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TF-Wizard β Two Souls, One Loneliness
Published: 2013-09-10 02:33:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 20239; Favourites: 211; Downloads: 252
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The second commission from the always wonderful . This one was a very long and involved story for me. I really loved it. As a twin myself, I never really feel very lonely, I almost always have someone beside me. I thought about how to make a good story, and with the picture I settled on a heartwarming one, where two people with sad lives find happiness in one another. At first, I struggled with this cap, until I learned that I should write about Sally as well, which really helped make the cap come together. This one, more than most of my captions, truly felt like a story. I loved writing it. I have two more commissions from Kyoshira, I'll try to make the next one a little less melancholy and a little more light and fun. For now though, I truly hope you are happy with my work.As always, I do not own the picture, I can't even claim that I found it.
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Thanks! So happy to hear that!
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Wow!!
this was a very moving story!
definietly like the concept of turning into a girl at the end!!
and beautiful picture too!
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Turning into a girl is well and good, but I'd want to turn into a girl who's talented at drawing and a little notty. You're awesome Tiffy, keep being you
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Thanks. It was a fun story to write.
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Finally I'm able to read through some of your captions again - real life has been rather busy on my end since I've last commented.
Anyways, though - sometimes a break from reading them can be benefitial, as you have something to look forward to once you have the time for it again.
Regardless to say, I've enjoyed this one a lot. It's not just the TG part, I'd even go as far as to say that it's a minor thing compared to the overall story, and I just liked the concept. Definitely one of my favorites from you so far.
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Thanks, it was a really fun one for me to write, I worked extra hard on it.
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*sniff* I'm... I'm not crying... but it's so... sweet...
Hakkyou: *sob* Q-quit fooling yourself, you b-baby, there's a waterfall coming out of your eyes...Β
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Sorry to make you cry...
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I love it when a transformation brings happiness.
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This is a sweet story. And I am a twin as well.
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Nice to meet another twin. And I'm very glad you liked it. What did you like about it?
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I guess it just the standard stuff, and that it has a nice ending to it.
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Thanks for your feedback.
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Thanks! Do you really think so?
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Of course I do. It's so cute and touching.
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Would you consider your TG captions thematically deep?
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Maybe not Thematically deep, but probably deeper than most of the captions out there. When I make a cap, I focus on making a story, so I come up with characters and plots that (hopefully) the picture supports. Too many captions are essentially a written sequence, with cardboard characters. I hope mine are a little deeper, and I do that through actually giving them a backstory and thus motivations, which propels them through the story. I can talk more if you want.
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No, I think I see where you're coming from.Β The only reason I asked that question was because I consider your caps to be some of the best short-formΒ erotica I've ever read.
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P.S. As a fellow tg'er, I would loveΒ to hear some of your thoughts on the genre as a whole.
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I'd love to talk about the genre as a whole, I just don't have the time at this precise moment. I'm glad you think my stories are good though.
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the tear wont stop rolling, you brilliant mastermind
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Thanks. I really worked a lot on it.
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no prob, it was a really heart warming too
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Thanks. I'm glad it worked for what I meant it to.
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Great caption, nobody can survive in this world alone. It's a simple and honest truth.
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Yup! THat's what the cap's about!
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Yeah, i've felt that way myself before. It's something that i wouldn't wish on my worst enemies.
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(Sigh) Yeah, once you feel it you allways can remember it even if you'd rather forget it.
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Thanks. I'm really glad it ended up heartwarming and not overdramatic or anything.
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no, it was heart warming
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Excellent job on the cap, I really love the approach you took and the wonderful, heartfelt story you weaved. Thanks for this amazing cap.
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