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I shook her upI dissed her to my anger
She didn't change from the last time we met
I flipped that letter, page over page as I found myself deluded in this enmity
"We held ourselves in an iron grip
Fearing her that she might take us home
She said,"Now my sweethearts, swear to me"
We're paralyzed, to the bottom of our hearts
She began to retract us out of our anxiety
I know, at that time
Our souls are hung up to her pulleys."
She is a magic herself, I know it
I put my bravery in front of my fears
I wash up my fears with my tears
Then I go off with my gears
I'm going to shake her words out, for good
God, bless me now
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Comments: 5
MoxieMora [2011-06-10 12:03:18 +0000 UTC]
I love poetry sets. Fleshes it out, giving more depth and perspective to them all.
Smashing!
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th2ndchmst In reply to MoxieMora [2011-06-10 12:22:17 +0000 UTC]
that's why I love them too. Actually I've been writing a short story, which each of the scenes are written poetically
Anyway thanks!
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MoxieMora In reply to th2ndchmst [2011-06-10 17:18:48 +0000 UTC]
That sounds fantastic! Hope you share here.
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th2ndchmst In reply to MoxieMora [2011-06-10 23:48:07 +0000 UTC]
of course I'll share all five here, the third and fourth's still in the making though haha
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