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Published: 2017-08-22 14:19:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 1035; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 0
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Description "There was only one thing I remember... well, more like, never forget... I was walking around with this Corporal, we were both scouring the battlefield for any wounded ponies the initial waves might have missed. As the Corporal is checking this disabled tank nearby, he calls out to me from behind it and he screams, 'Holy Shit!' for all the world to hear... I walk over to check what's going on... and..."

"It's okay, Mr. Richards, take your time..."

"There were... two... two mares... they just sat behind the tank... clutching each other like they were facing the Reaper himself... There was another mare behind me... she was dead... just... motionless in a puddle at the bottom of a crater... I don't know why I kept staring at them... but I saw all their coats... their manes... almost the same damn colors..."

"...they were sisters... weren't they?"

"...one of 'em looked at me straight in the eye... the look of utter horror on her face... while she clutched her sister... she was waiting for me to... to just shoot her... It... I... it was, I think... the first time I started... getting... openly emotional...

"...in hindsight... I wasn't upset because of 'em... I was upset... at who they reminded me of... my damn brothers... could only see their faces on those ponies... seeing what I had become...

"But... after a moment, I remembered who I was... and I took those ponies calmly back to the aid station. They got a ticket out of the war... and all those brave bastards that charged us that day... they deserved a break."

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This was the reason I didn't do ATG for the past two days. It took a while to complete (no thanks to school) but I like how it turned out. It's not my most favorite piece I've done, but it's definitely up there. I also got to screw around with humans again, which was surprisingly easier than the ponies. The lighting in this one was heavier than what I had done before, so it was a neat learning experience.

However, I want a scanner so very badly. Using a scanner app on an iPad is not advisable unless you're cheap and broke. But, you gotta work with what you got, I guess.

Fun times... now, if you'll excuse me, I should get back to ATG.
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Comments: 16

kildeez [2018-10-28 18:49:18 +0000 UTC]

Is this that Balefire story you're teasing on your profile?

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The--Commandant In reply to kildeez [2018-10-29 02:39:47 +0000 UTC]

This was for an older story of mine, but thematically speaking, it will be excruciatingly similar, and will definitely have moments like this. 

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kildeez In reply to The--Commandant [2018-10-29 02:43:50 +0000 UTC]

Ahh, where are either of these stories?

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The--Commandant In reply to kildeez [2018-10-29 02:47:32 +0000 UTC]

They aren't representative of what I'm able to write nowadays, but they're the only stories I've got set in this particular universe.

(BLITZ is a bit of a cringe fest, so I'd be wary. CoA is a lot better, but still needs some serious revisions.)

www.fimfiction.net/user/58851/…

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PattonDude [2017-12-29 19:20:40 +0000 UTC]

Dang, I like the American soldiers you drew

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The--Commandant In reply to PattonDude [2017-12-29 19:43:30 +0000 UTC]

Well, they aren't exactly American, they're soldiers from my story

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PattonDude In reply to The--Commandant [2017-12-29 22:23:34 +0000 UTC]

Oh, I see

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DecemberBreezee [2017-09-05 20:36:27 +0000 UTC]

I swear your stuff is absolutely stunning! 

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The--Commandant In reply to DecemberBreezee [2017-09-05 22:33:58 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!! I'm glad you think so!

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DecemberBreezee In reply to The--Commandant [2017-09-06 04:01:21 +0000 UTC]

Hell yeah

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The--Commandant In reply to DecemberBreezee [2017-09-06 04:29:31 +0000 UTC]

What'd you like about it most?

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DecemberBreezee In reply to The--Commandant [2017-09-06 18:53:34 +0000 UTC]

I kind of really like the shading, the sketchiness, and the way you combined humans and ponies, you did really good with the ponies emotions as well.  

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The--Commandant In reply to DecemberBreezee [2017-09-07 02:14:08 +0000 UTC]

Thanks again!

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DecemberBreezee In reply to The--Commandant [2017-09-07 04:54:21 +0000 UTC]

Always welcome love the story behind it too, it's a wonderful touch! 

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ninjachristian [2017-08-22 14:26:45 +0000 UTC]

Wow, you did a really good job. The combination of writing and the drawing is really good. genuinely impressed!   

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The--Commandant In reply to ninjachristian [2017-08-22 14:33:29 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! Glad you like it!

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