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This pretty much adds more layers to the surviving, but later dead Tsufruian scientists, Raichi and Musa (Which i suppose that adding 'sa' on Mu in the Bio would work out better) than the series orignally did.
It makes it not only engaging to read, but fun and entertaining to imagine what could've been, so kudos to you here.
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According to the wiki article of Age 740, Myuu may have been a naturally born native of Planet M-2 before he came into contact with Baby which turned him into a Machine Mutant.
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That's complete speculation on their part, and obviously doesn't fit the changes I've made.
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Actually I think it may originate from one of those manual things, like GT Perfect Files. They just haven't sourced it yet. Just saying.
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I'm fairly certain there's nothing about that in the GT Perfect Files, or later guides like the Chozenshu.
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I think it's best to look it up.
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I love a lot of your ideas and i feel like it does make sense for Dr. Mu to have a tsufru counterpart but i feel your concepts related to the tsufru and saibamen sorta shrink the world a little. I prefer the saibamen as creations of some unnamed saiyan scientist because its creates a interesting topic for exploration with saiyan culture and while it predates the concept it does fit with the idea that not all saiyans were warriors like Gine would later on.
As for Hatchiyack i kinda prefer it being unrelated to Bebi. Looking beyond their respective origins I think fits since the super computers eventual body made of "grudge energy" and the ghost warriors with bodies made of gas both seem to be derived from some kind of super physics as opposed to the more biological and robotics science that lead to bebi's creation.Β
In the end though it is all preference and I appreciate what your going for by strengthening the ties between the two and despite what I said it does make sense that the scientists behind both Bebi and Hatchiyack would at least be familiar with one another. A more fleshed out version of the war between saiyans and Tsufru is something most of us are interested in.Β
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It is about preferences, but it's not about preference. You may like different aspects from each of the originals versions and prefer them to remain separate, butΒ the series will already have to deal with "doctor creates artificial villain via science" multiple times before the Tsufruians come into play (a TON more if you count mages creating demons). AnotherΒ two unrelated scientists doing literally almost the exact same thing would be extremely pointless. It's a huge waste of narrative time to rehash the same plot again, and again, and again and again. (I'd team up Uiro and Gero too, if Gero's abilities wouldn't render Uiro's motives null.)
I'm sorry, butΒ the time frame allotted by the combined (and contradictory) series of events I have to work with is very short. Even the smartest non-fighter Saiyans wouldn't be intelligent enough to become masters of DNA manipulation required to create Saibaimen. It works out so much better to attribute all the impressive science to Tsufruians (scouters Saibaimen, etc), and have Freeza's organization adopt them then they annex the Saiyans.
I'm not keeping the grudge energy, destron gas, ghost warriors, etc. It's all just Machine Mutants for the project, including Hatchihyack and Raichi's bodies.
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Oh I didn't really take into account the nature of your project or how redundant it might be to keep them separate when taking into account the other scientists that's a very good point. Now that i think about it if you are leaving the ghost warrior and grudge energy stuff then there really isn't much reason not to have Raichi work on Bebi.Β
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Interesting, seeing these two Tsufruian's work together. Β
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Huh. Didn't expect this! So Myu looked great back then. Any reason in particular to use Raichi's remake look instead of the original look?Β
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Because his mustache was worse than Dr. Wily.
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Find the hesitant "Neutral...Evil" to be an interesting touch.
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