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Published: 2018-04-30 03:11:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 328; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 2
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Some made him Angry, so he attacHere's another drawing from me! I tried some... new things but messed up on others, like the hair, and the visor which I was supposed to have, soooo I improvised.
Also the sword is the length of the sheath, I focused too much on the design that I forgot the length. I always seem to to that but I'll improve Γ²3Γ³;/
This is my design as well, I'd say it's a good reference for me! except the frowning part and crying part XP
Anyway, Enjoy
If you have any advice
PLEASE tell me
I really would like constructive criticism, other types, Well
Yeah.
Pikachu belongs to Gamefreak
Andrew belongs to me
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Well, not bad, I gotta say, but then again, from Diego's remark, I could agree... the anatomy and proportion could use a bit of work, and I see you're trying to develop your own style...
Then again, just keep practicing and somehow, improvement could be made... so far, coolio!~
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Thanks! I'll definitely try to work on that. I'm still working out the very basics atm
I will and thank you so much!
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no prob pika-pal!!~ ^^
Keep it up!
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I will, thank you so so so much QwQ
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>w< *pikahuggles*
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Whoa! heh X3 * big pikahuggles*
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it might be just my ocd but the background shading looks a bit off :T still looks nice tho! ;3
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It seems lazy that Iβd just write βDitto with the below commentβ, unfortunately I had the exact same thoughts as it.
Although, I want to give you (bonus) points for effort. You tried some new stuff and while it didnβt exactly come together as you might have hoped, you still branched off and did something out of your comfort zone.
Here: take deez points.
*Throws text box containing: β+3 effort points!β *
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Oh thanks tons! I do really appreciate, I do my best
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Well then, if that's the case let's start
What you would need to consider is firstly have a sketch of the anatomy on your drawing.Β
Second of all, some part seems good, however it can be even better. Other thing is looking for visual references, due to the fact that some parts looks a bit odd in perspective.
Third, is maybe how you make the part that Andrew draw his sword/dagger, personally, it looks good, but I can't recognize if he is holding with the blade facing up or down.
That's all the point that I spot so far and that I spot easily in your drawing. Otherwise it's clear the effort on that drawing.Β
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Yeah I put... a ton of effort into it 
I truly appreciate ur comments, it does help me see where I need to work on. It's very hard for me. I also struggle lots with drawing angles and perspective so I'm working at it, and the sword is just me struggling how to make it look like I'm holding it backhanded
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