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Published: 2005-10-26 22:58:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 195; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 4
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The sky stares blankly into your abyssLike nothing, not even a kiss
I hear the voices
Call to my head
"Feel Your Dread"
The Earth will sink
"Scream"
Stop this dream
Surrounded by...
Engulfed in...
...Your sin..?
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Comments: 17
insanity-streak [2005-10-27 12:41:43 +0000 UTC]
nice. the ending is very unexpected to me. i didn't expect you to say your sin, as compared to something else. it flows really well and the imagery is very creepy and eerie. excellent as per usual!
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Opsimath [2005-10-26 23:18:44 +0000 UTC]
lol awesome it IS thought provoking and..dare I say.. insane
lol really good job, I like the way you do things lmao
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The-Next-Chapter In reply to Opsimath [2005-10-26 23:19:47 +0000 UTC]
hehe thanks man lol I like your stuff also
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evnishen [2005-10-26 23:05:01 +0000 UTC]
this is great. is there more to come as it seem there should be more?
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mein herz brennt
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The-Next-Chapter In reply to evnishen [2005-10-26 23:10:13 +0000 UTC]
thanks!!! and not really... i like to make my reader hate me and think LOL
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OniRei [2005-10-26 23:04:54 +0000 UTC]
hmm.... It's quite thought provoking. I like it lots
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OniRei In reply to The-Next-Chapter [2005-10-27 23:36:43 +0000 UTC]
^_____^ no prob! I like your style. Keep it up!
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