gina1995 [2013-02-18 00:56:02 +0000 UTC]

hey i just wanted to say i posted a comment to yu a little bit ago but idk i just made a profile thing today so still dnt knw how to use this really but my name is gina and i just read you TOUCH poem and honestly dude yu hve a amazing gift that poem really touched me thank you for posting tht honestly
<3

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Chinchachki13 [2011-03-31 12:33:18 +0000 UTC]

I love this! went through and fixed your spelling errors by the way...i included the fixed one below (i did not do anything other than fix spelling). Again it is spelled Poem! *grins* you have to practice spelling it right!

You start at my face,
Brushing my hair away from my eyes.
The soft tips of your fingers like velvet on my skin.
You move down,
Running your hands along my shoulders,
Down my arms,
When you reach my hands you toy with my fingers.
You love doing that.
You wrap your strong arms around my waist,
Pulling me close to you.
Your hands run along my ass,
Slowly putting just your fingers into the pockets of my jeans.
You push me back, so I'm sitting on the bed.
You put your warm hands up my shirt,
Pulling it over my head.
You caress my stomach,
Kissing it gently.
You know how much I hate it.
I think it's fat and ugly.
But as you pull away you say "Your beautiful sweetie."
You go lower,
Massaging the inside of my thigh.
You move one of your hands back up,
Running along my shoulders again.
I tilt my head to the side,
Leaving it exposed to you.
you leave a light trail of kisses on it.
Then you stop.
You lay behind me and pull me next to you.
I face you.
We're both turned on and longing to touch one another.
But we don't.
We know its not time yet.
We will lay there until ten.
You have to go home.
I hate it when you leave.
But until then we just hold each other.
I'm thinking about the wonderful loving feeling,
That your touch brings.

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PuffMonsta [2011-03-29 23:55:32 +0000 UTC]

This is f*cking amazing!!! Dude I love this its not full of lust and harshness, but tenderness and adoration.

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