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TheBareSheet — an ocean only grows
Published: 2015-02-26 16:00:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 431; Favourites: 45; Downloads: 0
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Description a girl may shed tears
for those parted by the sea;
accumulation.

a lady can sob
in veins of wine, sweeten and
settle his sorrow.

a woman will weep
when a home leaks, leaks of a
future ne'er to be.
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Comments: 4

haphazardmelody [2015-04-02 05:41:22 +0000 UTC]

So well executed. It can be hard to tell a story in haiku, and you've done it wonderfully in this little series - saying a lot with so few words.

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TheBareSheet In reply to haphazardmelody [2015-04-02 07:42:13 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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Nihil-Invictus [2015-03-02 01:50:21 +0000 UTC]

Or a future never to be.

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TheBareSheet In reply to Nihil-Invictus [2015-03-02 02:18:10 +0000 UTC]

 

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