OniRei [2005-10-26 23:03:50 +0000 UTC]

Dark... eh, not really... looking forward to something?

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insanity-streak [2005-10-25 11:30:01 +0000 UTC]

ah now see this one would have made a great start and a great begining poem! but its good none-th-less, its very much an omen of something to come! its well put, i like the almost seeminly accidental rhyme keep it up!

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DisguisedAgenda [2005-10-25 04:39:23 +0000 UTC]

A singed fantasy,
An ageing sight
A worn down light

You were theblankpoet, but his ideals wore down.. you found you werent so blank a poet after all..

Shakespeare
Poe,
Who would know?

You take on a new identity... but with writings as good as yours, youd never know who it could be...

The next chapter
The book
The pages

these new poems and forms of liturature will open new pages to your life, as well as new pages to poetry itself.. you will make your impact

Open,
Close,
Everything will show

And over time everything will show.. your identity, as well as your poetry and its impact on the literature category itself.

What a great poem to predict your future as a poet. This may not be what you had in mind, but its my interpretation.

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XmelancoliaX [2005-10-25 02:22:28 +0000 UTC]

I wonder if anyone here can read between the lines....
but anyway I would like to look at it this way:
In my end is my beginning.

A lovely "daring" piece, makes me just want to put myself out there and try whatever i want to without fearing, because you never know the outcome.

Thank you for sharing.

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Opsimath [2005-10-24 21:38:54 +0000 UTC]

lol it's awesome and cool.
good job man

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Soldierofmisfortune [2005-10-24 13:51:23 +0000 UTC]

Mm... interesting. Sort of foreboding.
(When first I read the title I thought it might be spoken-word poetry.)

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Feuer-Frei [2005-10-24 13:45:06 +0000 UTC]

Singed isn't the right word to use, but other than that, its pretty good.

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