeve in formal wear, when she leads a "civilian life" in her naptime, so to avoid being identified as a spartan.
skills and habits:
Mary despite her appearance,she have a strength that allows her to carry heavy stuff, even for an average spartan.. from give -hand to hand- with a mighty hunter or brute, to lift large vehicles.
typically loads the basic battle rifle and a gun of short range, but if she have the opportunity to use heavy weapons, she uses them.
as time passes,she develops a preference for energy swords of Sanghelios.therefore she decided to retain one after one of her missions, having being useful in her first match against Runa.
Tex commonly she hardly control her feelings, thing which brings problems and that's no way to behave in a soldier. insomuch that on certain occasions she has come mourn in silence with her helmet on.In serious situations, at first she hardly was calm and she couldn't avoid shaking.
-Despite Be a physically a strong person, Tex feels fragile inside and sometime she hates feeling helpless, trying with all her might, but certain occasions she's not successful, she always try as much she can, as it would be a soldier.
Tex is true to her 'code 'of never leaving anyone behind. caring about the lives of others, especially innocent people. she tries to stand and swears to protect and save as many as she can.
she loves food of animal origin and usually gets very hungry because her metabolism, but also she likes the desserts, including cheesecake with chocolate, when she have the opportunity, mary doesn't hesitate to buy one when she is "a civilian".
- Mary enjoys rain and snow, which so often she takes long walks to relax.
-sorry for bad english -_- , still in progress. haha...
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Comments: 50
Kiadendoom [2011-12-29 19:05:27 +0000 UTC]
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I very much like this story very very Creative, i like the way you decided to make it, its almost like you took a Spartans story and than mixed it up. which i think is nice, it was sad yet shows how hard the life of a spartan is. But also took it a little bit further, she seems more rebellious against ONI compared to most Spartans again very original and creative. now onto the style you have chosen, (or i should say you and the fans) She looks much more serious and for some reason to me it looks more real. it definitely shows her past just from her look, like you can tell she has been through some really bad stuff (the missing arm helps that as well lol) so all and all i say very well done and keep up the good work
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TexD41 In reply to Kiadendoom [2011-12-29 19:43:40 +0000 UTC]
first for all, thank you very much for critique this picture .
honestly, at first i didn't had planed to make her a story, for me, she was just a spartan representation of myself, but, since i had a roleplay with almost a year ago, i started to think in a story for her (improvised at first), and changue a lot of aspects of Tex (much psychological as physical.), then...she just was turned in a OC more xD.That's where I started to write and think her bio and explain some aspects like the blue hair and clones (the truth, i didn't had idea where her hair began to be "blue" in this way as in previous drawings she only possessed black hair..).
my inspirations are obviously halo legends and the ONI revelion was inspired for the RP that...again i had with ~ODSTshane ,which main character is agaist ONI too .at same time, that would give a twist to the story, besides the war with the classic enemies (elites, grunts, brutes etc), lets be honest, even in the original halo ONI can be the real monster (kidnaps,experiments, blah blah)
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again thanks a lot for the details and view point , since i really like to changue a lot my characters from their past for to their future and very changed look
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thanks for you critique, very aprecciatte it
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TheLoneB-312 [2016-05-10 01:19:46 +0000 UTC]
I was wondering if you could give me some tips on how to make your OC look more like a child even with some innocence at times for those younger year drawings and how to trade all of that over into a more older mature face that's seen battle?
Kind of like you did for "Classic Tex" and the older version of her.
I've been trying to draw my OC Marie in her younger years, especially as a child with that sort of innocence and youth to her, however, I always either end up with a twenty year old instead of a six year old or a war stricken face instead of an innocent, not yet tainted face.
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TexD41 In reply to TheLoneB-312 [2016-06-13 22:22:03 +0000 UTC]
it depends of how close are the eyes of the nose (eyes never grow), and the shape of the face, but eyes are more important...
img01.deviantart.net/c7c8/i/20…
This may be more noticeable if you use a anime style.
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Kelzyra [2015-01-03 07:34:40 +0000 UTC]
"Time to run, idiots" ROFL I love that sketch the best you put so much character into just that bust!
But all of it is beautiful and so creative! Great work
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TexD41 In reply to Kelzyra [2015-01-04 04:56:57 +0000 UTC]
thanks a lot, i aprecciatte the comment
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dr-dread1234 In reply to TexD41 [2016-03-17 09:00:12 +0000 UTC]
she is awesome, but seems a little bipolar, am I correct by saying that as a guess or is she just miserable?
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TexD41 In reply to dr-dread1234 [2016-03-17 23:23:45 +0000 UTC]
who knows, i made a reboot long time ago, this pic...is old
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Marine1337 [2013-08-10 01:14:21 +0000 UTC]
Tex went from a "Damsel in Distress" to a "Femme Fatal" in... I forget
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TexD41 In reply to Marine1337 [2013-08-10 02:08:32 +0000 UTC]
its an old concept . at first i planned to make a more mature tex.
but then i decided to kill her and put her remplacement clone....its complicated i blame the RP! XD
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biduke In reply to TexD41 [2013-09-07 13:51:44 +0000 UTC]
no manches sabia que no era el unico que pensaba eso XD ves no me culpes XD
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TexD41 In reply to biduke [2013-09-07 15:26:30 +0000 UTC]
pero sirvio sirvio! -n- pude obtener ambos XDDD
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Marine1337 In reply to TexD41 [2013-08-10 02:25:03 +0000 UTC]
Bring her back, an RP is not part of a Story, it's just for fun.
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TexD41 In reply to Marine1337 [2013-08-10 02:45:18 +0000 UTC]
i know . RP is just for fun and everything, and you can take ideas and inspiration for your story too
D: that was that happened
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Marine1337 In reply to TexD41 [2013-08-10 02:47:09 +0000 UTC]
K, but I'm not making a Halo Story, I only RP in the Halo Universe.
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TexD41 In reply to Marine1337 [2013-08-10 03:03:39 +0000 UTC]
ohh i see o3o
well, i do both things XD
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Marine1337 In reply to TexD41 [2013-08-10 03:05:20 +0000 UTC]
Say, you wanna have a Role Play?
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rc-1260 In reply to TexD41 [2012-01-02 22:19:28 +0000 UTC]
no problem will we be seeing more of future tex?
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spartanREDEMPTIOM [2011-12-31 17:20:19 +0000 UTC]
en tu historia spartan cuando perdiste el brazo?
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TexD41 In reply to spartanREDEMPTIOM [2011-12-31 17:29:13 +0000 UTC]
recuerdas a Runa? (la chica de pelo blanco psicopata de ojos rojos xD).
digamos que en su ultimo encuentro, espada+brazo no se llevan D:
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spartanREDEMPTIOM In reply to TexD41 [2012-01-01 18:53:10 +0000 UTC]
hubo un descenlace fatal...
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TexD41 In reply to spartanREDEMPTIOM [2012-01-02 22:15:53 +0000 UTC]
en el primer encuentro, no del todo.
el segundo, se determinara quien caera, el brazo es solo una "pequeñia" perdida comparado con que pierda toda la batalla
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spartanREDEMPTIOM In reply to TexD41 [2012-01-03 06:54:59 +0000 UTC]
ahhh, cuando sera la batalla definitiva?
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TexD41 In reply to spartanREDEMPTIOM [2012-01-03 17:29:03 +0000 UTC]
probablemente tendran su batalla final en la historia de Derrick
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spartanREDEMPTIOM In reply to TexD41 [2012-01-03 17:49:53 +0000 UTC]
cool! espero ver esa historia!
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TheOracleDragon [2011-12-29 00:26:40 +0000 UTC]
Pretty wick, cool and awesome! Nice to know more back story and information about her.
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TexD41 In reply to TheOracleDragon [2011-12-29 00:30:14 +0000 UTC]
thank you very much!
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it's wasn't something easy...ughhh, i have a lot of ideas in my head, but not much time...and i'm not so good at writing
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TheOracleDragon In reply to TexD41 [2011-12-29 00:36:45 +0000 UTC]
Welcome!
You did very well with this, a few spelling errors but you did well with the information and giving out the details which is pleasing to see and read. Gives you more feeling for the character and get to know them better.
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