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Published: 2011-09-06 05:34:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 477; Favourites: 13; Downloads: 3
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Description I shan't have another dream, hope, or desire;
Everything was lost and killed in the fire.
The past has consumed the life of today,
And there aren't any tears for the things that I say.
I don't care much if I live or die,
For death would be better than living a lie.
The fire still rages way out of control;
Burning my heart, my mind, and my soul.
Myself is something I should reconstruct,
Yet all I want is to self-destruct.
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Comments: 23

adhdkit [2011-09-10 04:13:41 +0000 UTC]

this is freaking amazing!! very well written!!

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Texting In reply to adhdkit [2011-09-10 05:28:58 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much! xD

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adhdkit In reply to Texting [2011-09-17 00:08:13 +0000 UTC]

anytime!!

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LoveMusic210 [2011-09-09 17:44:28 +0000 UTC]

Ah loooooove it. It's terribly sad of course, but very well done.

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Texting In reply to LoveMusic210 [2011-09-10 02:43:14 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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LoveMusic210 In reply to Texting [2011-09-11 03:05:48 +0000 UTC]

Noooo problem

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Neisanna [2011-09-06 12:25:32 +0000 UTC]

I really like this one! And you're absolutely right.. I know tons of people like this and honestly it is really sad.

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Texting In reply to Neisanna [2011-09-06 17:35:23 +0000 UTC]

isn't it, though? :c

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Neisanna In reply to Texting [2011-09-06 22:44:46 +0000 UTC]

It is. D:

But you've got beautiful poetry skills I might add.

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Texting In reply to Neisanna [2011-09-06 22:52:19 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, bro! :}

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TheRuinsOfMan [2011-09-06 11:16:24 +0000 UTC]

good poem

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Texting In reply to TheRuinsOfMan [2011-09-06 17:35:09 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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FallenfromtheStarz [2011-09-06 05:52:13 +0000 UTC]

well done

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Texting In reply to FallenfromtheStarz [2011-09-06 06:00:31 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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FallenfromtheStarz In reply to Texting [2011-09-06 06:03:34 +0000 UTC]

our very welcome.How long you been writing for?

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Texting In reply to FallenfromtheStarz [2011-09-06 06:04:48 +0000 UTC]

just for a couple years . (:

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FallenfromtheStarz In reply to Texting [2011-09-06 06:05:57 +0000 UTC]

wellI like yer writing a lot

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Texting In reply to FallenfromtheStarz [2011-09-06 06:06:33 +0000 UTC]

why thank you very much! ^^

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FallenfromtheStarz In reply to Texting [2011-09-06 06:10:35 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome.I've already read them all.Your very good with that rhyme scheme.You ever think of changing it up? You should try free flow poetry."Poetry without a rhyme scheme" If you ever get writer's block,or feel your words just do not sound like it's what you wanna say,try referring to other styles,and write many poems.Sometimes what I do,is when I write a poem,I write five versions of the same line,then pick which one is appealing in all senses and nature to me as well the other reader.Just saying.Your a very good poet.I'dhate to see someone so talented get writer's block

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Texting In reply to FallenfromtheStarz [2011-09-06 06:17:08 +0000 UTC]

I've written a few free flow poems in the past but I'd only liked one enough to end up submitting it. Maybe I'll try it again sometime soon.
Thanks for the compliment, I'm speechless! (:

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FallenfromtheStarz In reply to Texting [2011-09-06 06:35:51 +0000 UTC]

Your very welcome.You even inspired me to write a poem,although I do not know how good it came out,it was spur of the moment,and I did not write it I would forgotten it.Thanx to your rhyme scheme poems,I have created my own.I even read all your poems again,and favorited my favorite ones that I've seen you write.And remember,do not write just about one thing,or feeling,write about everything,every feeling,under the sun.Explore every area within you.For example,I like writing about my experiences and feelings,but I also try to convert into more simple things like robert frost does in many of his nature poems,or homer and how he talks about the gods and achillies,or maya angelou writing about a caged bird,things like that.Write about all things,even if its as simple as an animal you saw,a time you fell down,something you ate,a place youve been,a tree,time,explore all those areas,like a space between every sense you have,because theres millions upon millions of things.You might awaken the writer within you to go beyond your own means

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williamszm [2011-09-06 05:47:56 +0000 UTC]

Nice poem, very striking rhymes. They really push the flow along well.

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Texting In reply to williamszm [2011-09-06 05:48:50 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I appreciate the feedback. (:

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