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Published: 2015-05-28 02:21:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 1998; Favourites: 63; Downloads: 15
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Description Tauriel explores a beautiful underwater coral reef in the serene sea :3

This idea was originally meant to be a collab with however due to computer issues she was unable to do her half....thus I offered to do everything o3o  

I hope you like it!

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MRace2010rebirth [2015-05-28 17:09:32 +0000 UTC]

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Since you're enabling critiques for this...:3

This drawing is not bad. It has things that are actually pretty good but the reef turned out so...bad. I don't want to go harsh there (if I do sorry ;-; ) but it seems like it came from a low quality picture, really. I think you tried to give some depth to the reef (juding from the fact is blurred) but that doesn't really give the effect you wanted...because it made everything look so cheesy. Probably making it detailed but more blue-ish would have done it. Now I don't know what did you do after I left the stream but if you had given more time to detail the coral reef (it's a pain but still it's required for a good one >.<) and didn't blur it it would have turned surely better. Not to mention...what is that small white outline? It looks...strange...and kind of out of place. I don't know what you were going for with this so I can't say anything much.

But now comes the good! The rest turned out really nice! The character is very clean and the shading is pretty neat like always (even the shadow of the face turned less heavy than I thought. I have to change my mind e.deviantart.net/emoticons/let… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="395" title=" (Lick)"/>) but what I seriously love of this girl is...her swimsuit...GOD DANGIT HER SWIMSUIT. IT'S SO FREAKING COOL!!!! If I was a girl I WOULD WANT ONE LIKE THAT <3.
Good job on the eyes too, I love how they turned out!

The rest of the ocean also turned out good. I really like the lightning effects you gave to the sea and the fishes and the bubbles give a nice effect! The coral reef might ruin the feeling alot but still the water turned out awesome x3

So yeah, coral reef aside, good job with this B e.deviantart.net/emoticons/let… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="395" title=" (Lick)"/>

EXPLANATION THINGS:
Vision: It looks good but then the coral reef is......eeeh
Originality: You tend to make alot of underwater pics with girls...I can't rate this that high, sorry ;-;
Technique: (5+4.5+0.5)/3 = ....
Impact: The coral reef (again) penalizes this one alot...too bad, the rest has a really nice impact

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The-B-Meister In reply to MRace2010rebirth [2015-06-03 18:45:59 +0000 UTC]

Sorry for just replying to this  
I honestly have to agree with most of the points you bring up. Most of the effort was put into Tauriel herself rather than throughout. The background was very disappointing....then again coral is complicated to draw.
Backgrounds are one of my weaker areas when it comes to drawing and unfortunately I tend to cut corners when it comes to this  
Ive been trying to think of ways on how I can improve on the quality of work as of late and I think it has to do with anatomy and shading. I feel theres not enough depth when it comes to shading.....like the drawing seems "flat".
Anywho with that said, thank you so much for taking your time to critique this piece  

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MRace2010rebirth In reply to The-B-Meister [2015-06-03 21:10:54 +0000 UTC]

Hmm...since you tend to focus on the character and not so much on the background, why don't you try to do some practice with backgrounds alone?

I'm pretty sure that nearby your hotel are some good landscape spots that are eye-candy (I mean, it's Bahamas
Then I don't know if it might help alot but if you try to focus on backgrounds this problem should gradually disappear (but it takes a long time. Backgrounds are different from one another :<)

I'm sure you can do good at backgrounds if you do enough practice ^^

And also don't worry if you posted this reply now, it's fine x3. Thank you

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Vyctorian [2015-06-12 02:40:38 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful work!~

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The-B-Meister In reply to Vyctorian [2015-06-12 12:16:29 +0000 UTC]

Thank you <3

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Vertical-Misfit [2015-06-02 15:53:17 +0000 UTC]

is she mad?!
Hasn't she seen all these sharks around here?!

nice pic man

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The-B-Meister In reply to Vertical-Misfit [2015-06-03 13:58:51 +0000 UTC]

Mad? Nah....it's perfectly legit uvu
Sharks dig chicks in Galaxy bikinis XD

Thanks bro :3

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Albinotiger21 [2015-05-28 20:43:29 +0000 UTC]

Love the pose :3

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The-B-Meister In reply to Albinotiger21 [2015-05-28 21:24:54 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! ^^

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Adamiro [2015-05-28 05:47:01 +0000 UTC]

Wow! It's really amazing! The character looks awesome and the background is wonderful! Epic!

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The-B-Meister In reply to Adamiro [2015-05-28 20:16:04 +0000 UTC]

Aww thank you bud !! 
Though im disappointed with the background ;v;

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Adamiro In reply to The-B-Meister [2015-05-28 20:17:07 +0000 UTC]

Why? It's very great job You're welcome!

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KwangRae [2015-05-28 04:26:41 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful!
Nice job!

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The-B-Meister In reply to KwangRae [2015-05-28 20:16:12 +0000 UTC]

Thanks bud! ^^

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KwangRae In reply to The-B-Meister [2015-05-29 01:00:46 +0000 UTC]

Anytime!

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Ari-Dynamic [2015-05-28 02:42:18 +0000 UTC]

Excellent backgrounds. x3 I love the ocean, and beneath the sea. :3

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The-B-Meister In reply to Ari-Dynamic [2015-05-28 14:48:53 +0000 UTC]

The background couldve been better Looks so cheesy to me XD 
Thanks man and I concur about the sea :3

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KniightSkye [2015-05-28 02:24:48 +0000 UTC]

Omg omg.  Yus my  mind has been fully blown. Like everything its like amazing!!
❤️❤️❤️
the coloring is amazing
the background wow
nd the galaxy looks so pretty on her Eee <3 thank you B this is purf x3 
i ll have a request done for you soon c:
thanks again <3333

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The-B-Meister In reply to KniightSkye [2015-05-28 14:47:51 +0000 UTC]

Awesome! Objective completed! >.
It was a pleasure to work on this for sure! ^^ Would draw her again in the future
Youre quite welcome Skye

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Temari-Brynn [2015-05-28 02:22:59 +0000 UTC]

I really love that bathing suit! X3 It was still super awesome to watch~!

Also I still need help with water lighting when you have time  

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The-B-Meister In reply to Temari-Brynn [2015-05-28 14:46:21 +0000 UTC]

It's a Galaxy swimsuit that Skye requested hehe 
Also thank you so much for joining my stream <3 It was a pleasure for you to join as well as everyone else :3
I know I kinda helped already but if you need additional help, then ill try my best to do so

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Temari-Brynn In reply to The-B-Meister [2015-05-28 20:17:40 +0000 UTC]

You helped perfectly Thank you again for all of your help. 

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The-B-Meister In reply to Temari-Brynn [2015-05-28 20:19:42 +0000 UTC]

Teach me your ways as well please ;v;
*constantly pokes you until you help*

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Temari-Brynn In reply to The-B-Meister [2015-05-29 02:57:55 +0000 UTC]

>w< Okay okay, just message me on skype whenever you want. Just ask and I shall try my best!

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