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Published: 2013-10-05 17:10:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 30638; Favourites: 496; Downloads: 630
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A TG caption commissioned by the veritably awesome This caption was really hard for me as I had a massive case of writer's block in the middle. I hope it turned out well anyway.I take no credit or ownership of the picture attached to the story. It was made with implicit permission from the owner.
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Comments: 32
kyoshira71 [2013-11-02 22:49:22 +0000 UTC]
Excellent job on the cap, I am sorry for not commenting earlier. I really enjoyed the smart story and the way it ended was just perfect. Thanks for making this cap for me.
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TF-Wizard In reply to kyoshira71 [2013-11-02 22:50:44 +0000 UTC]
No problem! I'm just glad you had as much fun reading it as I had writing it.
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TF-Wizard In reply to SonicMasterHero [2013-10-11 00:25:36 +0000 UTC]
Wish I could take credit for the picture...but I can't.
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SonicMasterHero In reply to TF-Wizard [2013-10-11 00:27:55 +0000 UTC]
Its ok. ^^ so I see my tg hasnt came yet, hm?
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TF-Wizard In reply to SonicMasterHero [2013-10-11 00:30:39 +0000 UTC]
Er, um, all of the free requests go into a big folder...I have no idea which is yours...
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SonicMasterHero In reply to TF-Wizard [2013-10-11 00:31:45 +0000 UTC]
Me TGed into Samantha Maxis...
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TF-Wizard In reply to SonicMasterHero [2013-10-11 00:33:05 +0000 UTC]
I thought I told you I don't do TF's into specific characters.
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TF-Wizard In reply to SonicMasterHero [2013-10-11 01:34:55 +0000 UTC]
You could send me a picture if you want...no idea when it'll get done though.
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JanusDaDefender [2013-10-08 14:38:44 +0000 UTC]
Nice work. I detected a little of what I'm guessing was your personality in the narrative, which actually made this piece more entertaining, but I feel like you should introduce even more of your personality into the narrative next time, try and experiment with it, even if it's not first-person perspective.Β
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TF-Wizard In reply to JanusDaDefender [2013-10-08 15:04:24 +0000 UTC]
That's interesting...where are you seeing it?
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JanusDaDefender In reply to TF-Wizard [2013-10-08 18:37:15 +0000 UTC]
"But watching a man literally do nothing is rather boring for you and I, so let's move onto another player in this tale."Β
That's one of the few example sentences I saw which kinda prove my point, but, honestly, mate, I don't think you should be asking a question like that. It's kinda weird for an author to ask their reader where they detected the author's unique presence in the story/passage, especially since you could probably reread your prose and find what I was talking about... Β
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TF-Wizard In reply to JanusDaDefender [2013-10-08 18:40:48 +0000 UTC]
Oh, I was wondering if you were talking more about the writing style/narration or content of the story itself. Like if you thought one of the character's represented me or whatever.
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bobby9133 [2013-10-07 15:17:25 +0000 UTC]
awesome job with the story one of my newΒ favouritesΒ Β Β
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TF-Wizard In reply to bobby9133 [2013-10-07 15:38:30 +0000 UTC]
Happy to hear that! What about it made it one of your favorites?
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TF-Wizard In reply to unit1138 [2013-10-07 04:58:58 +0000 UTC]
Once it has been shattered...it can never be repaired.
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unit1138 In reply to TF-Wizard [2013-10-07 07:02:56 +0000 UTC]
*Turns to camera* NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
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DMS1319 [2013-10-05 20:14:03 +0000 UTC]
Good caption. Odd though that you opened up with introducing an unmentioned character. Was it for a joke or is there another reason?
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TF-Wizard In reply to DMS1319 [2013-10-05 20:25:27 +0000 UTC]
Just a joke. Maybe I'll use it later.
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Kiroku09 [2013-10-05 18:09:34 +0000 UTC]
Great Caption.... Is it bad that Sam reminds me of my brother? He slept through a tornado once, and just shrugged when I told him about it.
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TF-Wizard In reply to Kiroku09 [2013-10-05 18:11:38 +0000 UTC]
Heh, that's kind of interesting.
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Kiroku09 In reply to TF-Wizard [2013-10-06 08:34:05 +0000 UTC]
(Sigh) And the truely sad part is, he's done it more than once. Anyway, some unforseen circumstances made it so that I couldn't post my stories today but, they'll be up sometime tomorrow.
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TF-Wizard In reply to Kiroku09 [2013-10-06 16:40:59 +0000 UTC]
No reason to worry about it.
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TGCapsLover [2013-10-05 17:35:50 +0000 UTC]
Great caption ! the story is full of particulars and the picture is amazing...who wouldn't have a rommate like her now !
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TF-Wizard In reply to TGCapsLover [2013-10-05 18:02:49 +0000 UTC]
It was a fun one for sure.
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