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Published: 2004-08-13 04:27:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 56; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 5
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You were my gaurdian,My angel,
But before my eyes,
Your wings grew dark,
Grew tattered and grey.
The colour of my exsistance.
You hurt me,
Cut deep,
Scared.
But like a fool,
I grasp at false hope.
You clamed it was for me,
I never truely believed,
But i made myself,
Think it was true.
I wanted it to be true.
i have been lieing to myself,
But so have you.
My false hope,
built up false trust.
Your wings had,
Grown white once again,
But now your true,
Self is revealed.
Your wings are those,
Of ravens.
Blacker then mine,
Have ever been,
But mine are broken,
I'm crippled,
From the blow,
That you dealt.
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Comments: 4
HurtByHerHeart [2004-08-13 09:14:27 +0000 UTC]
I like the way you've used wings and ravens and kept the theme going through the piece!
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the-devil-herself In reply to HurtByHerHeart [2004-08-16 00:56:41 +0000 UTC]
Thanx i really wanted to keep with the angel theme
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jbabygurl711 [2004-08-13 04:49:30 +0000 UTC]
i like how u put ur poems together!! i like this one as well
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the-devil-herself In reply to jbabygurl711 [2004-08-16 00:58:58 +0000 UTC]
thankies! *Huggles!*
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