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Critique please! (spoiler: added a pair of things!)
Basics
Name: Elisha Astra
Nickname: Vettee
Alias: Zero
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Straight
Age: 14
Birthday: 2/11/2003
Star Sign: Aquarius
Physical/Material Facts
Hair: Blonde, straight
Eyes: Green (bionic implants), previously - dark blue.
Build: Athletic.
Notable Features: C-Legs, bionic arm, "101" hindhead tattoo, eyebrow piercing, tongue piercing
Accessories: Mega Stone rosary, taser, laptop
Personality/Preferences
Likes: Pokémon battling, tolerant people, travelling
Dislikes: People staring at him, mention of his biological parents, comparing with abled teens
Favourite Food: Russian cuisine
Favourite Possession: His life itself
Favourite Pokemon: Gardevoir
Birthplace: Littleroot Town
Current location: Mossdeep City
Occupation: Pokémon trainer, data security specialist
Affiliations: former Vor v zakone
Motto: Life shows you the fangs? Smile back.
Hobbies: Rap, electric guitar
Dreams: Be abled, find his special one.
Personality: Cynical, sarcastic
Alignment: Pure Chaotic, 75% Evil.
Despite hacking the Orangix website, Elisha has no problems with law and works in the Kaspersky Lab.
Family/Etc
Friends: Ash Ketchum
Family: Tate&Liza Astra (siblings), Rachel Astra (mother), Jin Astra (father)
Previously: Ai Andersen (mother), Alexander Andersen (father).
Childhood: He lived in Russia until the age of 6, when his family moved to Littleroot Town. After participating in the Hoenn League Elisha headed to Lumiose City, where he rescued a little girl while the Team Flare attack. Unfortunately, he lost his left arm, both of his legs and also his vision. The parents rejected him and put Elisha into an orphanage, but soon he got adopted.
Pokemon Related
Starter: Torchic
Team: Blaziken, Gardevoir, Gallade, Metagross, Noivern, Alakazam
Back-Up Pokemon: no back-up team
Box: All of the Pokémon he caught on his journey
Favoured Type: Psychic
Battle Style/Strategy: Offensive
Team
Male Blaziken
Rock Smash
Blast Burn
Cut
Fire Pledge
Ab: Blaze
Was received as a Torchic at Professor Birch's.
Fem Gardevoir - Ulanova
Thunder Punch
Shadow Ball
Psychic
Moonblast
Ab: Trace
Male Gallade - Samurgashev
Flash
Shock Wave
Psycho Cut
Magical Leaf
Ab: Steadfast
Both were met by Elisha in the Petalburg Forest as a pair of Ralts.
Metagross
Gyro Ball
Earthquake
Ice Punch
Psychic
Ab: Clear Body
Evolved from a Beldum given by Steven.
Male Noivern
Steel Wing
Hurricane
Air Slash
Fly
Ab: Frisk
Was met in the Shoal Cave.
Male Alakazam
Shadow Ball
Psychic
Psybeam
Dazzling Gleam
Ab: Synchronise
Was exchanged for a Dragonair.
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Heyy, this is my oc! (Sprinkle, Ember, Alpha, Omega, Shade and Bane are my OC's too but I haven't finished them yet)
Name: Trinity Ravendaze
Nicknames: Tri, ty
Aliases: none
Gender: Female
Sexuality: Straight
Age: 18
Birthday: July 2nd
Star sign: Cancer
Hair: Brownish blonde, slightly wavy
Eyes: Kinda big, purple eyes
Build: Feminine
Clothes: A robe or a cape, shorts, t-shirt or a dress
Notable features: Shorter than others girls her age, always crying for no reason
Accessories: An eye on a necklace (what)
Likes: Ghosts, Pokémon, her family
Dislikes: Normal things, school, her dead father
Favorite food: None
Favorite Pokémon: Mismagius
Her dream: To become the most powerful Pokémon trainer!
Friends: Sprinkle, Ember and Alpha
Family: Mom, sister Omega, brothers Shade and Bane
Childhood: She was born in Hoenn. She spent her time capturing Pokémon and challenging gym leaders for fun. She was also very interested in ghost Pokémon, so her mom went with her to Kanto to visit Lavender Town (not the G/S/C version, the R/B/Y version). She moved to Kalos with her family when she was 15. She went to Alola to capture some Alolan Pokémon a month ago. (this was also her backstory)
Starter: Mudkip
Favoured type: Ghost
Battle Style: Protect when low HP, use as little items as you can
Main team: Mismagius, Chandelure, Frosslass, Mimikyu, Trevenant, Banette
Backup pokemon: Yamask, Gastly, Misdreavus, Honedge, Pumpkaboo, Sandygast
Box pokemon: all the pokemon she captured as a child, except a few ghost types
MAIN TEAM
F Mismagius
Heal Bell¨
Hex
Thunder
Protect
F Chandelure
Hex
Pain Split
Fire Blast
Protect
Frosslass
Avalanche
Crunch
Ice Fang
Protect
F Mimikyu
Play Rough
Protect
Shadow Claw
X-Scissor'
F Trevenant
Earthquake
Foul Play
Poison Jab
Protect
F Banette
Gunk Shot
Foul Play
Magic Coat
Protect
I'm too lazy to make the backup team x)
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eye on a necklace? It's a Turkish amulet, the nazar
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So I've got several Pokemon OCs
Perseus Rhodes
Name: Perseus Rhodes.
Nicknames: Percy, Pierce, Perce.
Age: 36.
Appearance: Pale skin, curly dark-brown hair, blue eyes, pink lips, soft skin, medium height (5ft-5’3ish), somewhat athletic with dark eyebrows and small, soft, feminine hands. Dresses fashionably. (Ex. White dress shirts or long-coats.)
Birthplace: Olivine City, Johto.
Current Residence: Olivine City, Johto.
Background: Heartbroken after the death of his girlfriend, Clara Croft, Perseus stopped his studies in Alchemy and returned to Kalos. There he stayed in a little apartment in Lumiose City and with the help of a friend named Randall Jekins and also the comfort of his Pokémon he moved to Olivine City, where he was born to get away from the nightmares that had been clouding his mind. He currently is not studying alchemy, though has a ward that he teaches it to who is interested in studying Transmutations and Ultra Beasts that reside in Alola.
Personality:
Lilian Grant Bio Pokemon
Name: Lillian Grant.
Other Names/Nicknames: Lillie, Lil, Lilia, Little Miss, Missuses, The Lady, Miss Lady, Lady L.
Age: 27.
Appearance: Tanned skin, raven black hair, brown eyes, soft skin, 5’5, athletic build – hourglass shape, dark eyebrows, rough/medium hands, dresses casually.
Birthplace: Mauville City, Hoenn.
Current Residence: Mossdeep City, Hoenn.
Background: Born under a wealthy family, Lillian decided to leave all that behind and travel around Hoenn to find inspiration for her novels, she had no interest in inheriting her family’s fortune, though she kept in touch and is on relatively good terms especially with her older brother, Jackson. She’s made quite a lot of money with her novel series and resides in a condo with her Persian in Olivine City.
Personality: Sophisticated and refine, Lilian is very ladylike, she likes to be proper and does things accordingly. She dresses accordingly when events call fo
Randall Jenkins (OC Bio)
Randall and Rose
Name: Randall Jenkins.
Age: 32
Appearance: Peached skin, dark red hair (tomato coloring), soft skin, 5’2, not very athletic, light eyebrows, fairly large hands and dresses fashionably. (Dress shirts, sweater-vests, long-coats etc.)
Birthplace: Lumiose City, Kalos.
Current Residence: Olivine City, Johto.
Background: Randall met Roslyn Hayes and began to date her for several months, even going as so far as to going on a short journey to help his Botany research though the two realized there were too many issues with their relationship and broke it off and became only friends, thus having Rose support Randall in his research and him moving to Olivine to continue his career.
Randall met up with his old friend, Perseus Rhodes as soon as he got back, moving in an apartment nearby his Ranchett so he could have a place to keep his Pokémon. Feeling content in Olivi
(Please don't comment on my Stash, comment here for responses.) And I'd like critique. No one ever comments on my stuff. I'm going to upload them to DA soon, and I'd like to have some opinions - I know they could use some more info and fleshing out, and I'm going to write fan-fics about them eventually, but I have a surgery tomorrow and I just can't afford to do that right now. -Plus I've been sick like for almost two weeks.-Dies-
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This is a great guide for any OC tbh, well done 
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Can I get some critique on this OC?
Basics
Name: Lilinoe Vakencia
Nicknames(s): Short-Stuff,Lino
Gender: Female
Sexuality: Straight like a line
Age: 15
Birthday: 27th Nov
Star Sign: Sagittarius
Physical/Material Facts
Hair: Long,Straight and brown
Eyes: Dark brown and slightly wide
Build: Athletic
Clothes: lilac flannel like jacket,black pleated mini skirt,black tank top,black converse
Notable Features: Birth mark on her face in the shape of a heart
Accessories: Loose black ribbon around her neck and a bag in the shape of a seashell
Other/Etc: N/A
Personality/Preferences
Likes: Spicy food,POCKY,Battles,Catching pokemon,Being with friends
Dislikes: Boring battles,Violence,Unfairness
Favourite Food: Spicy Chilli
Favourite Possession: A Drifloon plushie
Favourite Pokemon: Milotic or Oricorio Baille style
Favourite Other(s): N/A
Hobbies: Exercising,Dancing,Training
Dreams:To Be The Best Athlete In Alola
Personality: Girly,Athletic,Can sometimes be arrogant when battling
Family/Etc
Friends: Hau,Sun,Moon,Gladion,Lillie,Kukui
Family: Mom,Two sisters and a Brother
Pokemon Related
Starter: Litten
Team: Incineroar,Lucario,Midday Lycanroc,Ninetales,Pangoro,Mimikyu
Back-Up Pokemon: Ariados,Sudowoodo,Braviary,Oricorio Ballie style
Box: Oricorio,Oricorio and MORE Oricorio
Favoured Type: Fire and Fighting
Team (Main)
(M) Incineroar - Spice
Fire Fang
Darkest Lariat
Shadow Claw
Toxic
(F) Lucario - Lucy
Metal Claw
Force Palm
Me First
Earthquake
(F) Midday Lycanroc - Rockella
Accelerock
Rock Tomb
Howl
Stealth Rock
(M) Ninetails - Tailor
Ice Beam
Ice Shard
Hail
Frost Breath
(M) Pangoro - Pango
Arm Thrust
Body Slam
Crunch
Brick Break
(M) Mimikyu - Mimiqui
Shadow Sneak
Feint Attack
Play Rough
Thunder
Team (Back Up)
(F) Ariados - Ari
Poison Sting
Leech Life
Fury Swipes
Psychic
(F) Sudowoodo - Wooda
Low Kick
Rock Slide
Stone Edge
Smack Down
(M) Braviary - Bravi
Superpower
Rest
Sleep Talk
Aerial Ace
(F) Oricorio Ballie Style - Bailie
Air Cutter
Revelation Dance
Hurricane
Steel Wing
History/Back Story:
Lilinoe was born in Alola on Melemele Island and her parents were known for exploring many places and finding new pokemon and filling their pokedex with identified and unidentified pokemon.When her father left them Her mother decided to stop exploring.When Lilinoe wanted to become a pokemon trainer and got a starter,Her Mother was quite proud of her and she calls Lilinoe her "Continued exploration"
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Alright, this is a good start. For one, your OC's team is reasonable. One could totally picture an Alolan with that party. I have some points to raise, though:
- How did Lilinoe come to know SuMo's main cast? Not saying that it's a bad idea, but I'd like to see some background behind this.
- Lilinoe wants to be a famous athlete, correct? You could expand on her favourite sports and her sporting habits to, y'know, give her more nuance.
- By extension, Lilinoe's mom is an explorer and she considers her daughter to be her continued exploration. Does that mean that her mom wants her to be an explorer instead of an athlete? That particular part kind of implies that idea.
- Remember, always elaborate! This goes for her personality traits - for example, you could explain her girliness and why she grew up to be girly (or maybe it's just her nature?)
- This is just personal preference, but maybe it'd be a good idea to give the 'Mons more personality and background. I tend to develop those details for my OC's.
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Thanks 🤗 For the critique,I just hope she's not Mary Sue...
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You're welcome - and no, she's not. It's just that there's room for improvement for her characterisation.
Hope that helps!
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Basics
Name: Remilia
Nicknames(s): Rem,Remi
Alias(es): The Musical Fairy
Gender: Female
Sexuality: Straight
Age: 17
Birthday: June 20th
Star Sign: Gemini
Physical/Material Facts
Hair: Black in a Drill Ponytail
Eyes: Pink and slightly slanted
Build: Average
Clothes: Black Lolita Dress with Ribbons Everywhere
Notable Features: slight freckles
Accessories: Ribbons everywhere
Other/Etc: N/A
Personality/Preferences
Likes: Pokemon Contests,Pokémon Musicals,Sweets,Talking in Third Person,and Cute Pokémon
Dislikes: Dragon Types
Favourite Food: Red Velvet Cake
Favourite Possession: Odd Keystone on Earrings
Favourite Pokemon: "Remilia can not decide."
Favourite Other(s): N/A
Hobbies: Breeding for Shiny Pokemon,Performing in Pokémon Musicals,and Baking Desserts
Dreams: To be the best Fairy Type Trainer
Personality: Modest,but she can get extremely cocky in battles
Family/Etc
Friends: Lynn,no one else
Family: mom,dad,and loads of cousins
Childhood: She would ride on her dad's Swanna to deliver eggs to people
Pokemon Related
Starter: Ralts
Team: Gardevoir,Sylveon,Ribombee,Mimikyu,Mawile,Florges
Back-Up Pokemon: Togekiss,Alolan Ninetales,Whimsicott,Granbull,Klefki,Wigglytuff
Box: Eggs upon eggs upon eggs
Favoured Type: Fairy
Battle Style/Strategy: Double Battling
Team (Main)
(F) Gardevoir - Azura
Hypnosis
Hyper Voice
Moonlight
Metronome
Notes: Azura was a shiny Ralts given to Remilia when she was 12 by her parents because they hold a business of shiny breeding,ever since then they have been partners.
(M) Sylveon - Bruno
Fairy Wind
Misty Terrain
Moon Blast
Bite
Notes: Remilia found Bruno as an egg when visiting her cousins in Alola
(F) Mimikyu - Mimi
Substitute
Play Rough
Shadow Sneak
Disguise
Notes: Mimi was given to Remilia as a gift
(M) Ribombee - Boss
Extreme Speed
Moon Blast
Bug Bite
Disarming Voice
Notes: Boss was in the same case as Mimi
(F) Mawile - Yin
Play Rough
Swords Dance
Bite
Hone Claws
Notes: Remilia was trying to find Rock types in Kalos and ended up catching Yin at level 20
(F) Florges - Celeste
Attract
Moonlight
Metronome
Sing
Notes: Remilia was watering plants at Lynn's house and stumbled upon Celeste at level 15
Team (Back Up)
(M) Togekiss - Chubs
Protect
Aerial Ace
Fly
Focus Blast
Notes: Remilia received Chubs as an egg
(F) Alolan Ninetales-Yvette
Curse
Perish Song
Blizzard
Hail
Notes: Remilia found Yvette on Mount Lanakila
(M) Wigglytuff - DJ Tuff
Sing
Swords Dance
Rest
Hyper Voice
Notes: Remilia found DJ Tuff when traveling through Kalos' many forests
(M) Klefki - Alfred
Metronome
Fairy Wind
Swords Dance
Last Resort
Notes: Remilia found Alfred when researching Mimikyu (before she got Mimi)
(F) Granbull - Luna
Bulk Up
Pound
Amnesia
Rollout
Notes: Remilia met Luna in randomly when going to Johto
(F) Whimsicott - Cotton
Stun Spore
Leech Seed
Prankster
Misty Terrain
Notes: Remilia traded a Petilil for Cotton
Box Pokemon
(N/A) Egg - Egg
Egg
Egg
Egg
Egg
Notes: Egg egg egg egg egg egg egg egg
History/Back Story
Remilia was born in Lacunosa Town, and her parents were known for breeding loads of shiny Pokémon. They were very worried about her growing up in a place like Lacunosa,so they stayed in Undella until they had enough money to move to Nimbasa. Rem helped her parents often by traveling to different cities to deliver eggs for for 10,000 Pokédollars each.When they got enough money they moved. Remilia found out what Pokémon Musicals were no wanted in on it,so when she turned 12 her parents bred a shiny Ralts for her that she named Azura. At age 15,she had traveled to Kalos and headed towards Alola. Now,she is pretty laid back and she actually gets paid by her successors by performing and breeding daily.
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I used it again thatdumbkitty.deviantart.com/a…
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Hey! I used your template and I'd like some criticism on my OCs if someone has the time for that :3 (the other ones will come later, I litterally broke my hands writing all this xD)
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also I made a suggestion on something you could add to this template, which is a spot for the pokemon's abilities
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Hey, just wanted to ask if you guys wouldn't mind giving me some critique on my Oc :3
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I really like this template, it's my preferred one
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hope you don't mind me using this again ^^
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Can someone critique my upcoming OC?
Name: Anna D'Ore
Nicknames(s): Annie
Alias(es): Wandering Coordinator
Gender: Female
Sexuality: Straight
Age: 14
Birthday: 19 September
Star Sign: Virgo
Physical/Material Facts
Hair: Short and blonde
Eyes: Dark blue
Build: Average
Clothes: Cobalt blue T-Shirt,black and blue skirt,light grey tights,black Mary-Janes,dark blue felt hat with silver hearts,white scarf
Notable Features: Sweet smile
Accessories: Felt hat
Other/Etc: Kinda short for her age (1,67 cm)
Personality/Preferences
Likes: Pokemon,food,glitter,Contests,being with friends
Dislikes: Loneliness,darkness,abusers,mean people
Favourite Food: Pecha Berry Sandwich
Favourite Possession: White fluffy scarf
Favourite Pokemon: She has a liking towards Togepi.
Favourite Other(s): Favourite color: Blue
Hobbies: training,drawing
Dreams: To become the Top Coordinator of Sinnoh
Personality: Hyper,naive,kind,compassionate,gets easily brainwashed
Family/Etc
Friends: Amber,Tyrone,Autumn,Indie,Melia,Damon
Family: Mother (Stephanie),sister (Ruby),brother (Xander),Dad (Kris)
Childhood: Easy-going and relaxing,she met Amber when she was 5,when Amber moved to Twinleaf Town. They started getting along and are BFFs to this day.
Pokemon Related
Starter: Chimchar
Team: Sylveon,Infernape,Togekiss,Bagon,Lumineon,Roserade
Back-Up Pokemon: Houndour,Haunter
Box: Misdreavus,Ponyta,Oddish,Gallade
Favoured Type: Normal
Battle Style/Strategy: No particular,she loves fighting in any style.
Team (Main)
(F) Sylveon - Yvonne
Moonblast
Iron Tail
Shadow Ball
Toxic
Notes: Anna had had Yvonne since she was an Eevee. Yvonne was given to Anna as a gift for winning her second ribbon. For long,Yvonne refused to evolve,as she found her evolutions not fit for her (Umbreon wasn't for her tastes,Vaporeon wasn't pretty enough,Jolteon was too masculine etc)When Anna went to Kalos though,Yvonne met a new evolution of hers,called Sylveon. She instantly took a liking on it and eventually evolved into one when Anna's life was threatened by wild Houndoom.
(M) Infernape - Goham
Fire Blast
Close Combat
Grass Knot
Nasty Plot
Notes: Goham was Anna's starter Pokemon and her loyal companion through Sinnoh and Kalos. He was neutral at her at first,but he grew to like and defend her as much as he could. Fairly skilled Coordinator Pokemon,but also fierce at battle,he is a jack-of-all trades for Anna.
(M) Bagon - Brandon
Dragon Dance
Flamethrower
Zen Headbutt
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Notes: Brandon was given to Anna by Tyrone's little sister,Bella. Thankful for saving her brother and as well accompanying him on his journey,she gave Anna Brandon. Brandon hasn't showed his ultimate potiental and is somewhat clumsy,but he tries his best!
(F) Lumineon - Luna
Surf
Blizzard
Air Cutter
Ominous Wind
Notes: Luna was obtained in a trade as a Finneon.She instantly disliked Anna and constantly disrespected her,either with disobeying her at Contests (causing many ribbons going to waste) or even ruining her outfit.Eventually,as time passed by,Luna got over her dislike,even though she still sometimes disrespects Luna.
(F) Togekiss - Mimi
Air Slash
Psyshock
Ancient Power
Heal Bell
Notes: Mimi hatched from an egg found in Eterna Forest. It turned out to belong to the royal family of Johto. She was raised to be polite and well-mannered like a princess,but she's ruthless and harsh at battles.
(M) Roserade - Raddy
Dazzling Gleam
Petal Dance
Sludge Bomb
Hidden Power (Ice)
Notes: Raddy was first encountered as a Budew. Due to his timidness,he refused to go near Anna or her friends at all,and was befriended by Goham.That was when he started to follow Anna,Amber and Tyrone around,asking to be caught. In the end he was caught,and evolved into a Roselia during Eterna City's Contest,winning this for Anna. Raddy evolved in Iron Island,while looking for his lost friends,accidentaly touching a Shiny Stone.
History/Back Story Anna was nothing special,she was just an ordinary kid who started out an adventure with her rival/best friend. She got into the business of Tyrone,an outcast,harsh boy with bandage covering one of his eyes. Even though he played hard to get,he followed Anna and Amber around,helping each other. When they messed with one of Team Galactic's machines on accident,they got into a huge mess.In the end,Team Galactic was disbanded and all of them moved on to the Battle Area,where Tyrone hoped to win all Frontier Symbols and the two girls were going to train for the next Grande Festival. Tyrone failed to achieve his goals,and in a fit of disappointment,he left Sinnoh,leaving two of his Pokemon,Gallade and Leafeon for the girls. Anna,after this,left for the Kalos Region,and returned 6 months after the events.
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Can anybody rate mine before I start really developing my two upcoming OCs? The facts i'm certain on are that Gemini is 17, and Calli is 18.
I have an Ace Trainer named Gemini from Unova, she has the same appearance as a Female Ace Trainer from there, but with short pigtails, and her hair alot more messier. She aspires to be a mountain climber (possibly for research, to be a professor's helper, or in museums. ) and if she can't climb mountains, she'll just generally help in Pokemon research! Her team is Glameow, Duosion and Meowstic M, Glameow being her partner. She caught an Espurr very early when she got into Kalos, and she got the Duosion from Wondertrading a Bunnelby!
I also have a non-classes yet named Calli from Alola. He has messy light green hair, blue eyes and an average build. He wears a jumper, jeans and boots since he never did any real activity, and thought the head was cold. He really wants to be an inventor, or known for something. He doesn't want to die useless! His team is Elgyem, Larvesta, Sigilyph and Dartrix, Elgyem being the team leader. The Larvesta was from the Unova Egg, and the Sigilyph was from Kalos. He forgot about his starter, Rowlet, so that's why he's not fully evolved.
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They're great OC's. I feel like they have some great potential.
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this was a lot of help for me, thank you ^^
I used it here: chocolatesweetlover.deviantart…
*If anyone's reading this; some constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated, thank you*
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Basics
Name: Eric
Gender: Male
Sexuality:
Age: 17 (immortal {to extent})
Physical/Material Facts
Hair: light blue
Eyes: Red
Build: thin
Clothes: jeans, yellow shirt, black jacket
Notable Features: The strange, haunting effect when you stare deep in his eyes
Accessories: Headphones on neck
Other/Etc.: Occasionally a thin light blue tail with light blue ears
Personality/Preferences
Likes: Starf Berries
Dislikes: All the teams (Rocket, Magma, Aqua, ECT.)
Favorite Food: Starf berry surprise (his own creation)
Favorite Possession:
Favorite Pokémon: (YOU CANT DO THIS TO ME!)
Favorite Other(s):
Hobbies: Battling, cooking, healing
Dreams: To help keep the regions at peace
Personality: cool, calm and collected. However, if you deliberately hurt anyone (his Pokémon in particular) he either set Ruby or tear you a new one himself
Family/Etc.
Friends: All
Family: Mother: Mew Father: arceus Siblings: almost all Pokémon…EVER
Childhood: (cut due to memories being erased thanks to Darkrai and Cressilia
Pokémon Related
Starter: Rayquaza (you’ll see why soon)
Team: (*=Shiny) *Rayquaza, *giratina, *Kyurem (black forme), Latias(ruby), *Victini(Star), *Genesect(Crimson)
Back-Up Pokémon: *Jirachi? (Nightshade) *spiritomb(Lavender) *Latias(Amber) *Regigigas *Volcrona(Rose) *Dialga(Sapphire)
Favored Type: Dragon (I guess? Not much for favorites)
Battle Style/Strategy: Strategy plan during battle
Team (Main)
*Male-Rayquaza
Dragon Ascent
Ice beam
Thunderbolt
Dragon pulse
Ability: Air lock (Mega: Delta Stream)
Item: Sky plate
Notes: Rayquaza was given as a birthday present from mysterious people (his parents, duh) after waking up on an island with its egg and a beach house. When he hatched, he grew to full size in almost 3 days! Rayquaza is thought to be the first Shiny rayquaza and the last of his species. Well, that is until Destiny Deoxys…
*M-Giratina
Shadow force
Earthquake
Aura sphere
Dragon pulse
A: Origin: levitate Altered: Pressure
Item: Griseous orb
Notes: This particular Giratina was not only his savior from A Team Rocket Experiment (I’ll get into it later), but he’s really nice and can cheer anyone up!
*M-Kyurem (Black form)
Freeze Shock
Fusion Bolt
Dragon pulse
Focus blast
A: Normal: Pressure B: Teravolt W: Turoblaze
I: NeverMeltIce
Notes: Really cold-hearted, but its thawing. Slowly, but surely
F- Latias(ruby)
Surf
Ice beam
Mist Ball
Dragon pulse
A: Levitate M: levitate
Item: Latiasinite
Notes: Eric’s psycho lover…what, more? Fine. Ruby wasn’t like that in the beginning. At first, she had run away from a group of Rocket members after her Brother stayed behind to give her time. However, she didn’t escape unscathed. Her wing was busted, and after 3 long days of flying, she crash landed on Eric’s island. After healing her to the best of his ability, she decided to stay with him until she found her brother again. Luckily, a friend Eric made later on had her brother, but at that time, she was 100% fixated on staying.
*F-Victini(Star)
Bolt strike
Fusion Flare
V-Create
Psychic
A: Victory star
I: Charcoal
Notes: Star is a Disturbed and shy soul. She lived alone in a small grotto with a pond, and her only friends were Celibi and a Zorua. One day, team rocked found their hiding spot and attempted to take star for infinite power. She fled and her friends stuck around for her, killing her Zorua friend in the process. She flew smack-dab into Eric’s chest, and hid behind him as he took on the 2 grunts. Defeated, they snarled and fled. Star now stays at Eric’s side 24/7 and trusts no one else, except his final team member, Crimson
M-Genesect(Crimson)
Techno Blast
Magnet Bomb
X-scissor
Fly
A: Download
I: chill Drive
Notes: One of 2 surviving Genesects from the P2 Lab. When The other escaped, Crimson stuck with Eric to Explore this new world to him. He’s the only one who can actually speak English (everyone else uses telepathy)
Team (Back Up)
F-Jirachi? (Nightshade)
Doom desire
Draco meteor
Dark Pulse
Phantom Force
I: Pentagram Tag
A: ???
Notes: This is a Demon… No Seriously. She grants wishes at any time she wants in exchange for a fragment of your soul. The only reason Eric caught her was so she wouldn’t cause harm anymore (at least not to innocent people.) Type: Dark/Steel
*F-Spiritomb(lavender)
Phantom Force
Toxic
Dark Pulse
Venoshock
A: Wonder Guard
I: lum berry
Notes: Remember that Rocket Experiment? Yeah, it was to make invincible Shadow Pokémon, and I don’t mean shadow as the ones on Oree, I mean Shadow as if Bound to your shadow. So shes not contained in any pokeball, and shes not allowed to stray too far from Eric, as their connected.
*F-Latias(Amber)
Surf
Ice Beam
Mist Ball
Dragon pulse
A: levitate
I: Soul Dew
Notes: Ruby’s exact Counterpart… And her sister! She still has a crush on Eric, Shes just not as visible as her Younger sister. Her shy demeanor gets in the way sometimes, but she really cares about everyone
*???-Regigigas
Crush Grip
Earthquake
Ice punch
Fire Blast
A: Huge power
I: Silk Sand
Notes: This particular Regigigas was sealed away because of the immense power it had. Eric Revived and fought it, earning its trust.
*F-Volcrona(Rose)
Fire Dance
Quiver Dance
Silver Wind
Air Slash
A: Levitate
I: insect plate
Notes: Rose was so lonely after being in some ancient ruins for so long, she jumped at the instant chance to leave. Shes rather quiet, keeping to herself, but that doesn’t mean she won’t jump at the instant to make new friends
F-Dialga(Sapphire)
Roar of Time
Flash Cannon
Earth Power
Aura Sphere
A: Pressure
I: Adamant orb
Notes: Sapphire (unlike her brother) is incredibly kind. She gets along with her brother, Both palkias and pretty much everyone. She Does get a little sassy sometimes, but the more than makes up for it in her dedication in helping people out and finishing A battle
History/Back Story
As you may have guessed by now, Eric is a Child of Both Arceus and Mew, yet he has a human form as his basic form. That will change however is he sneezes a number of times. Each sneeze gives him a quality of his mew form (yes its shiny). Sneeze enough and, well… I think you get the point. He can’t change back instantly either, so he has to sleep it off. He can however, transform into various Pokémon at will. He does have a Arceus Form, however, he can’t summon it at will. He’s only done it one time, and he nearly destroyed everything within a 500-mile radius. (he got Pissed the f*ck off) He can’t remember his past, and his parents won’t tell him anything. He’s conquered the leagues, all the way from kanto to Kalos. He really is, champion of all reigons
(tell me what you think plz)
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Not being rude but, this is a real big Gary Stu (Like a Mary Stu for a boy.)
You should have atleast 1 Legendary on his team, Not an entire team of it.
His past IS interesting, but it's very wonky. Being part of a Team Rocket Heist sort of thing is cool. not being a captive.
Also, being the son of two legendary POKEMON who CAN'T BREED is pretty weird, Esp since he's human.
You can fix him by perhaps making his mother/father interested in pokemon breeding, and thus used a ditto perhaps to mess with their son?
Also, his team is TOO OP. Cut it down to REIGON pokemon and not all FULLY EVOLVED. Esp since he's 17! He shouldn't have beaten the league fully yet, or be champion.
I don't know if you were kidding or not with this, but you have made the Gary Stu of the week. Sorry if I came off mean.
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Nah, its alright. I had a feeling one or two people may find mine a bit awkward to read about. The team part i cant change, it pains me too much, as i had built it up from 7th grade. I could change my back up, but thats about it. About Mew and Arceus, ive always imagined Mew as female and Arceus as male (or both) and then they got it on to create the other legendaries. Also, he isnt human. Eric may have a human form, but it was due to needing to hide who he truly was (apart from him sneezing). last thing here, He began his journey when he was 12. he finished the leagues by the time he was 17. Thats...pretty much all i wanted to say. Not trying to hate on you're criticism, and i know my bio has it problems, but i felt like i tried my hardest when coming to make this thing. So...Thanks! By the way, what was your Favorite part about this?
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Oo. I understand the species part now. And by all leagues, it takes about 1-2 years per reigon, so going upto Kalos that's 5 years of experience, which also makes sense! (I find the getting it on bit hilarious aswell.) The backstory is just the iffy part to clear up when you make the OC really yours. ;w;
My favourite part about it was def the way you described his appearance! You really nailed it. ;w;
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You're welcome ;w;
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Forgot to ask: What is your favorite pokemon? Either out of my bio or your personal favorite, i dont care.
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Aa, out of your bio it's def Jirachi. I'm a sucker for stars.
And a personal one is Glameow. ;w;
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i used parts of this in mine, it's still a work in progress
pokemon-fan-32.deviantart.com/…
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Just why aren't there any literal Pokemon OC templates around here?
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i was wondering the exact same thing. why can't i have a template for my Doduo oc? NOTE: i do not have a doduo oc, it was merely an example of what i am looking for in a pokemon template
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True, true.
Pokemon Trainer templates are way too overdone. It's like the Pokémon themselves are totally unimportant within the fandom!
I, for example, wanted to make a descriptive data sheet of my Sylveon OC Orchid, but still can't find proper templates.
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what about this one? www.deviantart.com/art/Pokemon…
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I've seen. But it's not entirely what I'm looking for ^^'
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Basics
Name:Emerald C. Diamond
Alias(es):The Wandering Trainer
Gender:Male
Sexuality:Straight
Age:10(Pokemon White 2:Emerald Saga),11(LeafGreen),12(Heartgold),13(ORAS),14(Diamond),15(X),17(Sun and Moon)
Birthday:April 20 1999
Physical/Material Facts
Hair
Eyes:Emerald Green
Build:Lean and Muscular...?
Clothes
Notable Features:Long legs and short torso
Personality/Preferences
Likes:Training,family and friends,Pokemon,food,peace,traveling,meeting friendly people,flying in the sky on a Pokemon,spring(season)
Dislikes
Favorite Food:"Favorite?"
Favorite Possession:*shrugs*
Favorite Pokemon:"I don't know."
Hobbies
Dreams:Flying to infinity and beyond,becoming a Pokemon Master,World Peace
Personality: Emerald was a wild boy back when he was very young, but became civilized and mature; even though he still has bits of pokemon personality from back home. He can sometimes be a bit impulsive, overconfident,and mostly impatient, but he's a nice guy once someone gets to know his free-spirited,calm, confident, determined, kind and compassionate, and laid back nature.
As a Pokemon trainer, he gets competitive and likes having fun battles. But there are those battles he doesn't get satisfied from the trainers that do tactics he doesn't like or enjoy. He hates seeing people and Pokemon alike suffer from people that cause them to suffer and is determined to protect innocent people and Pokemon even if it means risking his life.
Family/Etc.
Friends: Maylene Quartz(friendly rival and childhood friend),Morganite Finnegan(rival and childhood friend),Professor Juniper,Maylene(mentor),Brycen(mentor),Korrina(mega evolution mentor),Professor Oak,Professor Elm,Professor Birch,Professor Rowan,Professor Sycamore,Cynthia,Diantha,Steven Stone
Family: Swanie Brooks(mother)
Pokemon Related:
Starter
Team:Raichu[Bolt]/ Samurott[Samurai Jack]/ Dragonite[Dragonna]/ Venusaur(-> Mega Venusaur)[Tropics]/ Snorlax[Munchy]/ Aegislash[Excalibur]
(This took me nearly all day,so this all I got so far)
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*Black,Spiky
*Blue Cap
*Battling
*Pikachu
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You shouldn't be able to. This is someone else's journal entry.
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autumnalexie.deviantart.com/ar… Thank you for this template
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Sweet template, bro! But, perhaps consider adding a few things to the Pokémon section? Like, more information on them; such as their ability, their nature, level, etc. Things that can really bring the Pokémon to life! Other than that, I don't have any critiques for you! Great job!
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