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Published: 2013-08-28 20:58:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 14469; Favourites: 145; Downloads: 0
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It begins. Rainbow Dash, the manager of the infamous Rainbow Factory has heard the "rumors" of what goes on within the factory walls. Wanting to end them she offers Celestia the chance to bring in inspectors to see if the rumors are true or not. Hoping to get information out of her, Celestia sends Rainbow Dash's friends; Twilight, Pinkie, Rarity, Applejack and Fluttershy. Though her friends don't see what the fuss is about, Fluttershy is the one most worried about this tour, after all, as a pegasus she has heard the old rhyme "In the Rainbow Factory, where fears and horrors come true. In the Rainbow Factory, where not a soul gets through."Next:
Fluttershy and the Rainbow Factory p. 2
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They should be careful, lest one of them get shrunk, one turned into a giant blueberry, one sucked through chocolate tubes, and one thrown down the garbage chute.
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Where not a *single soul gets through.
But you probably didn't have enough space. I understand.
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No, I just forgot the word Single is all. That was more my bad cause I could have made it fit.
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"Nopony ever goes in...and Nopony ever comes out."
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Im listening to rainbow factory and when i saw the last part it sung that part LOL
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That's actually quite scary...
...But cool at the same time! For some reason...xD
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Yeah I actually was a bit freaked out at it, too! But its pretty cool in my opinion.
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I'm amazed that this "Rainbow Factory" horror story hasn't given me nightmares yet.
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Says a lot about yah XD
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Oh, does it? :-D And what do you think it says about me, pray tell? ^^
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You're desensitized from such things.
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In some ways, I guess you're right.
But the whole idea of MLP gore/horror/slashfic and art still unsettles me.
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Still ... I'll be sure to see where this webcomic goes. What is Rainbow Dash's true face?
When TS objected that the beast she was speaking about died off hundreds of years before, RD just eluded the question. Why?
Β What will become of Rarity? What will become of the others? If it is indeed a slaughterhouse, how many unfortunate ponies were murdered there?
Do Celestia and Luna know about this?
Questions that will find their answers only if I keep on reading your comic.
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ThisΒ has got toΒ be a spin-off of Charlie and the Chocolate Factory. Don't get me wrong, this looks very well done and the crossover idea is great!
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Spin-off? Well I think the word you're looking for is "spoof" "parody" and/or "crossover"
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I've not even seen the 2nd page but I already love it, this art is so amazing
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On the first page? Well as long as you like it. As for the story to it I hope you like it just as much if not more so.
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I've read all the pages and the story is also pretty good
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lol i'd walk in through there and come back out...im not scared of rainbowdash. she's a pony from a kid's show. and she's meant to be a couregous, uplifting character. not a physco retarded serial killer...
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Technically she's not a serial killer. As far as we can tell she's only killed 1-2 ponies.
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nah, 1 time is enough, your a murderer if you do it one time.
but two times is enough, you killed 2 ponies, your a CEREAL killer...but three times...you'll be a serial killer. so.Β
sorry for calling her a serial killer,
she's a cereal killer.
she might have killed frosted flakes, too.
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If she killed those frosted flakes she would be a cereal killer. To be considered a serial killer you need to kill 3 or more within a month with down time (a break) between each killing. The FBI thinks it should be 2 or more but that's them. I'm just sayin though cause as memory serves she killed only one and possibly Scootaloo. There wasn't really a break between as the killings cannot be from a single event which that was. We don't know if she personally killed any others.
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she probably did kill other ponies. remember the song?
"ponies come in and never came back out"?
she probably did kill other ponies, considering that what thy chant says.
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I know it well. But that doesn't mean SHE did any of it. It's a high possibility but she's not the only one working there and since she's a manager she doesn't dirty her hooves much.
Now a rainbow's tale isn't quite as nice
As the story we knew of sugar and spice
But a rainbow's easy once you get to know it
With the help of the magic of a pegasus device
Let's delve deeper into rainbow philosophy
Far beyond that of Cloudsdale's mythology
It's easy to misjudge that floating city
With it's alluring decor and social psychology
But with all great things comes a great responsibility
That of Cloudsdale's being weather stability
How, you ask, are they up to the task
To which the answer is in a simple facility
In the Rainbow Factory, where your fears and horrors come true
In the Rainbow Factory, where not a single soul gets through
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"where not a single soul gets through"
even if she's not a serial killer, she is a criminal, and should be arrested and have her factory shut down.
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Ever read the sequel "Pegasus Device"?
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pegasus device.
rainbow factoryΒ
i dont care.Β
if your killing poniesΒ
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You gonna answer my question?
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Well if you read the sequel you'd know what happens
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Yeah... Everything is gonna be juuuuust fiiiiine...Β
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Perfectly fine. Nothing could possibly go wrong.
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Wow you captured the atmosphere will good. Despite it looking nice the description makes it a quite creepy.
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That's the plan. After all having an outside that screams terror might be too obvious. Don't judge a book by it's cover as it were. Glad you like it so far though. I should update every 1-2 weeks.
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