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The-Next-Chapter — The Breakdown
Published: 2005-10-26 22:58:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 195; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 4
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Description The sky stares blankly into your abyss

Like nothing, not even a kiss

I hear the voices

Call to my head

"Feel Your Dread"


The Earth will sink

"Scream"

Stop this dream

Surrounded by...


Engulfed in...

...Your sin..?
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Comments: 17

insanity-streak [2005-10-27 12:41:43 +0000 UTC]

nice. the ending is very unexpected to me. i didn't expect you to say your sin, as compared to something else. it flows really well and the imagery is very creepy and eerie. excellent as per usual!

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The-Next-Chapter In reply to insanity-streak [2005-10-27 16:41:08 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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XmelancoliaX [2005-10-26 23:52:07 +0000 UTC]

Neat!

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The-Next-Chapter In reply to XmelancoliaX [2005-10-27 00:30:48 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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XmelancoliaX In reply to The-Next-Chapter [2005-10-27 01:14:23 +0000 UTC]

my pleasure

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Opsimath [2005-10-26 23:18:44 +0000 UTC]

lol awesome it IS thought provoking and..dare I say.. insane lol really good job, I like the way you do things lmao

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The-Next-Chapter In reply to Opsimath [2005-10-26 23:19:47 +0000 UTC]

hehe thanks man lol I like your stuff also

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evnishen [2005-10-26 23:05:01 +0000 UTC]

this is great. is there more to come as it seem there should be more?
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The-Next-Chapter In reply to evnishen [2005-10-26 23:10:13 +0000 UTC]

thanks!!! and not really... i like to make my reader hate me and think LOL

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OniRei [2005-10-26 23:04:54 +0000 UTC]

hmm.... It's quite thought provoking. I like it lots

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The-Next-Chapter In reply to OniRei [2005-10-26 23:09:19 +0000 UTC]

hehe thank you lots!

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OniRei In reply to The-Next-Chapter [2005-10-27 23:36:43 +0000 UTC]

^_____^ no prob! I like your style. Keep it up!

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The-Next-Chapter In reply to OniRei [2005-10-28 01:04:33 +0000 UTC]

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RottenTeacup [2005-10-26 23:01:51 +0000 UTC]

How interesting... I like it.

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The-Next-Chapter In reply to RottenTeacup [2005-10-26 23:03:20 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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RottenTeacup In reply to The-Next-Chapter [2005-10-26 23:04:59 +0000 UTC]

Sure.

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The-Next-Chapter In reply to RottenTeacup [2005-10-26 23:08:44 +0000 UTC]

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