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Lineart:Coloring:
Here is the colored version of one of the wonderful drawings does.
Original lineart: [link]
I've colored using the program 'Paint Tool SAI' and tell me, any feedback of how I can make it better? I'm just a beginner at this.
Oh yeah, I also added a speak balloon because I couldn't leave it empty.
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Comments: 47
DaWrecka [2012-12-14 01:20:53 +0000 UTC]
Wouldn't saying something like that be pretty much an open invitation for any pervs in earshot to cop a feel? Poor word choice, dear! Put a little more thought into your first statement next time you get turned into a girl!
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TGedNathan In reply to DaWrecka [2012-12-14 16:18:32 +0000 UTC]
thanks. But I am a bad writer ya know.
So don't say I've got poor word choice when I alreaddy know.
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DaWrecka In reply to TGedNathan [2012-12-14 19:49:57 +0000 UTC]
I was more directing that comment at the character. Sort of a failed attempt at humour.
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TGedNathan In reply to DaWrecka [2012-12-15 12:19:14 +0000 UTC]
ahah! Sorry, I'm bad in seeing humor. I think there must be a wink to give it as a joke. lol
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TGedNathan In reply to TGcannon [2012-11-28 22:31:15 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, oh yah I've finished the colouring of your drawing!!: [link]
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Wimpe [2012-11-19 20:40:31 +0000 UTC]
"Is it just me, or does my chest feel heavier?"
It's just you (i.e. it's just your own flawed perception). Just like it's just your own flawed perception that your waist is narrower, your hair is longer & lighter, your skin is smoother, your shorts & top are much cuter, your butt is curvier & fuller & tighter, your jewelry is girlier, and your fingernails are longer & much more colorful.
Yeah, it's just you. Nothing to be concerned about, move along now, that's a good lass - er, I mean good "lad".
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SonicMasterHero [2012-11-19 07:24:03 +0000 UTC]
HAND ME THE BOOK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11
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ronmart12 [2012-11-19 05:51:00 +0000 UTC]
Not bad, not bad at all. And I should know because I color too
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TGedNathan In reply to ronmart12 [2012-11-19 20:15:29 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! You've also made some nice colourings!
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TGedNathan In reply to Escafa [2012-11-18 10:28:18 +0000 UTC]
thank you. I colour more drawing/sequenses of yours. Only if you want.
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Escafa In reply to TGedNathan [2012-11-18 16:22:26 +0000 UTC]
Absolutely, I'd love to see more.
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TGedNathan In reply to Escafa [2012-11-19 20:53:30 +0000 UTC]
Great I'll colour this: [link] of yours if you want.
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TGedNathan In reply to Escafa [2012-12-08 22:54:51 +0000 UTC]
I'm done with the colouring: [link]
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Horus2299 [2012-11-17 22:24:27 +0000 UTC]
Still having a bit of trouble with that English verb conjugation?
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TGedNathan In reply to Horus2299 [2012-11-18 10:25:14 +0000 UTC]
Omg! I can't even handle one sentence !!!
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Horus2299 In reply to TGedNathan [2012-11-19 02:45:32 +0000 UTC]
Maybe instead of just complaining I can help out with a little chart:
When you use a present-tense verb in English you only put an "s" at the end when you're talking about another singular object. For example, it would be:
I feel, you feel, he/she/it feels, we feel, they/you (plural) feel. You're almost always going to use "feel" and not "feels", so if you aren't sure, it's better to skip the s. If you just remember (not "remembers") that, you'll improve a lot.
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TGedNathan In reply to Horus2299 [2012-11-19 20:18:43 +0000 UTC]
Oh thanks !!!! I didn't knew that.
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Horus2299 In reply to TGedNathan [2012-11-20 02:35:15 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome. I decided it was kind of stupid to just tease you without explaining what you did wrong.
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TGedNathan In reply to Horus2299 [2012-11-20 20:30:36 +0000 UTC]
I now realize I'm dumb!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
lol!
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Horus2299 In reply to TGedNathan [2012-11-20 21:14:23 +0000 UTC]
No, no I said I would have be dumb for making fun of you without trying to help. I'm sure you can gets get better with practice.
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TGedNathan In reply to Horus2299 [2012-11-21 17:16:58 +0000 UTC]
NO that is not dumb but just bad
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Horus2299 In reply to TGedNathan [2012-11-21 19:07:06 +0000 UTC]
Ok, but I'm actually trying to help you now. I thought you would figure out the mistakes yourself over time, but it seems it isn't that easy to learn English. I still suggest making that tg where someone gets punished for using bad grammar. I would favorite it.
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TGedNathan In reply to Horus2299 [2012-11-21 19:13:32 +0000 UTC]
No I was kidding, but still......grammar tg? Ooooh!!!!! That is a new idea for me!
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Horus2299 In reply to TGedNathan [2012-11-21 19:23:13 +0000 UTC]
I mentioned something similar before, maybe you forgot...? Oh well, it seems I got your attention this time.
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ConnieEdogawa [2012-11-17 20:59:07 +0000 UTC]
you did know he was gonna edit in text at some point in the future, right?
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TGedNathan In reply to ConnieEdogawa [2012-11-17 21:38:47 +0000 UTC]
Now I do! I over saw it.
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